Ok Guys so I am changing this a bit because it was going to be One chapter but now i want this to be longer so they name isnt really relevent but I dont want to change it :)


By: Tess

Rating: PG

Synopsis: So Anakin defeats and the first chapter is about Anakin and Vader but the rest is what happened afterwards

Disclaimer: No matter how much I love star wars I sadly don't own it

Reviews: hell yea and constrictive criticism is awesome to 3

Padme My Angel My Love runs down the ramp of her ship and I know she knows somethings up I fight with Vader to talk with her first and my mind wins and I hug her

"I saw your ship what are you doing out here" I said my own mind still controlling my mouth

"I was so worried about you Obi wan told me Terrible things" She Stammers And I wince knowing its true

"What things" I hope that Obi wan left out the worst bits

"He said you turned to the Dark side" At this Vader who had been trying to take over pushed his anger through and began to control us

"Obi Wan is trying to turn you against me" Vader Booms

"He cares about us" I inwardly gasp knowing this will send Vader over the edge

"Us?" he growls

"He knows he wants to help you
Anakin all I want is your love" She says grasping to the concept that Anakin is still in here and I am but falling slowly

"love won't save you Padme only my new powers will" Vader Growls his love for Padme yet hate for everything coursing through his no our veins

"at what cost you're a good person Anakin don't do this" Padme My Angel says slowly I try to say something but Vader pushes back at me

"I won't lose you like the way I lost my mother, I am becoming more powerful than any Jedi has ever dreamed of and I am doing it for you, to protect you" Padme Shakes her head realizing that
someone else is here and I feel horrible knowing fully well that it is my fault for wanting to protect her that there is this monster is in my is controlling my every move

"Anakin come away from this place come with me, help me raise our child leave every thing else while we still can" and I so want to hold her like we did on Naboo but Vader replies instead saying

"don't you see we don't have to run away any more
I have brought peace to the republic
I am more powerful than the chancellor I can other throw him
and together you and I can rule the galaxy
make things the way we want them to be" But i know Vader is so Evil nothing will be the way Padme wants

"I don't believe what I am hearing Obi Wan was right you've changed" Padme says and I know she has made the same choice as me

"I don't want to hear anymore about Obi wan the Jedi turned against me don't you turn against me" No I want to yell you turned against the Jedi and Nobody talks to my wife that way but Vader is Pushing me down and i hate it

"I don't know you any more Anakin your breaking my heart your going down a path I can't follow" and to hear her so sad I break and I don't know how Vader can live knowing the Pain he has caused I think back to Naboo by the Lake and I am filled with light and I know that's what I am supposed to do - think about the good things to push Vader back

"because of obi wan" His voice is full of dark and I hate it

"Because of what you have done, what you plan to do Stop now come back
I LOVE YOU " I hear the determination in her voice and I think of her as Queen Amidala the first time I met

"LIAR" Vader Gasps but I know Padme doesn't know what he is going on about and I see confusion in her eyes she

"No NO " she tries to explain but Vader that horrible monster cuts her off

"Your with Him you brought him here to kill me" Vader is now almost completely consumed with anger and I am doing anything to stay alive a tiny bright light amongst years of darkness making me want to fall asleep

Then before I know Vader steps towards her and holds out his hand and lowly but surely starts to choke My Angel and I so badly want to realize to my anger but i know I mustn't

"Let her go Anakin" I look up at the sound of my name and I see my Master standing there ready to fight me no Vader

"Ana Anakin" Padme chokes out and I want to hate Vader for this but i know I can't no matter what

"LET HER GO " Obi Wan Yells with an anger I have never heard before

Padme Gasps in a Ragged breath and I hate the fact she thinks it is me in there when in fact I am being pushed down and out all to quickly

"You turned her against me" Vader is getting to close to pushing me a way to quickly

"You have done that your self" Obi Wan has the calm back in his voice which i seek refuge in and try to open my we light to try and regain some life from this monster

"You will not take her from me" but all to quickly Vader takes over again

"Your anger and your lust for power have already done that" I am getting so sleepy like a just want a qui-NO I interrupt myself so I don't fall asleep

"You have allowed this dark lord to twist your mind until now you have become the very thing you swore to destroy" Vader bristles at bringing told off like a Padawan as that was what he hated the most

"Don't lecture me Obi Wan I see through the lies of the Jedi I do not feat the dark side as you do, I have brought peace freedom justice and security to my new empire" Even i jump at hearing him call it 'his' new Empire

"Your new empire?" Obi Wan is just as surprised as me but at least he has full control over his body unlike me who can nearly think for my self

"Don't make me kill you" Vader growls with as much anger as he did when he killed the tusk an raiders perhaps even worse

"Anakin my allegiance is to the Republic to DEMOCRACY" Obi wan is getting quietly angry now but still doesn't want to fight

"If you're not with me then your against me" And I know they will battle for one of us being the last one I sadly regret

"Only a sith deals in absolutes" Obi Wan Exclaims

"I will do what I must" And I felt Vader Pushing me down so deep I just want to sleep

But the last thing i here is "You will try" before I fall asleep or perhaps I die I don't quite know

Okay so first Chapter and its Already a cliff hanger hehe