What would happen if Remus had said just one extra word before leaving the
Shrieking Shack after catching Peter? This is my version on the events.
It probably isn't very well written but oh well. Pleaz read.
Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story except maybe the slight changes I made to J.K's plot line.
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************************** PoA (page 377)
"And two of us should be chained to this," said Black, nidging Pettigrew with his toe. " Just to make sure."
"I'll do it," said Lupin.
"And me," said Ron savagely, limping forward.
Black conjured heavy manacles from thin air; soon Pettigrew was upright again, left arm chained to Lupin's right, right arm to Ron's left. Ron's face was set. He seemed to have taken Sacabbers's true identity as a personal insult. Crookshanks leapt lightly off the bed and led the way out of the room, his bottlebrush tail held jauntily high.
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"Stupefy!" Lupin shouted. Seeing that Pettigrew was now limp, he followed Crookshanks throught the door.
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Harry had never been part of a stranger group. Crookshanks led the way down the stairs; Lupin, Pettigrew, and Ron went next, looking like entrants in a six-legged race. Next came Proffesor Snape, drifting creepily along, his toes hitting each stair as they descended, held by his own wand, which was being pointed at him by Sirius. Harry and Hermione brought up the rear.
[...]
Snape collided with Lupin pettigrew, and Ron, who had stopped abruptly. Black froze. He flung one arm to make Harry and Hermione stop.
Harry could see Lupin's silhouette. He had gone rigid. Then his limbs began to shake.
"Oh, my --" Hermione gasped. "He didn't take his potion tonight! He's not safe!"
"Run," Black whispered. "Run. Now"
But Harry couldn't run. Ron was chained to Pettigrew and Lupin. He leapt forward but Black caught him around the chest and threw him back.
"Leave it to me -- RUN!"
There was a terrible snarling noise. Lupin's head was lengthening. So was his body. His shoulders were hunching. Hair was sprouting visibly on his face and hands, which were curling into clawed paws. Crookshanks's hair was on end again; he was backing away --
As the werewolf reared, snapping its long jaws, Sirius diappeared from Harry's side. He had transformed. The enormous, bearlike dog bounded forward. As the werewolf wrenched itself free of the manacle binding it, the dog seized it about the neck and pulled it backward, away from Ron and Pettigrew. They were locked, jaw to jaw, claws ripping at each other --
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Finally, the two animals made it to the Forbidden Forest and disappeared. Harry, Ron, and Hermione didn't know what to do. They were standing there with a stupified man and a cat. Hermione was the first one to speak.
"Let's bring Pettigrew to Dumbledore. I think Sirius can handle Professor Lupin for now."
The three friends trudged up to the castle. Hermione now carried Snape and Harry helped Ron with Pettigrew. They were making their way up a staircase when Snape started to wake up. Harry was the first to notice.
"Uh oh. What do we do now?" he asked frantically.
"How 'bout we give him another whop in the head and then we won't have to worry about --"
"Ron! He's still a teacher, we can't do that!" Hermione /almost/ seemed offended by his suggestion.
"Hey mate! It was worth a shot!"
"You too Harry! Aren't you ashamed of yourselves? Even if this is Snape, you could be expelled for that."
"You could be expelled for what exactly Miss Granger?" Uh oh! Snape was finally awake.
"Umm, well." Hermione was at loss for words. She signaled to Harry and Ron to try and help her.
"Don't even bother trying to answer. Dimwits like you wouldn't ever be able to," Snape wasn't going to go easy on them. He obviously remembered quite well who had knocked him out. "There are many things you have done today that deserve expulsion. I think we should bring you to the headmaster."
"Sir," Hermione began, "That's exactly where we were going. See --"
"Hold your tongue Miss Granger. Save it for the headmaster."
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Is it any good? Review and tell me pleaz. This is my first fanfic so I need constructive feedback. Thanx!
It probably isn't very well written but oh well. Pleaz read.
Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story except maybe the slight changes I made to J.K's plot line.
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************************** PoA (page 377)
"And two of us should be chained to this," said Black, nidging Pettigrew with his toe. " Just to make sure."
"I'll do it," said Lupin.
"And me," said Ron savagely, limping forward.
Black conjured heavy manacles from thin air; soon Pettigrew was upright again, left arm chained to Lupin's right, right arm to Ron's left. Ron's face was set. He seemed to have taken Sacabbers's true identity as a personal insult. Crookshanks leapt lightly off the bed and led the way out of the room, his bottlebrush tail held jauntily high.
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"Stupefy!" Lupin shouted. Seeing that Pettigrew was now limp, he followed Crookshanks throught the door.
************************** PoA (page 378-381)
Harry had never been part of a stranger group. Crookshanks led the way down the stairs; Lupin, Pettigrew, and Ron went next, looking like entrants in a six-legged race. Next came Proffesor Snape, drifting creepily along, his toes hitting each stair as they descended, held by his own wand, which was being pointed at him by Sirius. Harry and Hermione brought up the rear.
[...]
Snape collided with Lupin pettigrew, and Ron, who had stopped abruptly. Black froze. He flung one arm to make Harry and Hermione stop.
Harry could see Lupin's silhouette. He had gone rigid. Then his limbs began to shake.
"Oh, my --" Hermione gasped. "He didn't take his potion tonight! He's not safe!"
"Run," Black whispered. "Run. Now"
But Harry couldn't run. Ron was chained to Pettigrew and Lupin. He leapt forward but Black caught him around the chest and threw him back.
"Leave it to me -- RUN!"
There was a terrible snarling noise. Lupin's head was lengthening. So was his body. His shoulders were hunching. Hair was sprouting visibly on his face and hands, which were curling into clawed paws. Crookshanks's hair was on end again; he was backing away --
As the werewolf reared, snapping its long jaws, Sirius diappeared from Harry's side. He had transformed. The enormous, bearlike dog bounded forward. As the werewolf wrenched itself free of the manacle binding it, the dog seized it about the neck and pulled it backward, away from Ron and Pettigrew. They were locked, jaw to jaw, claws ripping at each other --
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Finally, the two animals made it to the Forbidden Forest and disappeared. Harry, Ron, and Hermione didn't know what to do. They were standing there with a stupified man and a cat. Hermione was the first one to speak.
"Let's bring Pettigrew to Dumbledore. I think Sirius can handle Professor Lupin for now."
The three friends trudged up to the castle. Hermione now carried Snape and Harry helped Ron with Pettigrew. They were making their way up a staircase when Snape started to wake up. Harry was the first to notice.
"Uh oh. What do we do now?" he asked frantically.
"How 'bout we give him another whop in the head and then we won't have to worry about --"
"Ron! He's still a teacher, we can't do that!" Hermione /almost/ seemed offended by his suggestion.
"Hey mate! It was worth a shot!"
"You too Harry! Aren't you ashamed of yourselves? Even if this is Snape, you could be expelled for that."
"You could be expelled for what exactly Miss Granger?" Uh oh! Snape was finally awake.
"Umm, well." Hermione was at loss for words. She signaled to Harry and Ron to try and help her.
"Don't even bother trying to answer. Dimwits like you wouldn't ever be able to," Snape wasn't going to go easy on them. He obviously remembered quite well who had knocked him out. "There are many things you have done today that deserve expulsion. I think we should bring you to the headmaster."
"Sir," Hermione began, "That's exactly where we were going. See --"
"Hold your tongue Miss Granger. Save it for the headmaster."
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Is it any good? Review and tell me pleaz. This is my first fanfic so I need constructive feedback. Thanx!
