Hello to all members of 's community. I've been pondering for some time now: Should I upload my first attempt at a Pokémon FanFiction? After some encouragment (To tell the truth, it took 5 different people to convince me!) I decided to give it a try.

I'm always looking for criticism about my writing and/or my stories pace and momentum. If you think the story needs a little bit more action, a bit more excitement or simply want to give me your ideas of how things are done properly, throw me a Review or a Message. I always love to hear suggestions. But please, for the sake of my sanity and keeping up a good community: Do it in a respectful manner. I love detailed explanation about my mistakes, but just a simple "Story su**s!" doesn't cut it.

A few details about the FanFiction in advance:

- The story focuses on my own OC, Dylan. Dylan is a 15 year old Pokémon trainer from Kalos. Everything else will be liftet during the story. Who's that guy everyone is flipping out about in the first Chapter? Why does Dylan know he can't be there? Such things and more will be answered as the story progresses.

- The story takes place 5 years after the anime. While I love the Animes own characters and timeline, I felt moving a few years forward increases my freedom when writing certain things. Namely events, references to Leagues and stuff. Dawn is now 15 years old, just as Dylan. For this story, I assume she hasn't become a Top Coordinator just yet.

- Why is this story T rated and not K or K+? I'm planing on a long legendary Pokémon arc that will involve some cursing, mild language and some other things. I think 70% of the story will stay pretty much K+ stuff.

- A simple note to all the Pearlshippers, Advanceshippers, AltoShippers...did I miss out a ship? Anyway: I'm strongly considering bringing in a romantic aspect into the story. As to how I do it: I have no clue. It will just come with the flow as soon as I decide if I want to do it. If you have a problem with Dawn ending up with another person besides Ash/Satoshi...I suggest you might close your eyes for those parts.

I've wrote way to much already! Enjoy the Prologue and first Chapter of my story! Post a Review and stay tuned!

Pokémon Fan Fiction

Prologue

The train was rocking over the rails at an incredible, steady pace. The area seemed rather tranquil and peaceful, being home to a variety of Pokémon. Just as the train was passing one of the giant pillars, which held the bridge above the ground, some Pidgey were scared and flocked out from underneath the bridge. The tiny bird Pokémon made their way to the trees far away, on the other side of the small lake under the bridge. As the wheels passed the pillar the train was rocked by a sudden motion to both left and right.

There was a short shock inside but nobody seemed to take notice. One of the shoulder bags in the storage space above the seats moved slightly. The movement caused the bag to fall over and snap open, revealing an untidy stack of some notebooks and a package of Pokéfood.. One lonely Pokéball flew out of the bag and landed on an empty seat. The Pokéball rested there for quite some time, only moved around a few inches by the trains constant motions to left and right.

The Pokéball suddenly snapped open while emitting an intense white light, sending a hissing sound trough the train compartment.

A small, fox-like creature materialized inside the light. As the light stopped it stretched tiredly as if it just woke up from a long and relaxing nap. Ah, that was good! it thought in a content manner. Shaking it's black and red furred body it looked around the compartment. It was a rather simple train compartment, nothing much to do in here. The fox observed the sleeping figure in front of him. The boys head was rested against the wall, a small pillow between his hair and the trains inner hull was making this position somewhat comfortable. His legs were stretched out, revealing the dark blue pants and thin brown boots. His torso was covered by a red-white vest with a black t-shirt underneath. A blue cap covered his dark-blonde hair and parts of his face.

He's still asleep, huh? the little fox thought for himself, observing the boy sleep in his seat. Looking up at the window he saw the suns light shine into the room but he thought there was still enough time to marvel the sight of the new region later.

A sudden sound pushed the fox out of his thoughts as his head turned to the corridor. Three girls were walking down the hallway, discussing something and giggling in excitement. They seemed to be discussing the recent Kalos Battle Tournament. A certain name was called in one of their loud exclamations, a name the little fox was all to familiar with.

The fox giggled silently, closing his eyes in a cute fashion while revealing his small but sharp fangs. I know I was told I shouldn't do this...but this is such an opportunity! he reasoned with himself, jumping down from the seat. This is going to be so much fun! ...