Tell me what you guys think of my new fanfic, I want to see if anyone likes it, just to see if its worth continuing.
Alice left a year ago, due to the killing and blood shed that hasn't stopped. The boys in wonderland have been coping with her absent, but do miss her. They've been having small meetings, wondering if they should go after her. Another month later, a meeting lasted longer than planned.
"No, I'm tired of not seeing One-San!" Dum cried. "Yeah, yeah I wanna see big sis!" Dee agreed.
"You little brats, you don't know how hard it is to find someone who is in the other world, and might not be around anymore!" Elliot growled.
"Shut it, I don't want to think about that! My love is out there and I know she is waiting for me!" Peter said, dreaming of embracing Alice.
"No one is waiting for you." Blood muttered as he drank his tea calmly.
"Oh please, you know you miss Alice too, don't act so calm." Vivaldi growled.
"Everyone misses her; I mean she was one of the best outsiders." Gowland added.
"You're a perv old man; you had the hots with her as well as all of us." Boris rolled his eyes, and Gowland hit him upside the head.
"We should find her; I want to see her expression when she sees us." Ace mused, his eyes closed and his head on the table.
Julius sighed. "You are a nuisance."
Pierce was hiding in the corner, and Boris glared at him, needing to take his anger out on someone, but just sat still.
Nightmare was crawled in his chair, a blanket over him. "I guess we can go, I mean, it would be nice to see her." He said, and grey nodded behind him.
Nikole's POV
"Ugh, Butler I'm bored!" I yelled at the man wearing a black tuxedo.
Butler sighed and dragged me outside by my shirt. "I despise your parents for leaving me here with you." He growled.
"Oh Butler you love me." I smiled. "Plus, I hate living in this stupid empty mansion. When is mom and dad coming home?" I asked, lying down in the grass, looking at the wide back yard.
"6 months." He answered.
I sighed; I wish I could have gone to Jamaica with them. But I guess it's there 3rd honeymoon, so I guess they need the half a year away from their annoying kid. "Can Jamie come over?" I asked, and he laughed, leaving me outside.
"I'll be back in an hour." He yelled before he shut the door. I nodded. What to do, what to do. Jamie was like my sister, been friends for 4 years but it felt longer than that. We met at a football game, and she heard I lived in a mansion. At first I thought she was using me for my money, but found she also lived in a mansion about a half an hour away from me. We hung out every now and then. I lay in the grass, looking at the sky.
A moment or two later I heard some cussing and footsteps. I sat up and looked behind me. A whole group was walking, randomly walking around in the backyard. Bunnies, a mouse, a cat ears, guys with weird clothes, a girl with a weird dress, a guy with a sword, and a guy with an eye-patch? Cool, I smiled. I got up and brushed off my black skirt. "Yo." I yelled at them and they stopped. "What the heck you guys doing in my backyard?" I asked, walking closer. Man they were hot.
They looked at me, wide eyed. "Do you know a girl named Alice?" They asked in unison.
I raised an eyebrow then looked away for a moment. "No." I shrugged. "Sorry guys."
Then growled and cussed under their breath. They started to mumble at each other, they looked exhausted and about to pass out.
"Need a place to crash weird people?" I asked, popping my head in.
They started to mumble to themselves again, then the blond and brown haired boy with mouse ears and mouse tail with a little hat slowly came up to me. "Can you help me get away from the cat?" He whispered. I looked at the punk, pink haired, cat ears and tail boy with black and pink clothes with a fluffy scarf thingy. He looked at me.
I smiled. "Yeah, I'll protect you from him." I reassured with a smile.
"What? You can't ask her for protection, that's not cool." He growled, getting ready to pounce on the mouse.
I pulled the mouse behind my back and watched the cat, waiting for him to do something, but he only growled.
The man with the amazingly cool hat sighed. "Please, don't cause this lady and harm." He pleaded, coming to my side. I looked up at him, for a moment, actually liking him. I smiled. He grabbed my hand and brought it up to his lips. "We would love the help of a beautiful lady, and rest at your wonderful home." He smiled, and then brought his lips to my ear. "We could share a bed also." He whispered.
Click. That set me off. I lowered my head for a moment, and then kneed him in the gut, making him fall to the ground. "I thought for a moment, wow he's hot, now, I hate your guts." I smiled with a little giggle. I walked off, holding the mouse's hand towards my house. The mouse laughed a little while walking next to me.
NOBODYSSSS POV
Nikole twitched, and everyone saw it. Her eyes stayed calm, but her body went crazy. She looked at Blood, who seemed a little nervous, and kneed him in the gut. Everyone went silent, but was somewhat amused about the action. Nikole took Peirce's hand and walked toward the house. Peirce was happy, getting to hold the girls hand. Everyone stood there, watching the blond walk away. Her blue eyes were the only thing they could think of, it wasn't Alice of course, but maybe it was something better, something more interesting. Her Black skirt moved around in the wind, and her shirt was tight around her figure. She was something and the guys could see it, Vivaldi even blushed a little. No one ever had the guts to do something like that to Blood.
Blood coughed a few more times and stood, brushing off his clothes. "She's interesting," Blood mused, loud enough for the rest to hear. "I like it." He sighed, adjusting his hat and walking towards the hat.
The rest looked at each other. "She's pretty." Boris shrugged, walking after them, Dum and Dee at his side. The rest side and went along.
Hey guys.. I'm trying this new fanfiction. It all depends on you guys. Please let me know what you guys think, I might now keep writing. Anyway. Jus to let you guys know, I am not a fan of Blood, only sometimes, SOMETIMES! But hardly ever. He annoys me….. and he's way to cocky for me.
