Oh, What Rum Can Cause

Ok, so this is a story I got the idea for quite some time ago, and never really got around to posting it. Basically the story is instead of just Liz and Jack being marooned by Barbossa, it's Jack, Anamaria, Will, and Liz.

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"How long have we been on this wrenched spit-of-land?" Elizabeth screamed as she banged her head repeatedly against a palm tree.

"About four hours, Liz" Will said as he came over and put his hand between her head and the palm tree.

Elizabeth groaned and turned to yell at Will for interfering with her self-inflection when she noticed how close he was.

"I, um, er, I'm going to go see if I can find any fresh water" Elizabeth stammered as she quickly got up and ran towards the small amount of clumped trees.

"Do you want me to come with you?" Will yelled after her as he fell backwards from the force of her getting up so quickly.

"NO!" Elizabeth yelled back, a little meaner in tone than she had intended, as she picked up her pace, quickly realizing how difficult it was to run in the sand. Will started to go after her anyway, but quickly decided against it when he saw Elizabeth run into a rock that was buried under the sand. As words were spewing from her mouth that Will didn't know she was capable of saying, she picked up a coconut and chucked it at a palm tree trunk. Will resolved it would be best to just stay by his tree and let Elizabeth cool down a bit.

"You love her, don't ya lad?" Ana-Maria asked Will from her little spot of shade she was currently sharing with Jack, who had wasted no time at all getting to the rum stash. Ana had seen the whole thing, but with difficultly, as she was currently trying to keep Jack from falling asleep on her.

"No! I don't love Lizzy, I love YOU!" Jack slurred to Ana from "his" side of the tree where Ana had firmly placed him.

"Shut up you old cad." Ana groaned, then added, "You need to cut back." as she grabbed the bottle from Jack's hands.

"Well, Will, are you going to answer my question?" Ana smirked as she saw the blush creep up his face.

"Um… I'm gonna go find some food, and fire wood, and stuff." Will stammered as he shot up and sprinted further on shore.

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A/N: Ok, so what do Y'all think? Should I continue the story, or just leave it? I'm open to any and all suggestions/criticism, so PLEASE review!

Amanda (willz1luv)