Please go easy on me, this is my first fanfic ever.
Disclaimer:I don't even own a copy of bloody roar! (my sister does)
Any comments on how I can improve will be greatly appriciated. -Darkness Angel.
What did Grass-head do!?
-chapter 1-
For as long as he could remember, Busuzima wanted to rule the world.Today, he could finally achive that dream!In a dark, gloomy laboratory he made the final preperations. "Ray gun.check, hair gel.check, clean underwear.check, check and CHECK!!!"Busuzima cried, "Mwahahahahahahaha!I, the great Busuzima shall use this ray gun to turn myself into.. a GOD!!hahahahehehehe!" He pointed his remote at the contraption and prepared to push the big red button."The world is MIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!!" "Oh no you don't!"Yugo's voice boomed from the doorway. Busuzima whirled around in time to see Uriko and Kenji deliver a double flying kick to his face.As he fell to the floor his thumb slipped and hit the button.The ray gun rattled and shook as it powered up.Kenji and Uriko looked forward as the beam of bright green light hit them full force. "Kenjiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!"Yugo shouted. "Urikooooooooooooooo!"Alice screamed. As the light died away, the two teens slumped to the floor. Yugo and Alice ran to their siblings' sides.Alice checked their pulses, "They're still alive.Just unconcious." "YOU!"Yugo shouted at Busuzima to realise, he had gone.. Long ran to Alice.Yugo picked Kenji's unconsious body up.Long held Uriko's still form in his arms. "We may have not been able to capture Busuzima,"Long said "But what is important now is we care for Kenji and Uriko.Who knows what the ray gun did to them." They left the filthy lab quickly so that the teens could be looked after in their homes.
Somewhere in a dark deserted corner Busuzima hid, waiting for a chance to escape properly. "Dagnabbit!I failed again!"Busuzima screeched."Nevermind that now, I better run for my life!" He disappeared into the shadows fearing for his life....
-end of chapter 1-
So what did ya think?I'm gonna put the first two or three chapters up as a pilot fanfic.if all goes well, I'll add more chapters.
Any comments on how I can improve will be greatly appriciated. -Darkness Angel.
What did Grass-head do!?
-chapter 1-
For as long as he could remember, Busuzima wanted to rule the world.Today, he could finally achive that dream!In a dark, gloomy laboratory he made the final preperations. "Ray gun.check, hair gel.check, clean underwear.check, check and CHECK!!!"Busuzima cried, "Mwahahahahahahaha!I, the great Busuzima shall use this ray gun to turn myself into.. a GOD!!hahahahehehehe!" He pointed his remote at the contraption and prepared to push the big red button."The world is MIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!!" "Oh no you don't!"Yugo's voice boomed from the doorway. Busuzima whirled around in time to see Uriko and Kenji deliver a double flying kick to his face.As he fell to the floor his thumb slipped and hit the button.The ray gun rattled and shook as it powered up.Kenji and Uriko looked forward as the beam of bright green light hit them full force. "Kenjiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!"Yugo shouted. "Urikooooooooooooooo!"Alice screamed. As the light died away, the two teens slumped to the floor. Yugo and Alice ran to their siblings' sides.Alice checked their pulses, "They're still alive.Just unconcious." "YOU!"Yugo shouted at Busuzima to realise, he had gone.. Long ran to Alice.Yugo picked Kenji's unconsious body up.Long held Uriko's still form in his arms. "We may have not been able to capture Busuzima,"Long said "But what is important now is we care for Kenji and Uriko.Who knows what the ray gun did to them." They left the filthy lab quickly so that the teens could be looked after in their homes.
Somewhere in a dark deserted corner Busuzima hid, waiting for a chance to escape properly. "Dagnabbit!I failed again!"Busuzima screeched."Nevermind that now, I better run for my life!" He disappeared into the shadows fearing for his life....
-end of chapter 1-
So what did ya think?I'm gonna put the first two or three chapters up as a pilot fanfic.if all goes well, I'll add more chapters.
