The Return of the Legendary Super Saiya-jin(LSSJ)

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"But father! We must stop him! He'll destroy us all" " It doesn't matter! He's tougher than hell to beat! S-" "KING! KING! YOUR WIFES-" "SHUT THE HELL UP! I'M TALKING TO MY SON!" He paused for a brief second. " Sorry, Troku, can't get a damn minute to talk to you." "…Sorry father I didn't know about- "FRIEZA FRIEZA! A GIANT SPACE SHIP IS HURLING AT OU PRECIOUS PLANET! FRIEZA!" "WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU! SHUT THE HE-" He paused. "Well lets go Troku. Might as well there is not anything else to do except eat which I do not want to do .

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