the gaurdian of the hall

chapter one

"Bye honey." My mos said as i was walking out the door."bye." i said. I was just starting my journey. I was going to professor birch's lab. I was going to get a torchic. I'm jack just the avrage 16 year old. I notised a strang truck outside the lab. i walked inside only to find brich not there but there was also some old guy standing in a mess of papers. "i'm here." i said. "oh hello you must be jack you are probably looking for brich im afraid he's left the regien to get more starter you see weve almost run out." oak said walking over to me and handed me 6 pokeballs one big the others small and a pokedex."heres your torchick pokeballs and pokedex." oak said." how did you know i wanted a torchic?" i asked. " i didnt its all we have left , you got the last one also i hope you don't mind that it's a female again last one." oak said."i dont care what gender it is as long as it's friendly." i said as leaving. i was walking down the path to the next town. so i let the little bird out for company. it was light blue with a tuft of darker blue feathers on top of its head."tor-totchic." it said while looking around for what she aws going to battle." hello i'm jack your trainer nice to meet you." i said. "chic-tor-chic." it said. " you need a name don't you?" i asked


(GG) ok i thaught this was ok but people its basically my first story that i belive is going to be ok so please leave a comment and dont forget...

(jack) NO FLAMES

(GG) how'ed you get here?

(Pyre) same way i did .

(GG) what the hell?

(pyre) when do i get in this story?

(GG) next chapter.