Ok, ok, this is the first fic I've ever written, in the past I have only
edited and read fics, plz, only constructive criticism...^_^ ;....so yeah
on with the fiction! (P.S.: Kami is the guardian of earth, for those who
don't know)
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Akane was sitting by the canal she and Ranma went to sit by when they needed to think, she had moved under the bridge after the rain had started pouring down. Tears were running down her face and sobs raked through her body as she sat on the ground, looking at the rippling surface of the water.
*How...how can he feel like this all the time? I just, I feel like I have no place in the world, that nobody could ever love me...and that...that my presence in other people's lives is only a burden for others... Kami, I feel numb..someone please help me...or...or I'm afraid that I...I might just end it all here..Goddamn it I can take this!*
Akane rolled into a tight ball, the emotional pain becoming too much. She fell asleep right there under the bridge, her dreams full of despair. ---------------------------------------------------
Ryoga was feeling much the same at that point in time, numb. He couldn't feel Ranma's punches, he couldn't feel Ranma's kicks, and...
*Thank Kami I can't hear what he's saying...*
All that he knew was that he had hurt the only person he had ever cared about in all of his life...Akane...
*I should have stayed away from here! I should never have come back!*
Yet another punch lodged itself into his gut, this one so deeply that it snapped him out of his trance of self pity. Ryoga fell heavily to his knees, his hands hanging limply at his sides. He could feel the pain running through him, he basked in it, knowing that he deserved it.
"Goddamn it, Ryoga!! You will pay for what you did! Mark my words!"
And with that Ranma kicked him hard in the gut, the exact same place as before, for maximum pain. Ryoga fell to his side, staring out into space. Ranma removed his schoolbag from his back and threw it hard at Ryoga, rewarded by a grunt of pain, then kicked him again and again, each time harder than the last.
***flashback***
Akane had been on her way to school, she had had a fight with Ranma that morning, so she had left early. Ranma left right after Akane, and followed her, not wanting to be seen because he was still smarting a huge bump on his head from that mallet of hers, and didn't want another.
He had seen her stop running and go down another street, curious, he followed her and immediately saw what had interested her. Ryoga was sitting tensely at a bench in the park, his eyes closed and his hands clenched tight. Ranma's eyes shot open...
*Shit! Akane better get away quick! He's about to do his Shi-Shi Hokadon technique, she could get caught in it!*
Ranma had tried toreach her to warn her, but he was too late...Ranma would always remember the look of horror in Ryoga's face when he saw that Akane would be caught in the blast.
Something strange happened just as Akane touched Ryoga's shoulder. Ranma thought that there would be an explosion, that Akane would be severely injured, but no. A shudder went through Akane's body and her eyes snapped open wide, she sunk down to her knees ans slowly moved her hands up to her face, looking at the ground as if she were in a trance. Her hands suddenly shot up to the sides of her head as if it were about to explode, she shut her eyes tight and let out a scream of pain, "ahh! What...what's happening to..to me...my...my head..I feel...". "Ryoga! What did you do to Akane!?" Ranma yelled running toward Ryoga.
**end flashback**
Ranma suddenly came back to reality. He felt the change spread through him as the rain started pouring down on his body. He turned away from Ryoga and looked to the spot where Akane had been kneeling down that was now vacant and wet.
*...Hey, where did she run off to...?*
He looked around and saw no sign of her.He looked at P-chan lying on the muddy ground. He sighed and picked the pig up off of the ground.
*He's not dead...but he could have been if the rain didn't wake me up and make me realize what I was doing. I'll just get him to some cover and then I'll go look for Akane...*
Ranma went over to the small hut that was a little way away and put the pig down.
*He'll be ok, hes built like a Sherman tank he'll come to in no time. Now to find that psychotic fiancé of mine...I hope she's alright.*
Then Ranma set off to find Akane, knowing that he wouldn't be able to rest until he found her. ------------------------------------------------------------ hehe, so how was it? Good, bad, horrible?? Lol the end was a bit corny but I hope the rest wasn't too bad. I LOVE YOU ALL!!!!! -Jo
Akane was sitting by the canal she and Ranma went to sit by when they needed to think, she had moved under the bridge after the rain had started pouring down. Tears were running down her face and sobs raked through her body as she sat on the ground, looking at the rippling surface of the water.
*How...how can he feel like this all the time? I just, I feel like I have no place in the world, that nobody could ever love me...and that...that my presence in other people's lives is only a burden for others... Kami, I feel numb..someone please help me...or...or I'm afraid that I...I might just end it all here..Goddamn it I can take this!*
Akane rolled into a tight ball, the emotional pain becoming too much. She fell asleep right there under the bridge, her dreams full of despair. ---------------------------------------------------
Ryoga was feeling much the same at that point in time, numb. He couldn't feel Ranma's punches, he couldn't feel Ranma's kicks, and...
*Thank Kami I can't hear what he's saying...*
All that he knew was that he had hurt the only person he had ever cared about in all of his life...Akane...
*I should have stayed away from here! I should never have come back!*
Yet another punch lodged itself into his gut, this one so deeply that it snapped him out of his trance of self pity. Ryoga fell heavily to his knees, his hands hanging limply at his sides. He could feel the pain running through him, he basked in it, knowing that he deserved it.
"Goddamn it, Ryoga!! You will pay for what you did! Mark my words!"
And with that Ranma kicked him hard in the gut, the exact same place as before, for maximum pain. Ryoga fell to his side, staring out into space. Ranma removed his schoolbag from his back and threw it hard at Ryoga, rewarded by a grunt of pain, then kicked him again and again, each time harder than the last.
***flashback***
Akane had been on her way to school, she had had a fight with Ranma that morning, so she had left early. Ranma left right after Akane, and followed her, not wanting to be seen because he was still smarting a huge bump on his head from that mallet of hers, and didn't want another.
He had seen her stop running and go down another street, curious, he followed her and immediately saw what had interested her. Ryoga was sitting tensely at a bench in the park, his eyes closed and his hands clenched tight. Ranma's eyes shot open...
*Shit! Akane better get away quick! He's about to do his Shi-Shi Hokadon technique, she could get caught in it!*
Ranma had tried toreach her to warn her, but he was too late...Ranma would always remember the look of horror in Ryoga's face when he saw that Akane would be caught in the blast.
Something strange happened just as Akane touched Ryoga's shoulder. Ranma thought that there would be an explosion, that Akane would be severely injured, but no. A shudder went through Akane's body and her eyes snapped open wide, she sunk down to her knees ans slowly moved her hands up to her face, looking at the ground as if she were in a trance. Her hands suddenly shot up to the sides of her head as if it were about to explode, she shut her eyes tight and let out a scream of pain, "ahh! What...what's happening to..to me...my...my head..I feel...". "Ryoga! What did you do to Akane!?" Ranma yelled running toward Ryoga.
**end flashback**
Ranma suddenly came back to reality. He felt the change spread through him as the rain started pouring down on his body. He turned away from Ryoga and looked to the spot where Akane had been kneeling down that was now vacant and wet.
*...Hey, where did she run off to...?*
He looked around and saw no sign of her.He looked at P-chan lying on the muddy ground. He sighed and picked the pig up off of the ground.
*He's not dead...but he could have been if the rain didn't wake me up and make me realize what I was doing. I'll just get him to some cover and then I'll go look for Akane...*
Ranma went over to the small hut that was a little way away and put the pig down.
*He'll be ok, hes built like a Sherman tank he'll come to in no time. Now to find that psychotic fiancé of mine...I hope she's alright.*
Then Ranma set off to find Akane, knowing that he wouldn't be able to rest until he found her. ------------------------------------------------------------ hehe, so how was it? Good, bad, horrible?? Lol the end was a bit corny but I hope the rest wasn't too bad. I LOVE YOU ALL!!!!! -Jo
