Last Thoughts
By B.M.

Please note that this is my first attempt at writing a fanfic and any reviews would be greatly appreciated, even flames.


I sit there on my knees praying
Praying with all my heart
Praying with the materia I once thought useless
Praying to save my friends and the one I love

I open my eyes and look up
And I see the one I love
With fear in his eyes
Fear brought by being controlled

He has his sword above my head
And I realize why he is afraid
I stare at him and smile
For I realize his love is to great to be ignored

I'm about to get up to be with him
When he suddenly looks up with even greater fear
I also look up and see the reason why
And realize that my end is here

I look at him one more time
Wanting him to be the last thing that I see
Wishing that it didn't end like this
Then feel my body being penetrated

I look down and see another sword
And see it leave my body
I fall down into my love's arms
I look up at him for the last time

He looks at me with sadness in his eyes
And I see him start to cry
I whisper to him with my last breath "I love you"
Then everything goes black

Please tell me what you thought, thanks :).