hey guise! okay i thought alot about what u guys said an i decided to right a new story this time i got my friend to help me with writing and stuff i really beleive this is my best work yet, it will only bea few chapters long but its editited! okay hopeyou enjoy AND OH i WILL be finishing my tryande fic but later i want to practice righitng first so this is the story i iwll be expanded my abilities with OKAY THANKS! hope you enjoy i spent a lot of time and really considerered what you all had to say okay hope you like! 33

WRATHIN'S POV

iwas Deadwin'gs last son. i was born from the fires of hate. i was angy. i would show them. i as going to be the meanest biggest coolest most bada** person EVER. But that all changed when i emt Anduirna. Anduina was the prettiest sweetest most girly girl id ever met and i wanted her. i wanted her so bad. Not even my dads fire could burn hotter then Anduinas hotness. She was HOT. Lkike STEAMING hot. And i was just.. plane. i was planer then bread. She was the goody too shoes guril next door, and i was the missunderstood bada** with a bike. A bike id use to win her over. A bike i was like revving up right now. i bike id use to win her heart.

ANDUIN A'S POV

i heard the sound of a trike revving up behind me as i turned around i saw it was a boy who looked like he was covered in mud until his bike kinched closer and ai realized he was just black "hey" he said to me "hey" i said back BOY WAS HE CUTE i thought but slapped myself "whyd you slap yoursefl?" he asked "oh idk i thougth of something stupid haha" i laughed trying to liten the mood a bit OMGOSH IM SO STU[PID i slapped myself again but this time mentally

Wrathin's POV

wow anduina like slapped herself. Infront of me. For no reason. SHE IS SO HOT! I cannot believ she just laspped himself in my presence "i am not worthy" iwhispered "what" she asked back "oh nothing i forgot to turn off my stove ill talk to you ater i guess" i said and speed away. Omg. i was so stupid. i cant believe that happened. i cant be;ieve myself.

Anduina's POV

What just happened? i just saw the cutest most badass little black boy ive ever seen in my life and he just uprite sped away from me on his bada** trike he was like only the sexyest man ive ever see n in my LIFE! "omg i need to go tell dad" i skweeked i was so happy!

i ran too dad's throne room "DADDY DADDY OM GOOOOSH YOU WILL NEVER BELIEB ME WHEN I TELL YOU THIS" i screamd and he like looked at me really wierd "what is it anduina?" he asked and i screamed again "omg!i like, only just TOTALLY met my soulmate!" i screamed again "stop screaming" dad said but i ignored him "if you liek this boy so much invite him over" he said and i screamed agai n "LOVE YOU DADDY!"