I'm a italian girl and this is a translation of a story of mine, so don't care too much about my English.
I hope you will enjoy it!

All she has to do is lock eyes with him and immediately she begins to burn.

Sakura is really closed by the flames – and they burn so much.

Without thinking about it, she knows it's his fault, because if he doesn't look at her the fire will stop to blaze.

It's all right, however, because he's there and he watches her burn and she loves the way it hurts.

A few moments and the flames put out themselves and he's not there anymore, he's disappeared.

It was only a dream, but the flames still blaze inside her and it's his fault.

Sasuke isn't there e Sakura fells awful – and it hurts so much.

All burns, but it's all right.

The fire and the flames are the feelings Sakura has for Sasuke's metaphor. They burn and hurt, bur for her it's all right, because she knows she can't live without Sasuke.

In the first part, Sakura dreams about Sasuke and, when he looks at her, the fire, in literal sense, begins to burn her. If he doesn't look at her, she will stop to feel bad, but in this way she will suffer more, because of this she loves the way it hurts, if this means he's with her.

In the second part, the dream is over and Sakura understands it was only a dream. The flames are put out, but the fire is still inside her, symbol of the love she can't stop to fell.

I wanted the style was confused, in the first part because Sakura is dreaming and when you sleep the thoughts are neither coherent nor linear. In the second part, however, I wanted to use the same style (there are some "e" who repeat themselves, it's not a mistake) because Sakura is awake, but her love is become an obsession who is bring her to the madness, so she can't control herself.