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Agony. That's all he felt. He couldn't even lift his eyelids.
Much like the rest of his body, his mind refused to cooperate. The only sound that came to his sensitive ears was a light dripping from nearby.
'Where am I? What happened?'
Suddenly, elusive visions – or maybe memories – came to the forefront of his mind. A booming roar of sound; bright light; screams cut short.
Interrupting his thoughts, a tremor sounded through the earth, causing white burning pain to travel through his torso, and a few small flecks of dust and debris to fall to the ground nearby. Though emotions travelled through his mind a mile a minute, there was one that stood out from the rest that was vaguely familiar.
'What is this feeling?' he asked to himself, sure he'd felt it before on at least a few occasions. Despite feeling like his thoughts were swimming in water, the answer came to him.
'This is fear', he concluded, as his mind faded swiftly into unconsciousness once more.
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Hi.
So, this is my first story on this site. I've been reading on fanfiction a lot for the last few years, but never got around to writing anything of my own, despite how much I thought about it.
I just thought I'd give you some warnings now, so I don't have to again.
So. Yes, this is a slash. I love the Naruto franchise, but one pairing I've always loved was Kankuro and Kiba, and frankly, there's just not enough of it, as far as I'm concerned. So, I thought, 'screw it, I'll do it myself.' Now we just have to see how this turns out.
As for the rating, I'm keeping at at T just now. This is mainly because, if I'm honest, I don't know exactly where I'm going with this. I have a general outline in mind, but I haven't thought through all the details yet. Problem is, I'm always changing my mind. I see new things, I decide to change something. I just sit there and think for a bit, I decide to change something. Listen to a song, I decide to change something. It's a problem I'm always having with my writing. I read through stuff I've written already, and I change just about everything.
I guess, in that respect, posting it chapter by chapter on here will be good for me. If people read it, I won't be inclined to change it.
I'm totally open to constructive criticism. So, have at it.
Also, I'm British. Scottish, to be exact. I won't be trying to use any colloquial language, but if I do, let me know. Sometimes I do it by accident.
I suppose I should put this here, too.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto
