I am a new fanfic writer tell what you think of my story so far flames welcome.
disclaimer: i do not own dbz wish i did but naw the lucky owner is none other than Akira Toriama the coolest guy eva
chapter one: battle of the sayajin race
after kakorat or son goku landed on earth as a child also another child left planet vegeta a little sayajin named shinko he was sent to a misterious wolf based planet where lil shinko was raised by to nice people Shikara and Dasuma he was raised to be a a good powerfull sayajin wolf but as he grew he notices his tail begins to change eventually he had a tail that was crossed with great ape and wolf. when he grew up he left for earth where he heard a sayajin with a great power level live also prince vegeta was on his way and who would pass up the opertunity to fight the prince before he left his mother tells him Shikara: hun please be safe and i have somthing for u its ur scouter u came here with now dont hurt to many people (giggle) Shinko: ok mother i promise and father keep mom safe for both of us : dont u worrie about us well be ok now u go and fight that prince. and so Shinko left for earth.
In the town he arrived in he noticed it had been demolished and he wonder was it prince vegeta and did he have anyone with him the prince would not do all this distruction by himslef so he looked on his scouter and found a high power level and flew tword it andfound himself at a wastland were a namekian a half sayajin child a triclops and a short human were fighting prince vegeta, and nappa so he sat back and watched until all that was left was the sayajin kid and the short man so he steped in for a lil spar in sarcasim in his tone he began to talk to the sayajin.
Shinko: why hello my prince oh and the mighty nappa wht are u to so powerful sayajins do here. vegeta began to speak. Vegeta:who are u to talk to a sayajin prince a pesent Nappa end this puny sayajins life. Nappa: yes prince vegeta.
He goes after the so called puny sayajin and nappa hit him in the gut and nappas hand crackes and the Shinko says to nappa. Sinko: my turn nappa u will know wht is like to feel like ur dead. at that moment Shinko thumps nappa in the head and nappa go flying and shinko appears behind him and uses his attack freedom shot and blew off the arm of nappa and right out of the sight of shinko the warrior son goku apears and shinko steps away and lets son goku take the fight.
to be continued
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have fun with that...
