First story yes it is bad
This will turn into a Naruto story no I do not own Naruto
1586 future site of the leaf
Looking over the cliff Phoenix felt joy. This was her land and no one would take it away from her. This was the wild lands where humans never dared to go and she was a half dragon with silver hair and pale skin. Though she did not have scales she had wings the same color as the sunset.
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Phoenix's pov
I looked over the sun that had only just began to set I felt tired so I slept.
Dream sequence
She was running away from someone with blood red eyes. She did not know their name but they looked familiar to someone who she knew. She was then falling her wings could not save her and she knew it she woke up.
End dream sequence
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Dad's point of view (Phoenix's father)
I watched my daughter while she slept and felt my heart throb her mother had died 500 years ago and she has been without a mother or friends that whole time. I ofter feel sorry for my daughter Phoenix.
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Yes it is short but I lack inspiration for it also it's a prologue so you know Phoenix's origins at least a little review give me ideas (god knows how much I need them).
