Hey there!!! It's me LilMoonGoddess! I'm finally back with this story since Thought
You Loved Me has been doing pretty good. Hehe. This is the revised version of
Cupid. I'll try to keep up with the dialogue and slow down the relationships. Hehe.
Umm...I decided to change the story line just to let you know. Girls are all 23, while
the guys are 26. There's still the club, Silver Moon, and all that stuff, just some
differences! On with the long awaited chapter! LOLZ.
Cupid
Chapter 1
By LilMoonGoddess
One sunny day in June, a beautiful woman with silver/blonde hair in waves in
curls that ran down to her calves and these clear crystal blue eyes walked across
the street heading towards the infamous Silver Moon Club oblivious of the stares
that she was getting from the men being the innocent that she was.
"Hello Mike." the blonde greeted the who was holding the door open for her.
"Hey there Serena, the rest of the girls are already here, you should really
get in there before Raye's top blows." replied Mike.
"Thanks Mike." she gave a little giggle and walked in with a smile.
When she walked through the doors, she took a little look around and saw
everything that she and her friends had worked for almost half of their lives. She
saw numerous tables waiting for the usual guests, the huge dance floor, the bar
where she and her friends stayed to serve drinks, and so much more! She quickly
walked up to the bar where she knew her friends were waiting for her. An eccentric
woman with waist length blonde hair and sky blue eyes ran towards Serena once
she saw her.
"Serena! You know Raye's gonna be so mad at you!" whispered Mina.
"Sorry! I could not just up and leave the meeting! You know Diamond. He
would do just anything to keep me in his presence hoping that I'll fall in
love with him. For sure I am. Kill me before I do." said Serena while
rolling her eyes when she mentioned the name Diamond.
As they were talking, they neared the group waiting for them. Amy with her
short blue hair and deep sapphire eyes. She was the smartest of them all and
wanted to be a doctor in a couple of years. Everyone wondered what brought her
into the club business. Then there was Lita with her brown hair and auburn streaks
running through it that went to mid back in curls yet she usually kept it up in a
ponytail during the day. She was the cook of the place. Her mother had been a
great cook until she died in that accident a couple years back, but she taught Lita
everything she knew. Then, Serena gulped. There was Raye. She was the fireball of
the group. She had this beautiful black hair that went a little past her waist with
these violet streaks throughout her hair. She has these exotic deep violet eyes that
went well with her dark hair.
"SERENA! WHERE ON EARTH HAVE YOU BEEN! WE HAVE BEEN WAITING
FOR ALMOST AN HOUR!!!" bellowed Raye.
"Well, I have one word for you, Diamond." replied Serena.
"Oh!" exclaimed everyone except Raye.
"What does this have to do with HIM?" asked Raye.
"Oh Raye! You know that man! He waits on Serena's hand and foot. It's like
he worships the ground she walks on!" exclaimed Mina.
"OK! I'll excuse you JUST this one time knowing Diamond." said Raye.
"Thanks Raye! Now if only I had an excuse like this everytime!" said Serena.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah. Let's go get dressed, the guests are going to come
soon." said Raye.
The girls walked back into the dressing room to get into their outfits for the
night. They always wore matching outfits, but different colors. Tonight it was tight
black leather pants with a tight satin halter top that hugged their upper figure.
Serena's halter top was silver, Mina's gold, Amy's sky blue, Lita's a sea green, and
finally Raye's was a deep crimson. To finish it all off, they had on black high heels.
Everyone had their hair down tonight. Although Lita always had her hair up during
the day, she liked to put it down during work for some reason or the other. They
walked out hearing the DJ testing out the speakers. They took their places at the
bar knowing that there was already a long line of people waiting to be let in
outside. They were equally spread apart along the counter of the bar which went in
a circle. The beautiful counter top was made of a black marble with white swirls in
it. After getting settled in, the doors were opened and the first group of people
walked in looking at their surroundings while waiting for more to come in. About
half and hour passed, and the club was packed! The DJ started playing some of
his music bringing groups onto the dance floor. The group of girls at the bar spent
the night handing out drinks to their costumers and the night went on as any other
night they spent here. Soon enough though, with all of the music, great food,
dancing, and drinking the night soon ended with time passing by so quickly, the
club closed and the girls were exhausted. It was about 3 in the morning and they
had a lot of stuff to do today. They quickly changed back into the their usual
clothes before driving their cars home. Serena walked to her black porshe and
drove home to her apartment a few blocks from here. When she got to the complex
she realized that there was a moving van outside. She ignored it and walked into
the elevator. The doors were just about to close when a voice yelled out to tell her
to hold the doors. She had not heard for she was very tired and the doors closed
on a very surprised face. Serena only had a quick glimpse of the face before the
doors had closed, but from what she saw, he was very handsome. Serena then
tiredly walked to the door of her apartment. The door swung open and she put her
keys on the table under the mirror that was in the foyer in which she was standing.
Coming from a rich and prestigious family meant that nothing but the best for their
little princess as her parents had said. She walked into her living room which
contained a large entertainment system and cream leather couches. The carpet
was also a light cream which went with the couch. On the wall opposite of the
foyer was a large window that went from about 2 feet from the ground and 2 feet
down from the ceiling. It gave her a great view of the city, New York. She threw her
purse and jacket onto the couch and went to the kitchen for a quick bite before
catching a few hours of sleep. In the middle of her fairly large kitchen she had an
island with a granite counter top and stools placed around it. She had cherry
cabinets with everything that any other kitchen needs. She had a few cookies
before heading to the bathroom and getting ready for sleep.
Her bedroom had a huge king-sized canopy bed with cream and white curtains
hanging from it. She also had the same window she had in the living room except
these also had white and cream curtains to give her some privacy. There was a
vanity to do her hair and make up with dressers that matched it. When her head hit
the pillow, she instantly fell asleep due to the tiring day.
About 7 hours later at 10 o clock Serena awoke. She quickly walked into the
bathroom that was adjoined to her bedroom. She took a quick shower and decided
to put her hair up into her trademark hair do that she had worn as a child and grew
out of it, but she still wore it every once in a while. Since it was warm outside she
settled for a pair of white shorts and a baby blue tank top. She then walked into the
kitchen to make some eggs for a quick breakfast before meeting up with the girls
to get some shopping done. When she finished, she washed up the dishes and
looked at the clock to see that it was about 11:15. She had to meet the girls at half
past noon. She still had over an hour left. Serena settled down with a book to read
on the comfortable couch in her study which had numerous book shelves filled
with who knows how many books. When Serena looked at the time, she noticed
that it was already 12 o clock which meant that she should leave right now since
she did not want to be late again shuddering at the thought of what Raye was to
do. As she walked out the door she bumped into someone that was heading down
the hall. She looked up and saw the most incredible deep blue eyes that rivaled the
sea itself. He had silky ebony hair that complimented his eyes. The way that his
hair fell into his eyes gave him the sexy and dangerous aura around him. She
shuddered as she caught herself wanting to brush his hair away from his eyes.
~*Darien POV, sort of*~
It was her! The woman that I had see in the elevator. I did not know that we
were going to live on the same floor. He stood there looking at her slim and
curvaceous figure. Her stomach was flat and incredibly small. She had smooth legs
that could go on for days. Her hair was up in this cute style, it strangely looked like
meatballs. He looked up to her face and saw that she had soft lips that looked
kissable to him. He then looked into her eyes and were captivated by the crystal
blue eyes.
~*Serena*~
'Why is he just staring at me? Do I have something on my face? Oh Serena!
Why didn't you check just before you left?'
She looked at her watch and saw that 10 minutes had gone by and she still
had to meet the girls!
"I am sorry Mr...." started Serena.
"Shields, Darien Shields." said Darien.
"Well Mr. Shields I am sorry, but I have somewhere to go and if you do not
mind, I shall be taking my leave now."
"It's certainly no problem...Meatball Head." muttered Darien.
"Excuse me? Did I just hear you insult my hair!" She exclaimed.
"Geez. No need to scream. And yes, I did, do you have a problem with
that?" replied Darien.
"I cannot believe you, if this is for the elevator thing, well you should have
yelled earlier and I could not hear you because I was just coming home
from work and was VERY tired."
"Oh great, so Meatball Head decides to blame it on her job."
"Ugh! You know what? I do not even want to talk to you! Now, I have an
appointment that I am going to be late to if I do not leave right now. Serena
quickly walked to the elevator noticing that Darien was still standing beside her. He
being the gentleman that he is let her in first. She pushed the lobby button. She
could not help but to admire him in the mirrors they had in the elevator. He noticed
her looking and winked at her through the mirror.
'UGH! The nerve of that man! Oh why can't this elevator go any faster?'
It seemed like hours and hours to Serena before they finally reached their
destined floor. Darien followed Serena to the car garage. She looked over to see
that his car was parked right next to hers. She saw the new black lexus model right
in front of her. She stood there staring at the car until she finally snapped out of
her trance and quickly walked to her car before she was late. Looking at the time, it
was already 12:15. She still had 15 minutes to drive to the mall and meet the girls
at the food court. She quickly drove to the mall and parked her car in the packed
parking lot. She briskly walked through the doors and headed towards the food
court. She met the rest over there with 5 minutes to spare. Everyone looked at her
with a shocked expression on their faces. Serena let out a huge grin. Even this
time Raye could not say anything to her about her tardiness. Everyone soon
dropped out of their stupor and headed to their favorite store to buy new outfits.
There they decided to buy matching ones to wear for work tonight. They ended up
with short miniskirts that were white, and these halter tops that also hugged their
upper body. They bought the same colors as they wore every single night for work.
They then headed to another store and bought clothes for the other nights of work
and just for fun, during the day sort of clothes. They shopped until it was almost
time to go in for work. They all drove to the club together in their separate cars.
They walked through the doors with their new outfit in hand to wear tonight.
"Hey there Mike!" the girls greeted their bouncer.
"Hey there girls. I see you did some shopping?" he chuckled.
The girls then ducked past him and went to the dressing room. They soon
came out wearing their new outfits and even shoes that they had bought. The
group walked behind the counter just as the herd of people was coming in through
the doors. The night wore on and on just like any other until practically everything
and everybody stopped to look towards the door to see a group of 5 men.
One of the men had long blonde hair tied into a low ponytail and light blue
eyes while the man standing beside him had long chestnut hair and sparkling green
eyes. They stood to the left of a man that was unseen as of yet. On the right of the
mysterious man in the middle stood a man with hair such a pale blonde, one would
expect it to look white! He had these deep blue eyes which contrasted his hair
greatly. The man standing next to him had short blonde hair and laughing emerald
green eyes. The man in the middle finally came out of the shadows. Serena gasped
when she saw him. It was Darien! The annoying man that had insulted her hair
today. A waiter snapped out of his trance and showed the group of men to a table.
Once the men were seated, everything went back to as it was before the group
entered. The girls made a huddle at the bar seeing that no one was going to come
and get a drink.
"Oh my gosh!" exclaimed Amy.
"Those are the five most eligible bachelors in the world!" said Lita.
"Zachary, Nathan, Kevin, Jason, and..." Raye was cut off by Serena.
"Darien." said Serena.
"Hey! I did not know that you were interested in this kind of stuff Serena!
Exclaimed Mina.
"I am not! It is just that I had the chance to 'talk' to him this morning. He
lives on the same floor as I do. I am not sure, but it is a possibility that the
other men also live in the same complex." said Serena, "Besides, I am not
interested in Darien like that! He insulted my hair this morning! He called me
a Meatball Head!"
"Oh Serena! Do you know how many girls would kill to see or even talk to
Darien?" asked Lita.
"Oh yeah sure. I did not know seeing that he is me most eligible bachelor in
the world out of all them." said Serena.
"Darien is pretty good looking but I have my eye on Jason." said Raye.
"I agree except I like Zachary." said Amy while blushing.
"Kevin is mine!" exclaimed Mina.
"Nathan looks just like my old..." started Lita.
"You old boyfriend!" exclaimed the girls which caused a few eyes to be
directed towards them. The group of girls burst into giggles and quickly went back
to work. They never noticed a group of men staring at them as they separated.
Each man had their eyes on a separate girl that was behind the counter......
End of Chapter 1
So what do you think? Aren't you so happy that I've got a revised chapter
out! OK. So there has been a lot of things that have been changed, but still! Hehe.
Serena and Darien won't like each other until...well I don't know when yet. I'll try to
get the next chapter out soon! Bubai n C-U LATA!!!
HUGGIES & KISSIES
~*LILMOONGODDESS*~
You Loved Me has been doing pretty good. Hehe. This is the revised version of
Cupid. I'll try to keep up with the dialogue and slow down the relationships. Hehe.
Umm...I decided to change the story line just to let you know. Girls are all 23, while
the guys are 26. There's still the club, Silver Moon, and all that stuff, just some
differences! On with the long awaited chapter! LOLZ.
Cupid
Chapter 1
By LilMoonGoddess
One sunny day in June, a beautiful woman with silver/blonde hair in waves in
curls that ran down to her calves and these clear crystal blue eyes walked across
the street heading towards the infamous Silver Moon Club oblivious of the stares
that she was getting from the men being the innocent that she was.
"Hello Mike." the blonde greeted the who was holding the door open for her.
"Hey there Serena, the rest of the girls are already here, you should really
get in there before Raye's top blows." replied Mike.
"Thanks Mike." she gave a little giggle and walked in with a smile.
When she walked through the doors, she took a little look around and saw
everything that she and her friends had worked for almost half of their lives. She
saw numerous tables waiting for the usual guests, the huge dance floor, the bar
where she and her friends stayed to serve drinks, and so much more! She quickly
walked up to the bar where she knew her friends were waiting for her. An eccentric
woman with waist length blonde hair and sky blue eyes ran towards Serena once
she saw her.
"Serena! You know Raye's gonna be so mad at you!" whispered Mina.
"Sorry! I could not just up and leave the meeting! You know Diamond. He
would do just anything to keep me in his presence hoping that I'll fall in
love with him. For sure I am. Kill me before I do." said Serena while
rolling her eyes when she mentioned the name Diamond.
As they were talking, they neared the group waiting for them. Amy with her
short blue hair and deep sapphire eyes. She was the smartest of them all and
wanted to be a doctor in a couple of years. Everyone wondered what brought her
into the club business. Then there was Lita with her brown hair and auburn streaks
running through it that went to mid back in curls yet she usually kept it up in a
ponytail during the day. She was the cook of the place. Her mother had been a
great cook until she died in that accident a couple years back, but she taught Lita
everything she knew. Then, Serena gulped. There was Raye. She was the fireball of
the group. She had this beautiful black hair that went a little past her waist with
these violet streaks throughout her hair. She has these exotic deep violet eyes that
went well with her dark hair.
"SERENA! WHERE ON EARTH HAVE YOU BEEN! WE HAVE BEEN WAITING
FOR ALMOST AN HOUR!!!" bellowed Raye.
"Well, I have one word for you, Diamond." replied Serena.
"Oh!" exclaimed everyone except Raye.
"What does this have to do with HIM?" asked Raye.
"Oh Raye! You know that man! He waits on Serena's hand and foot. It's like
he worships the ground she walks on!" exclaimed Mina.
"OK! I'll excuse you JUST this one time knowing Diamond." said Raye.
"Thanks Raye! Now if only I had an excuse like this everytime!" said Serena.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah. Let's go get dressed, the guests are going to come
soon." said Raye.
The girls walked back into the dressing room to get into their outfits for the
night. They always wore matching outfits, but different colors. Tonight it was tight
black leather pants with a tight satin halter top that hugged their upper figure.
Serena's halter top was silver, Mina's gold, Amy's sky blue, Lita's a sea green, and
finally Raye's was a deep crimson. To finish it all off, they had on black high heels.
Everyone had their hair down tonight. Although Lita always had her hair up during
the day, she liked to put it down during work for some reason or the other. They
walked out hearing the DJ testing out the speakers. They took their places at the
bar knowing that there was already a long line of people waiting to be let in
outside. They were equally spread apart along the counter of the bar which went in
a circle. The beautiful counter top was made of a black marble with white swirls in
it. After getting settled in, the doors were opened and the first group of people
walked in looking at their surroundings while waiting for more to come in. About
half and hour passed, and the club was packed! The DJ started playing some of
his music bringing groups onto the dance floor. The group of girls at the bar spent
the night handing out drinks to their costumers and the night went on as any other
night they spent here. Soon enough though, with all of the music, great food,
dancing, and drinking the night soon ended with time passing by so quickly, the
club closed and the girls were exhausted. It was about 3 in the morning and they
had a lot of stuff to do today. They quickly changed back into the their usual
clothes before driving their cars home. Serena walked to her black porshe and
drove home to her apartment a few blocks from here. When she got to the complex
she realized that there was a moving van outside. She ignored it and walked into
the elevator. The doors were just about to close when a voice yelled out to tell her
to hold the doors. She had not heard for she was very tired and the doors closed
on a very surprised face. Serena only had a quick glimpse of the face before the
doors had closed, but from what she saw, he was very handsome. Serena then
tiredly walked to the door of her apartment. The door swung open and she put her
keys on the table under the mirror that was in the foyer in which she was standing.
Coming from a rich and prestigious family meant that nothing but the best for their
little princess as her parents had said. She walked into her living room which
contained a large entertainment system and cream leather couches. The carpet
was also a light cream which went with the couch. On the wall opposite of the
foyer was a large window that went from about 2 feet from the ground and 2 feet
down from the ceiling. It gave her a great view of the city, New York. She threw her
purse and jacket onto the couch and went to the kitchen for a quick bite before
catching a few hours of sleep. In the middle of her fairly large kitchen she had an
island with a granite counter top and stools placed around it. She had cherry
cabinets with everything that any other kitchen needs. She had a few cookies
before heading to the bathroom and getting ready for sleep.
Her bedroom had a huge king-sized canopy bed with cream and white curtains
hanging from it. She also had the same window she had in the living room except
these also had white and cream curtains to give her some privacy. There was a
vanity to do her hair and make up with dressers that matched it. When her head hit
the pillow, she instantly fell asleep due to the tiring day.
About 7 hours later at 10 o clock Serena awoke. She quickly walked into the
bathroom that was adjoined to her bedroom. She took a quick shower and decided
to put her hair up into her trademark hair do that she had worn as a child and grew
out of it, but she still wore it every once in a while. Since it was warm outside she
settled for a pair of white shorts and a baby blue tank top. She then walked into the
kitchen to make some eggs for a quick breakfast before meeting up with the girls
to get some shopping done. When she finished, she washed up the dishes and
looked at the clock to see that it was about 11:15. She had to meet the girls at half
past noon. She still had over an hour left. Serena settled down with a book to read
on the comfortable couch in her study which had numerous book shelves filled
with who knows how many books. When Serena looked at the time, she noticed
that it was already 12 o clock which meant that she should leave right now since
she did not want to be late again shuddering at the thought of what Raye was to
do. As she walked out the door she bumped into someone that was heading down
the hall. She looked up and saw the most incredible deep blue eyes that rivaled the
sea itself. He had silky ebony hair that complimented his eyes. The way that his
hair fell into his eyes gave him the sexy and dangerous aura around him. She
shuddered as she caught herself wanting to brush his hair away from his eyes.
~*Darien POV, sort of*~
It was her! The woman that I had see in the elevator. I did not know that we
were going to live on the same floor. He stood there looking at her slim and
curvaceous figure. Her stomach was flat and incredibly small. She had smooth legs
that could go on for days. Her hair was up in this cute style, it strangely looked like
meatballs. He looked up to her face and saw that she had soft lips that looked
kissable to him. He then looked into her eyes and were captivated by the crystal
blue eyes.
~*Serena*~
'Why is he just staring at me? Do I have something on my face? Oh Serena!
Why didn't you check just before you left?'
She looked at her watch and saw that 10 minutes had gone by and she still
had to meet the girls!
"I am sorry Mr...." started Serena.
"Shields, Darien Shields." said Darien.
"Well Mr. Shields I am sorry, but I have somewhere to go and if you do not
mind, I shall be taking my leave now."
"It's certainly no problem...Meatball Head." muttered Darien.
"Excuse me? Did I just hear you insult my hair!" She exclaimed.
"Geez. No need to scream. And yes, I did, do you have a problem with
that?" replied Darien.
"I cannot believe you, if this is for the elevator thing, well you should have
yelled earlier and I could not hear you because I was just coming home
from work and was VERY tired."
"Oh great, so Meatball Head decides to blame it on her job."
"Ugh! You know what? I do not even want to talk to you! Now, I have an
appointment that I am going to be late to if I do not leave right now. Serena
quickly walked to the elevator noticing that Darien was still standing beside her. He
being the gentleman that he is let her in first. She pushed the lobby button. She
could not help but to admire him in the mirrors they had in the elevator. He noticed
her looking and winked at her through the mirror.
'UGH! The nerve of that man! Oh why can't this elevator go any faster?'
It seemed like hours and hours to Serena before they finally reached their
destined floor. Darien followed Serena to the car garage. She looked over to see
that his car was parked right next to hers. She saw the new black lexus model right
in front of her. She stood there staring at the car until she finally snapped out of
her trance and quickly walked to her car before she was late. Looking at the time, it
was already 12:15. She still had 15 minutes to drive to the mall and meet the girls
at the food court. She quickly drove to the mall and parked her car in the packed
parking lot. She briskly walked through the doors and headed towards the food
court. She met the rest over there with 5 minutes to spare. Everyone looked at her
with a shocked expression on their faces. Serena let out a huge grin. Even this
time Raye could not say anything to her about her tardiness. Everyone soon
dropped out of their stupor and headed to their favorite store to buy new outfits.
There they decided to buy matching ones to wear for work tonight. They ended up
with short miniskirts that were white, and these halter tops that also hugged their
upper body. They bought the same colors as they wore every single night for work.
They then headed to another store and bought clothes for the other nights of work
and just for fun, during the day sort of clothes. They shopped until it was almost
time to go in for work. They all drove to the club together in their separate cars.
They walked through the doors with their new outfit in hand to wear tonight.
"Hey there Mike!" the girls greeted their bouncer.
"Hey there girls. I see you did some shopping?" he chuckled.
The girls then ducked past him and went to the dressing room. They soon
came out wearing their new outfits and even shoes that they had bought. The
group walked behind the counter just as the herd of people was coming in through
the doors. The night wore on and on just like any other until practically everything
and everybody stopped to look towards the door to see a group of 5 men.
One of the men had long blonde hair tied into a low ponytail and light blue
eyes while the man standing beside him had long chestnut hair and sparkling green
eyes. They stood to the left of a man that was unseen as of yet. On the right of the
mysterious man in the middle stood a man with hair such a pale blonde, one would
expect it to look white! He had these deep blue eyes which contrasted his hair
greatly. The man standing next to him had short blonde hair and laughing emerald
green eyes. The man in the middle finally came out of the shadows. Serena gasped
when she saw him. It was Darien! The annoying man that had insulted her hair
today. A waiter snapped out of his trance and showed the group of men to a table.
Once the men were seated, everything went back to as it was before the group
entered. The girls made a huddle at the bar seeing that no one was going to come
and get a drink.
"Oh my gosh!" exclaimed Amy.
"Those are the five most eligible bachelors in the world!" said Lita.
"Zachary, Nathan, Kevin, Jason, and..." Raye was cut off by Serena.
"Darien." said Serena.
"Hey! I did not know that you were interested in this kind of stuff Serena!
Exclaimed Mina.
"I am not! It is just that I had the chance to 'talk' to him this morning. He
lives on the same floor as I do. I am not sure, but it is a possibility that the
other men also live in the same complex." said Serena, "Besides, I am not
interested in Darien like that! He insulted my hair this morning! He called me
a Meatball Head!"
"Oh Serena! Do you know how many girls would kill to see or even talk to
Darien?" asked Lita.
"Oh yeah sure. I did not know seeing that he is me most eligible bachelor in
the world out of all them." said Serena.
"Darien is pretty good looking but I have my eye on Jason." said Raye.
"I agree except I like Zachary." said Amy while blushing.
"Kevin is mine!" exclaimed Mina.
"Nathan looks just like my old..." started Lita.
"You old boyfriend!" exclaimed the girls which caused a few eyes to be
directed towards them. The group of girls burst into giggles and quickly went back
to work. They never noticed a group of men staring at them as they separated.
Each man had their eyes on a separate girl that was behind the counter......
End of Chapter 1
So what do you think? Aren't you so happy that I've got a revised chapter
out! OK. So there has been a lot of things that have been changed, but still! Hehe.
Serena and Darien won't like each other until...well I don't know when yet. I'll try to
get the next chapter out soon! Bubai n C-U LATA!!!
HUGGIES & KISSIES
~*LILMOONGODDESS*~
