Disclaimers: J.K. Rowling is probably in Scotland, and since I'm not, I'm
obviously not her.
Note: constructive criticism please. I'm putting it up so that you can give your opinions and to tell me whether or not I should go further. Thanx, Andrasta.
~The night sky was reflected in the large lake in front of the old castle. The glittering stars looked like bright diamonds just beneath the water's surface. A slight ripple disrupted the water's serene stillness. A redheaded girl raised herself to the edge of the water, and using her forearms, the girl brought her half-naked body to shore. Her green fish tail appeared from under the dark blue water. She reached for her cloak beside the lake and wrapped it carefully around her tail. As her tail dried, the scales smoothed out to a pair of pale, perfectly formed legs. Pushing her curly, long, dripping hair out of her face, she put her school uniform back on and the youngest Weasley made her way back to the castle to bathe and go to bed. ~
~ A quiet reminder, this will be a Draco/Ginny story, mainly romance, so if its not your 'thing', don't read it. And also, it's just an idea. If you'd like me to go further with it you have to review.I have presented to friends who like it and I myself am proud of my idea. I don't usually sit down and start writing about anything, like I did with this, and when the idea came up for it I had to keep writing.
Note: constructive criticism please. I'm putting it up so that you can give your opinions and to tell me whether or not I should go further. Thanx, Andrasta.
~The night sky was reflected in the large lake in front of the old castle. The glittering stars looked like bright diamonds just beneath the water's surface. A slight ripple disrupted the water's serene stillness. A redheaded girl raised herself to the edge of the water, and using her forearms, the girl brought her half-naked body to shore. Her green fish tail appeared from under the dark blue water. She reached for her cloak beside the lake and wrapped it carefully around her tail. As her tail dried, the scales smoothed out to a pair of pale, perfectly formed legs. Pushing her curly, long, dripping hair out of her face, she put her school uniform back on and the youngest Weasley made her way back to the castle to bathe and go to bed. ~
~ A quiet reminder, this will be a Draco/Ginny story, mainly romance, so if its not your 'thing', don't read it. And also, it's just an idea. If you'd like me to go further with it you have to review.I have presented to friends who like it and I myself am proud of my idea. I don't usually sit down and start writing about anything, like I did with this, and when the idea came up for it I had to keep writing.
