Hiya guys! This is re-newed first chapter to Soul Eater Inpune 'cause the original first chapter was just awful, so please enjoy! Thanks for reading and please leave a review if you like this version better! Thanks!

0_0 ~Whale Face


Maka sat with her head laying on her desk. She was so sick of eating everyone talk about some stupid video game called SAO or something like that.

"Hey Maka? You okay? You look kinda spaced out." Tsubaki said sitting down in the small word-covered desk next to her friend. Tsubaki was dressed up in her usual cream-bage, ankle-length dress with a star on one side of the chest. A combat boots that stopped mid-leg. One, dark brown knee-high sticking, and her hair was pulled into the usual high-ponytail with a dark brown band.

While Make was wearing her usual red and black plaid mini skirt that stopped mid-thigh. A white, button-up blouse with puffy sleeves. A light yellow sweater-vest, bulky black and white buckle combat boots. Thick white gloves and her hair was pulled into the usual pigtails.

Maka's head shot up and her large emerald green eyes came to focus on Tsubaki's beautiful face that was covered with concern. "Oh, yes, of course! I'm fine Tsubaki! Don't worry about me." Maka faked a laugh.

Tsubaki sighed as she examined the younger girl, "Are you sure?" She ran a gentle hand through her silky raven colored hair.

Make nodded, flipping her ashen blonde locks around. "Positive!"

"I can't wait to play the new version of the game, it'll be awesome!" One of their classmates exclaimed to another.

Maka mentally groaned.

"Maka, are you sure your okay? You're making that face again." Tsubaki said in a motherly tone.

"Yes, Tsubaki! I'm fine, okay, don't worry about me!" She faked another smile.

"Maka, Tsubaki! Hey guys!" Elizibeth Thomsan and her little sister, Patricia, yelled at the same time. They were both dressed in a bright red, sleeveless turtleneck, a white tie, a pair if navy blue skinny jeans and black knee-high combat boots.

"Hey Liz, Patty." Make said nodding her at to them.

"Yeah, hey girls. You better hurry and sit down. The bell is about to ring." Tsubaki warned.

"Yeah, okay! Talk to you guys at lunch!" Liz said pulling her younger, shorter, blonder and chipier sister away.

"I bet there's way more to do in the new version too!"

"Yeah!"

Maka sighed in annoyance.

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Maka gasped in surprise as the school bell rang loudly. Tsubaki looked at her and mouthed, 'Are you okay?'

Make nodded and mouthed back, in fine, it just surprised me.'

"Okay class, open your books to page sixty-four." Professor Stein said riding into the classroom on his spinny chair


Kazuto smiled at his little sister. "You ready to head out?"

"Yes, let's go." She replied.

"Okay, c'mon!" He said walking over to the front door and pulled it open.

"'Kay!" She said back, following him out the door.

"Are you excited for The Egg?" Kazuto asked.

"Yeah. It sounds really cool from what you've told me." His little sister replied, pushing a lock of dark hair behind her ear.

Kazuto and Suhuga walked side-by-side down the road. Suhuga shifted her backpack on her back and flattened out her school uniform. Suhuga was just about to break the silence when they heard, "KAZUTO! SUHUGA! WAIT UP!"

Kazuto and Suhuga's heads shot around and they saw Asuna running towards them.

Kazuto grinned brightly. "Oh, hey Asuna!" He beamed.

"Hey Kazuto, Suhuga! Thanks for waiting!" Asuna exclaimed.

"Oh, yeah, no problem." Kazuto replied.

"Yeah, no problem." Suhuga mumbled.

Asuna smiled, "I hope you two had a nice morning."

Kazuto nodded to his girlfriend. "Yeah. We did. What about you?"

"Great, thanks!"

'Um, guys. We gotta go, before the last bell rings." Suhuga pointed out.

"Oh! Yeah," Kazuto rubbed the back of his head, "let's go!"

Kazuto grabbed Asuna's hand and bolted ahead.

"Hey! Wait up!" Suhuga yelled running after them.


So yay! There it is! The fixed version of the first chapter. I know it's shorter than before but there was just too much extra stuff that made no sense and didn't go along with the story at all. So please leave a review and whatever and have a nice day, or evening of night or whatever. Bye!

0_0 ~Whale Face