An/ Hello potential reader this is my first story so please don't be to harsh and say i suck but i would love constructive criticizm beacuse well as you can see i'm not that good at writing or english so yeah. But thanks if you read and please review and help me with the spelling and everything! Enjoy! ohh and the italics is his thoughts!


It was a sunny day outside and Naruto was very happy, beaucse he had just had some of his favorite ramen at ichiraku's.
He was wandering around the village and then he spotted Saskue holding hands with Sakura and he never though he would see the day were Saskue would not be mad at Sakura, Naruto momentarily wondered if the world was ending before he walked up to them.
"Hi! Saskue Sakura what are you doing?" he pretty much screamed at them. Saskue just shrugged and said "Shut up dobe."
Sakura answeared "Saskue took me on a mid day date!" she said exitedly and let out a glee of happiness.
"Then i should not be bothering you. Bye!" He decided he would go to the forest and maybe to the clear.


In the forest!


I'll go to the clear i think.
So he made his way over to the clear but he stopped by the bushes by the side of the clear, beacuse what he saw surprised him. He saw Hinata sitting and singing for herself he did'nt see her face beacuse she sat with her back to him but it was no doubt Hinata. Her voice did'nt sound like an angels but it was soothing in some way and he could make out some words.

I've spent forever wondering if you knew...

I was enchanted to meet you... "Naruto-kun"

He almost fell backwards after he heard that, how could someone like Hinata seem to like him or maybe he was just wishing to hear that. When he started to doubt he came more and more unsure that she said that.

But then Hinata said "Why can't Naruto see me?" "Is it my hair he maybe likes it short?" "It propably is that my face is so pale and boring and i don't use make up." Hinata started to ramble up things why he did'nt like her and cried quitley while doing so.

But after the 6:th thing Naruto came to his senses and walked forward to her.

"N-naruto-kun she stuttered?"

He just walked forward to her and kissed her and whispered those things are the things why i like you.


An/ Cheesy and bad ending but fear not i may get better with the help of you if someone even reads this... Anyway did you like it propably not this was very short and my first story just a oneshot but hopefully i can get some reviews and maybe some help with spelling etc... BYE!