Hi everyone, this is my third fanfic so I have some practice. Please let me know what you think I am trying to be a good writer so give me every opinion on your mind!
Raven was sitting in her room the day after Malchoir betrayed her. She was thinking how for the 5 seconds she held beast boy how good she felt inside but how wrong it felt since she still had some feeling for Malchoir. "Why me? I need to keep these emotions under control…. Must show nothing!".
"Azarath Metrion Zinthos" she repeated as she meditated.
All of the sudden her window broke and she broke out of her meditation state and ran over to the window in panic to see how the vandal was. She only saw a person running away wearing a pure white cape. She knew who it was and she wanted to forget she even saw them. She picked up a brick where the broken glass laid. Attached to the brick was a note.
She read what it said and she lost breath at that moment. Then the titans ran in to see if that's where the sound came from.
"Raven, what's wrong?" Robin said.
"He's back….."
Sorry it was short but that's I could think of for the time being. If you wish to give me advice or comment or suggest how I should write the next chapter please send all e-mails to my e-mail at
