This is my first story so any feedback will be appreciated.

The two characters are based on my characters in the game.

My two characters are: Lava a G rank hunter who uses maxed Uragaan hammer, maxed Lucent heavy bowgun, and maxed Brachy dual blades and longsword. And Queen a low-rank hunter with full Gold Rathian Armor And a light bowgun that her brother gave to her. The third character I made up for the purpose of this story. Her name is Kira and she uses a Longsword most of the time and a Greatsword or a bow the rest of the time. She has full dire armor and will come and go in the story.

This story takes place in mh3u and it's from Lavas point of view.

Chapter 1

"I can't believe I'm finally here," Queen said jumping up and down in excitement. "Calm down sis," I told her putting my hands on her shoulders. "Ok but what are we hunting first?" asked Queen. "Just wait," I told her as we walked off the boat. "What open quests to you have?" I asked the Guild lady."Let me see… A Qurupeco has been causing trouble in the sandy plains and we need someone to take care of it" the Guild lady said. "Ok we'll take care of it just let me get my dual blades," I told her.

(later in the sandy plains)

"We'll never be able to find it," Queen said sitting down. "We'll take one more look before we give up," I told her helping her up. "Ok" she replied. "Get down I see its shadow," I said pushing her behind a rock "Stay here while I set up a shock trap and once it's in the trap shoot it." As I set up the trap it spotted me and charged me but I got out of the way and it hit the trap. "Queen shoot it now" I yelled as I threw a paintball at it. When the paintball hit I drew my dual blades, entered demon mode, and unleashed a flurry of attacks. When it shook off the trap I sheathed my dual blades. "It's your quest do you want to capture it?" I asked Queen as the Qurupeco fled back to its nest. "No let's kill it" she replied. "Okay let's get this over with then," I told her as we ran to the Qurupeco's nest.

(at the nest)

"Sis I need you to get on the ledge over there and shoot it on my single" I whispered to Queen. "Okay, what's the single" She whispered. "When I attack him" I whispered. "Got it she whispered as she made her way to the ledge. Once she was in position I unsheathed my dual blades, entered demon mode, and unleashed a flurry of attacks as Queen shot it over and over. The Qurupeco suddenly spun around hitting me with its fanlike tail. As I flew back the Qurupeco turned toward Queen who was still shooting it. As it charged her I ran at it and unleashed another flurry of attacks on its legs. It fell under the onslaught of attacks. "You can finish it off sis," I told Queen as it thrashed around. She shot it in the head than we carved its parts.

(at the port)

"Welcome back Hunters" the Guildmaster called to Queen and I. "Thanks for the welcome," I said as we walked over. "Are there any more quests available?" "Yes, but I would like you to wait a couple of days for another hunter I believe you know" the Guildmaster replied. "Okay we can wait but what's the quest?" I asked. "You have to hunt a Barroth" he replied.