About me: no Idea first thing I know I have to say is I am a punk and I am
proud. I don't really know anything else to say except many of my stories
are all blood shed and no romance. As I listen to the casualties and you
read my story lets get on with it dammit.
The cold-blooded assassin
Chapter 1: Let there blood stain the ground
Kenshin: *running at a fantastic speed, slaying the 3 men he was hired to kill. He sheathed his sword and jumping onto the roof of the closest market, tears shedding from his eyes as he thought of the family members of these defense less men*
*The next morning kenshin walked out of his inn surprised to his friend Zar- roc, Zar for short. *
Kenshin: "a friendly face for once. How's it going old friend."gh
Zar: "not to bad but I am here on a job and I thought you might be able to help me."
Kenshin: *grunt * "more business. I hate business you know that. Before we talk about this job can we get some sushi from the shop around the corner? I hear they have amazing raw fish."
Zar: *laughs * "still thinking about your stomach and not about the business."
*3 hours later after breakfast *
Zar: "can we get down to business yet?"
Kenshin: *grunts * "fine lets get this over"
Zar: "I was hired by some one that wouldn't give me his name or even let me see his face to kill a group of troublemakers called DRUNKEN-CHINESE- SMURFS."
Me: "you are thinking to your self who the hell would call them selves that and this kid has no imagination at all but the drunken Irish smurfs is my band so I just tweaked it so it was Chinese."
Zar: "don't do that ever again while I am speaking its very rude."
Me: "you want me to rewrite this story Zar because I swear I will and I wont put you in it so back off"
Zar: *shrugs * "lets get on shall we"
Zar: "these trouble maker's aren't kids either there men the same age as us and they have a gallet gun."
Kenshin: "dammit Zar you are so lucky I am nice."
*Later that night around 2 o-clock *
Kenshin: "lets get this over quick I am tired and I want to go to bed."
Zar: "yeah what ever lets go"
*Both of them cover their faces with a black cloth and unsheathe their swords. Then kenshin jumps out and slits the throught of the guard. Kenshin was becoming so good at his job that he didn't even give the victims time to scream any more. He opened the door closest to him and entered followed by Zar. They came along many men but none of them were any trouble. Finally they reached the last door to the house and opened it. Inside were two men. One large man with 1 large red sword behind his back and another man that was sitting in a chair. Kenshin was drawing his sword but Zar stopped him. *
Zar: "I can take it from here old friend." *He drew his sword and instantly was in front of the large man. The large man drew his sword. The started to fight swing after swing, sparks were everywhere and it seemed as though Zar was losing. Zar was losing strength fast and he knew he was going to die. After another 5 minuets of this battle Zar was struck and was bleeding badly. Kenshin hurried over to his friend. *
Zar: *blood spilling from his mouth * "I should of let you fight. Look what happened now *laughs * I am going to die. Just do one thing for me make their blood stain the ground tonight" *with that he was dead. A tear trickled down kenshin's cheek. *
Kenshin: *drawing his sword. He stepped forward and swinging in a downward motion, cutting through the bodyguard's large red blade straight through his head. The bodyguard was in two pieces a left and a right side. His blood splattered the ground as the body hit the floor. Kenshin quickly killed the small man in the chair. He had done what his friend had asked. He picked up Zar and left the house."
Me: "ok I done this chapter some one read it and then review it please. Later I am out and don't do the, I think you suck review do the, it wasn't that good you should prob be more descriptive in your battle scenes."
read my story lets get on with it dammit.
The cold-blooded assassin
Chapter 1: Let there blood stain the ground
Kenshin: *running at a fantastic speed, slaying the 3 men he was hired to kill. He sheathed his sword and jumping onto the roof of the closest market, tears shedding from his eyes as he thought of the family members of these defense less men*
*The next morning kenshin walked out of his inn surprised to his friend Zar- roc, Zar for short. *
Kenshin: "a friendly face for once. How's it going old friend."gh
Zar: "not to bad but I am here on a job and I thought you might be able to help me."
Kenshin: *grunt * "more business. I hate business you know that. Before we talk about this job can we get some sushi from the shop around the corner? I hear they have amazing raw fish."
Zar: *laughs * "still thinking about your stomach and not about the business."
*3 hours later after breakfast *
Zar: "can we get down to business yet?"
Kenshin: *grunts * "fine lets get this over"
Zar: "I was hired by some one that wouldn't give me his name or even let me see his face to kill a group of troublemakers called DRUNKEN-CHINESE- SMURFS."
Me: "you are thinking to your self who the hell would call them selves that and this kid has no imagination at all but the drunken Irish smurfs is my band so I just tweaked it so it was Chinese."
Zar: "don't do that ever again while I am speaking its very rude."
Me: "you want me to rewrite this story Zar because I swear I will and I wont put you in it so back off"
Zar: *shrugs * "lets get on shall we"
Zar: "these trouble maker's aren't kids either there men the same age as us and they have a gallet gun."
Kenshin: "dammit Zar you are so lucky I am nice."
*Later that night around 2 o-clock *
Kenshin: "lets get this over quick I am tired and I want to go to bed."
Zar: "yeah what ever lets go"
*Both of them cover their faces with a black cloth and unsheathe their swords. Then kenshin jumps out and slits the throught of the guard. Kenshin was becoming so good at his job that he didn't even give the victims time to scream any more. He opened the door closest to him and entered followed by Zar. They came along many men but none of them were any trouble. Finally they reached the last door to the house and opened it. Inside were two men. One large man with 1 large red sword behind his back and another man that was sitting in a chair. Kenshin was drawing his sword but Zar stopped him. *
Zar: "I can take it from here old friend." *He drew his sword and instantly was in front of the large man. The large man drew his sword. The started to fight swing after swing, sparks were everywhere and it seemed as though Zar was losing. Zar was losing strength fast and he knew he was going to die. After another 5 minuets of this battle Zar was struck and was bleeding badly. Kenshin hurried over to his friend. *
Zar: *blood spilling from his mouth * "I should of let you fight. Look what happened now *laughs * I am going to die. Just do one thing for me make their blood stain the ground tonight" *with that he was dead. A tear trickled down kenshin's cheek. *
Kenshin: *drawing his sword. He stepped forward and swinging in a downward motion, cutting through the bodyguard's large red blade straight through his head. The bodyguard was in two pieces a left and a right side. His blood splattered the ground as the body hit the floor. Kenshin quickly killed the small man in the chair. He had done what his friend had asked. He picked up Zar and left the house."
Me: "ok I done this chapter some one read it and then review it please. Later I am out and don't do the, I think you suck review do the, it wasn't that good you should prob be more descriptive in your battle scenes."
