Hey guys, it's my for Sword Art Online Fanfiction Book, tell me what you find here that needs improvement.

Also, Commander of Blood's Oath
Has helped me on some lines.

Enjoy.

Kazuto Kirigaya woke up exhausted, he sat up and yawned. He was too tired to get up so he decied to go back to sleep, until when he heard Asuna "Kirito!"
His eyes widen up, he quickly got up and ran to the bathroom.
"Asuna you okay?!" Kazuto looked a little frightened, "Kirito, I hope you're not going to be mad but I am pregnant" Asuna showed Kazuto the pregnancy test.
His face showed shock, "Y-You are P-Pregnant?" "I-I am happy..."
Kazuto didn't know what else to say, Asuna giggled at the reaction of Kazuto. Kazuto still didn't move or say any words. Asuna didn't want to wait for Kazuto to go back to his normal self,
"We can't wait here all day, we need have a lot of things to do today" Asuna told Kazuto "Umm okay, can we go to the cafe to get breakfast first?" Kazuto asked, "Sure"

Asuna and Kazuto went outside and walk to Agil's Cafe, a young man walked right up to them, "Hey, aren't you Kirito and Asuna?" He asked, the young couple nodded. "Well then, I want to invite you to battle a boss with my guild , would you like to help?"
"Sure, we always like to help people, am I right Kirito?" Asuna said, "I guess so" Kazuto frowned. "Well it's nice to meet you two heros" He then walked away, they continued and made it to Agil's Cafe and saw Sinon, Klein, Lisbeth, and Silica sitting in chairs having breakfast. Agil saw the two married couples walk in his Cafe.
"Welcome!" he greeted, "What may I get for you?"
"Two bagels and a coffee" Kazuto ordered, "Alright!"
Kazotu and Asuna grabbed a chair and sat with the group.

Breakfast for Asuna and Kazoto was served, All of them looked at the couple, silence floating around the room.
"Ahem, how are you two doing? What's new?" Klein started a conversation while drinking his coffee, "Well there is one thing, umm" Kazuto and Asuna looked at each other thinking if they should tell about the news, "Well ummm..." Kazuto didn't know how to start it, "COME ON GET TO IT!" Klein yelled out, "ASUNA IS PREGNANT!" Kazuto shouted out Klein spitted out his coffee with shock, the whole group was in shock. After the phase of shock, the phase of happiness came everyone shouted "Congrats Kirito and Asuna!"

Happiness spread around the Cafe, Sugu came in and saw that everyone was celebrating.
Sugu came and interrupted the celebration "Umm sorry about interrupting, but what is this about?" she questioned.
All of the group looked over to Sugu, "Well T-" Kazuto was cut off by Sinon "Kazuto told us that Asuna is pregnant!" Sinon told Sugu.
Sugu just stood there with her jaw opened and eyes widened, "Well, why not all of us go to ALO?" Klein said,
"Yeah! We will tell Yui that she going to have a sister" Asuna agreed.
Sinon, Klein, Agil, Lisbeth, Silica, Kirito, and Asuna went outside of the Cafe, while Sugu yet haven't moved a muscle, "You know you're going to get flies in there if you don't close them" Agil told Sugu.

In Alfhiem Online

The group made it to Asuna house, Asuna opened up her inventory and summoned Yui,
"Mama, Papa!" Yui shouted out with joy, Asuna smiled, "Yui I have a surprise for you!"
"What is it?" Yui said with curiosity, "You're going to be a big sister!"
Yui showed a big happy smile when her mother told her she is going to have a sibling, she then hugged her parents.
Sinon giggled, "We don't have all day to watch! we have a battle to do!" Leafa said.

The whole group went to fight, in a forest full of wonders and fairys. "Are we there yet?" Silica asked
"Nope!" Klein answered, They all continued to walk through the forest and then they made it to a cave, "We're halfway to the boss room" Kirito told the group "It takes forever walking to a boss room!" Sinon complained as her voice echoed through the cave. Asuna on the other hand, started to feel queasy. "Guys, can we just come back another day?" Asuna asked softly, all of them looked back at Asuna, "Why?" Sinon questioned.
"Because I don't feel..."

They all realized that since Asuna is pregnant she is going to have some sick moments, "Alright, Tonkii!" Leafa called Tonkii
The big white, multi-eyed creature arrived. The group hopped on Tonkii, "Alright buddy, hmm to the Forest!" Leafa commanded Tonkii,

Tonkii took off and the whole group saw the Alfheim World, "Hey it's the Ancient Forest where I met Onii-Chan!" Leafa pointed out, "And that's where I found Yui" Kirito joined looking over his shoulder where Yui is and smiled. Tonkii arrived at the Forest where Asuna's house is located, they all got off and went inside Asuna's house. "Thank you very much, I appreciated" Asuna said,
"No problem, whenever you need us we will be here" Sinon said. Then they all logged off and continued their real world life.

TO BE CONTINUED