Background of the story

Let me just explain a few details before I start with the story.

When people die their soul gets sent to the warp, which will end up being the lunch of demons residing in the warp.

Now when Sanguinius died during the Horus Heresy, his soul gets sent to the warp. Of course this story wouldn't just end there but... let's say being a Primarchs gives him limited control in the warp.

Now suddenly found himself in the middle of hell at his most vulnerable state ever, one wound naturally assumes that it is natural to want flee from such a place.

And indeed he does.

Now here I insert another theory, that vast distance between places in real world also means something in the warp.

Evidence? the light of the Emperor is dimmer in far away places like the Eastern Fringes than in places like... Terra? The distance traveled between places depends on the amount of time one stays in the warp.

So Sanguinius flees from the hordes of demons that are trying to have him for lunch. (I just imagined Slaanesh demons saying 'come here big boy')

Anyway so I established that distance also means something in the warp.

So the next part I want to establish is that different parts of the warp is different from other parts of the warp.

Since the warp is the manifestation of intangibles like emotions and beliefs and as I established before that distance means something in the warp.

So different places in the warp have different... temperature?color? Flavour? I would imagine that the warp near Tau space is very than the warp elsewhere.

The Tau is located at the eastern fringes at the edge of the galaxy. since it's less populated and they are distributed very sparsely, the warp incursion on the area is naturally less. In fact I don't think the Tau has encountered Chaos yet.

(Just wait until demons start taking over their AI and starts an AI rebellion. Hehehe(not really a Tau fan))

Anyway so Sanguinius fled. He fled from the Slaaneshy demons that he ended up in another galaxy.

The warp here is more or less calmer, due to the fact that it's less insane and everyone is very positive. Also I want to add that the funky physics of this place has something to do with the warp, Kinda like the Orks and their nonsense technology.

(random ass liquid made by 2 rate scientists randomly mixing chemicals gives you super powers)

Sanguinius of course didn't emerged unscathed. Being to OP is bad for most story if not done correctly.

Sanguinius then emerged from the warp at a near by habitable world that happens to be called 'earth'

Now here comes another explanation, as to why there are Humans in this place.

During the Golden Aged it is speculated that humanity was extra galactic. As for Apes? Hmm... let's just say that humanity went back in time (cuz biggest Warp storm ever) devolved into apes then evolve back to humans. If the need a rises to explain apes in the future.

Story begins next chapter

So what you guys think about this story?