This story is sort of crack-ish, over emotional sappy bullshit review if I should continue. Also, most of the characters have been aged down for the story so there wont be romance unless I write a sequel


"You look so beautiful, Nagisa-Chan." Hiromei cooed, as she tied a black bow in Nagisa's long blue hair. The delusional woman didn't notice the misery in her son's eyes, the way he subtly flinched away from her touch.

Nagisa hated this- playing dress up. His mother had forced him to wear girl's clothes for as long as he could remember, when he was really little, he didn't mind and actually found it fun, but now he was twelve years old, and being forced into girl's clothes made him feel sick. But he dare not defy her, or else she'd snap.

Nagisa constantly lived in fear of his mother. For her, he suffered the humiliation of leaving the house in girl's clothes, the bullying at school for looking like a girl, dieting to make sure his frame stayed slender and feminine. All the ribbons and frills felt like they were crushing him, the long hair felt like a crown of thorns. He was constantly self conscious.

"You're lucky you have such a kind mother like me to teach you how to be a fashionable young lady, Nagisa. I never had that growing up." Hiromei said, putting her hands around Nagisa, and gazing at his reflection in the mirror- He was wearing a mid-length black dress with a ruffled skirt and knee-length socks. The boy turned away, not wanting to see himself like this. His mother ran a hand through his hair.

"Remember the visit to the doctor we took?" She said to Nagisa.

"Yes?" Nagisa said, a little surprised she was bringing that up now; Hiromi had brought Nagisa to a posh Doctor from out of town. She had forced him to wear a blouse and skirt too, he was just thankful nobody he knew saw him. Nagisa didn't know why he had been taken there- he wasn't sick or anything. The doctor just asked him a lot of questions about gender.

Do you want to be a girl, Nagisa? Have you always felt like a girl?

Nagisa had never wanted to be a girl, but his mother was sat right in the office with them, he didn't want to make her angry, so he told the doctor Yes, I do want to be a girl. He wasn't sure why he had that meeting, and his mother wouldn't explain. The doctor didn't give him any medicine or anything, just took notes.

"Well, you're gender reassignment treatment was approved, starting tomorrow, you're going to be getting some very special pills that will stop you from getting to big, and your voice from getting deeper- all that disgusting man stuff." Hiromi simpered sounding delighted. Nagisa's stomach plummeted with dread, despite not fully understanding.

"G- Gender reassignment?" The bluenette whimpered.

"Yes! You'll become a real girl just like we've always wanted." Hiromei said, a big wide smile on her face. She didn't notice the tears forming in Nagisa's eyes.

No! No! No! She can't turn me into something I'm not! Something I don't want to be! Please!

That night, after the torture of the dress-up game was over, Nagisa was sent to bed. He hadn't spoke a word since his Mother had told him the news. He lay in bed, staring up at the ceiling. Silent tears streaming down his face.

His mother was going to change his body. There was nothing he could do!

No! Enough was enough.

With a strange resolve that he had never felt before, Nagisa jumped out of bed and started packing his bag- Money, clothes, lighter, food, Frantically, he ran around the room grabbing everything.

Finally, he stopped, and caught sight of himself in the mirror- Face blushed, and long blue hair down to his waist. As Quick as he could, Nagisa grabbed the scissors of the shelf and snipped away at his hair until it was up to his chin.

He smiled at his own reflection, and picked up the long strands of chopped of hair from the floor, and threw them out of the window into the night, before climbing out himself and leaving. He left a small note;

I can't be what you want me to be, so I wont be here at all.


"I'm leaving now. I'll be back on Moday." Gakushu said to his father as he walked out the front door. The man didn't look up from his computer screen.

"Isn't your bag too big just for a weekend trip to a classmate's country house?" The Chairman said, without really paying any attention. The blond grinned at him.

"Better to be safe than sorry, sir." He said, before stepping out of the front door and into the street, heavy black bag on his back. He resisted the urge to cheer as he walked to the bus stop.

He'd done it! He'd finally ran away!

His father thought he was away for the weekend, so he had at least a three day head start before the man came looking for him. Plus, he had a few other tricks up his sleeve too, to make sure he was never found by his father again. He walked away without looking back- Finally. Finally he was free of that house and his father.

Gakuho Asano was a very clever man, escaping from him wasn't something that could be done on a whim. This plan had been done over a few weeks when Gakushu had first decided to run away;

It was after he had done badly on a test- not just bad- terrible. He had come third. Third.

Walking home that day, he knew his father would be furious in his own icy cold way. The man would never hit Gakushu (In fact, for as long as the boy could remember, his father avoided any kind of physical contact with him all together. He remembered trying to hold his hand once when he was little, and the man pulled a way as if he'd touched something disgusting) but he'd find some way of punishing him.

Like when he was seven, and Gakushu's football team had lost the final. When he had arrived home, the Chairman had been sitting there with the family cat in his lap, a disappointed expression on his face.

"Your too weak. Have you already resigned yourself to the life of a looser. You don't have enough drive to win."

"That's not true!" Gakushu had shouted back, his father gave him a deadly smile.

"Really? those who are truly strong will do anything to win. Anything. Can you do that?"

"Yes!"

The Chairman walked over to him, still holding the pet in his arms. "If you'll do anything, then kill this cat."

Asano stared at him, Amethyst eyes wide. That had to be a joke! But the Chairman never told jokes. And this wasn't funny. He reached out and thought about it for a moment. If he killed Mittens, would he have his father's approval? But they'd had the cat since he'd been born, it looked at him with clueless amber eyes, and he just couldn't.

The Chairman glared at him, and in one movement, grabbed the cat by the neck. There was a screech, a snap and then silence. Mittens flopped down, dead. "You really are pathetic." His father said, to a horrified Gakushu.

When he arrived home after coming third in the test though, the punishment had been much, much worse... He shook his head not wanting to think about it.

He arrived at the station, and walked into the small disabled bathroom, following the route that was the blind-spot to all the cameras. Nobody would know he had been here. He pulled out a bottle of cheap light brown hair dye, and followed the instructions.

A few minutes later, he washed it off in the sink and gazed at his reflection; His previously strawberry-blond sort-of-ginger hair was now an non-recognizable dirty blonde color. He pulled out some brown eye contacts, and placed them over his pupils, disguising his amethyst eyes- The eyes that he had inherited from his father, his most prominent feature.

He stepped out of the station bathroom a different person.


Akari washed the dye off her hair in the sink, then looked up. A green haired girl with golden eyes stared back at her. She was almost unrecognizable without her long flowing black hair.

She had finished her work, pretty soon she'd officially be 'dead' She pulled the drip out her arm that had slowly been draining her blood into a red bucket for the past few hours, and bandaged the small incision in her arm.

She still had half an hour left before she had to leave. Akari was currently in her brother-in-law's house, planting the evidence so that he would be charged for her murder after she vanished. She pulled out a few strands of her long black hair and left them on the floor, spilled the huge bucket of blood, and cleaned it, very badly so there was still lot's ov evidence left. She smeared it through the halls of the house so it looked like she had been dragged. She had already left a few specks of blood and hair in Kotarō Yanagisawa's car. He'd be arrested within a week.

Why was she doing this? because Yanagisawa had killer her sister and got away with it; Akari had always been close to her elder sister Aguri. Aguri could be ditzy, but she was always caring and trying her hardest. She dreamed of being a teacher.

But their parents had married her of to some rich scientist, Yanagisawa, just so the Yukimura family could become richer. Yanagisawa treated her terribly; He'd cheat on her, beat her, and make her work long hours in the most dangerous parts of his lab.

Akari hated him, but she was only a child and felt powerless to do anything, and Aguri always insisted that she was okay. But then tragedy struck; There was an explosion at the lab, and Aguri was killed, all because Yanagisawa made her work there.

Akari was heart broken, but pretty soon, her grief turned to anger. She would have her revenge against Yanagisawa for killing her sister. But just killing him wasn't good enough, he had to loose everything first; His reputation, his freedom, his fortune. Everything.

She almost felt bad for her parents, who would be loosing two daughters now, but she'd never forgive them for sacrificing Aguri.

Akari finished up creating the crime-scene, then picked up her bag to leave, taking another look at the fake ID she had made. From now on, she would be Kaede Kayano.


Karma's amber eyes stared at the clock. It was 4:am, and it had officially been one week since he'd spoken to another person, besides the cashier at the supermarket. His parents had been away for months, they texted occasionally and never called, he'd been suspended from school again for fighting, and everyone in his neighborhood avoided him because of his reputation.

He spent his time reading manga, playing video games, wandering around the house and his town, doing whatever the hell he wanted, telling himself he liked the freedom and that he wasn't ever lonely. He was thirteen, after all, too old to get upset because his parents weren't there. Besides. He was used to it.

But sometimes he felt so insignificant, like he could vanish and nobody would was so bored of the same four walls, and the same neighborhood, the same stupid people.

Maybe that was why, one day, out of the blue he packed a bag and all his money and walked out the door to the train station.

Maybe some traveling would be fun. Not like anybodies going to miss me anyway.


So Nagisa's running away to escape forced gender reassignment, Asano's running away to escape his crazy father, kayano's running away to frame somebody for her murder (lol, Gone girl) and Karma's running away because he knows nobody will miss him (which i personally think is most tragic)

What do you think of the characters and their situations so far.. should I continue? let me know.