Here is my new fanfiction. It will be rated T. Also it will have allot of chapters and maybe a sequel.
Tris POV
I open my eyes. Today was the choosing ceremony, I thought. That meant more initiates for four and I to train.
The last bunch were ok. No suicde. No murder. Like what happened jurying my training. But then again each year is different. Personally I'm hoping for something more interesting then last time it was kinda boring. I get dressed then head to the dining hall were I see four sitting with the other trainers there are four of us me,four,Christina and Will.(A/N ya he's still alive) Christina and Will work with the dauntless born initiates and four and I get the transfers. After I finish eating I head towards the trains with the other dauntless. We jump on then ride to the hills near the building where the choosing ceremony will take place. I sit trough the ceremony and look at all the transfers there are 13,one more then last time. After the ceremony the group of transfers follow four and I to the trains. Only 12 out of the thirteen got on. The one who didn't was a small girl from amity. When I was able to see the building I told the transfers to jump. 9 of us got on the other 3 fell. I told them to gather around the ledge. Tobais being afraid of hights was at the bottom ready to help the transfers out of the net. I told them to jump.
"How far is it?" Asked a candor boy.
"Around 56m. And that's all I can see" said a girl from erudite.
"Well, I survived so you should to" I said impatiently
The candor boy stepped foward and the other 8 initiates formed a line behind him." 3.2.1" he counted slowly. Then he jumped as did the other 7 initiates. There was one small girl left.
"I'm scared" she said quietly
Forgetting that I was spoused to be a mean trainer I told her in a calming voice that everything would be ok. And I promised she would survive the jump.
Then she said"can I tell you something"
"Sure" I said
"I'm only 14" she whispered
"Then who did you get into the choosing ceremony"
" I don't know somehow I managed in the simulation to say I was 16,it was a dare from some of my friends to try to get into the aptitude test. And then this happened"
"What was your result" I said quietly
"Divergent" she said and then she jumped.
So there. REVIEW PLEASE. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated but please don't be mean. i'll try to update tomorrow:)
