Prologue:
In the pits of hell was located two kingdoms one of good called veca the other evil called the kiso. They lived along side one another. One day the kiso kingom attacked millions of the veca were killed including the queen who had just given birth just hours ago. The kiso's intendtion taking the new born prince. Troops surrounded the child as thousands more died trying to protect it. The kingdom grieved over their loss unaware of the events that would unfold.
Chapter 1:
A girl walked across a path that supposedly led to her home. Truthfully she was lost and there was not a soul to speak of that could help her. She heard a rustling in the bushes that surrounded the path. She frightendly continued to walk afraid of the creatures that might lurk too scared to notice it was all in her head.
Suddenly she felt a touch on her shoulder. She turned around to attack the beast but her hands were held down. She struggled with all her strength until the figure spoke.
Sorry buts that's all I have time for I'm still busy but I'll update little by little put in the comments if this was better than the original
