Because I'm bad with beginnings there will be none. And I'm also not from english heritage so there maybe grammar mistakes.

So it start at a ball being thrown for congratulations the new president of the republic and a lot of important people who are coming to the ball (they are already there).And it evolves around two characters who are not part of the movies, so i think this is what you need the know for now if there is something you need the know i left out, i will write it with my next chapter.


"Congratulations!" they were all saying to him as he walked in, and for what? Being elected? Having charisma or paying an army of people who make other people vote for him? He hasn't even done anything yet but smile for the camera and make promises he can't keep.

Hay my name is Jackson Iroh and I'm the youngest general the republic has ever seen. And let me tell you that wasn't easy. I have trained since i was a baby. And for what? To have people say to you: "that's nice kid." No respect i get, none. But of course the party is not about me you think. What a jerk he is for thinking that. Well let me tell you I thought so to when I stept in, but not every one thought that way about me to.

I stept to the side of the room, alone. Jes, I'm one of those guy's who can't get a date even if I try my best. "Looks like you made an impression." said a charming sweat but spice, mysterious voice. "Really you noticed me over all the commotion about the new president?" I tried saying at my most mysterious way possible. "Yes. Me and those other girls in that corner over there, hoping you noticing them and asking them to dance with you." She moved her head slighty as she spoke about the girls, with no movement in her face but her velvet dark red lips with that devious hot smile any guy would fall for. "Mph, I hadn't noticed" "That's maybe because you aren't looking enough" "And you are?" "Yes. I'm. Mr. Iroh" "It's actually general Iroh." I said trying to at least hold my rang. "I know. Care to dance?" Her sentences were sharp and quick, like stakes from a knife that oddly didn't hurt but stong after you pulled them out. They were too fast to come with an anser for that would sound as cool and hot as she did. Everything was odd about her but as she gently and elegantly moved to the dance flour i forgot all about that. "So, who do i have the honour to dance with?" Man! i suck at dancing! Mostly ballroom dancing! "Guess." And there go the knifes again. "Ok, let's see you are wearing Coruscant style clothing, indicating you must be from here Since everyone wears their own style clothing to this kind of parties. And since you are allowed to go to such a parties, I would say you are important and have something to do with politics. So I would say you are the new young vice president they will be announcing later at the evening, Margretelle?" "Your almost correct but the new vice president isn't named Margretelle but Rowana, and she is standing over there. Care to guess again? Or are you giving up?" You see you shouldnt say that to me I almost alway guess correct. I call it my special gift. And for clarification I guessed wrong with purpose, plus she is hard to read when we dance.

"Oh I'm not giving up yet. Your not Croruscant but actually from the colourful planet Gebaya wich you didn't want to show to make people guess who you are but since you have to wear the colours of your home planet you hid them in your hat, wich is nice by the way are those real flowers you made them from or are they...?"

"Continue."

"You're a fiery girl and like to show it with that dress, but also not to mush so your parents won't see them. Speaking about your dress your hiding your lichtsaber under your metal skirt wich I can see poking out at your left side and as only Jedi knight who is here. I would suggest that you're not here as Jedi knight but als normal citizen, then again. Your not because you're the princess with the name Rosella. Did I get it right or are you going to try to lie because I'm the first person to have ever spoken to you like that? Your highness."

"Very well. General. But be carefull, you are already showing your cards while were still playing." With that she stopt dancing and slowly walked of the dance floor. Me going after her. "Oh, don't worry i still have a lot more cards hidden up my sleeves." She looked at me with that mysterious smile again. "So do I." "Really, why would you need any?" "As Jedi you always have to have a few. Like knowing if someone is bluffing or not." "Well, then I have to disappoint you. I'm very good at playing poker." That made her laugh that I got her metaphor for playing cards. Or so I thought. Because as she was slowly walking out of the room she stopped in the doorway. Looked at me and said:

"Who said we were playing poker" And with that she was gone. disappeared in the many halls of the congress senate building with me standing alone again in a room full of middle-aged men and women. I looked around. Maybe I would take the chance of asking one of the girls to dance but after that dance with her i couldn't. Like I was frozen of amazing of what she said, more how she said it. Like she was wiser that any of us in this room. I wondered why she approached me and not anybody else. Maybe it was because I was her age or maybe because it was about something more that I didn't know about. Yet.