Its just not right.
A/N: Yo lads how y'all doin? this is my first story so please dont be 2 hard for meh. Oh and btw im only going 2 talk like dis in an A/N. dont expct dis language in the story lol. Pls review and tell me what i do wrong or ideas for da story or anything like that. U can also sent some critics about mah way of putting da wors on paper. But now something that probably everyone wants 2 know. Im gonna make dis s chaos story. But not ur ordinary chaos story. Ok maybe a little bit but who cares XD. The pairing will be Percy with an OC. BUTTTTTTTTT a nice OC! In dis chapter the not flashbacks are percy's pov, the flashbacks are third peron.
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Chapter 1: Darkness.
Darkness. Revenge. Confusion. What should he think? Its just not right. The thoughts of the past week overflowed him. He coudnt help it. He cried. How ironic, he had defeat all monsters and had done things that would make other people kill themselfs. But now he cried, on the moment you least expected it. He wanted to curl up and think about nice things, but instead his head replayed the last weak in his head over and over, and over. darkness.
flashback.
He had a brother. He had a brother. That thought played back in his head over and over. "I HAVE A BROTHER!" He cried out loud. "I think they get it percy." Jake, his new brother said. "who cares! Cant i just be happy?". "your so one of a kind percy" Annabeth said laughing. " But that what you like about me" He replied and kissed her on her cheek.
flashback ending.
He remembered it like it was yesterday. darkness. It whas the only thought that keeped him in live. But than that scumbag Jamy had to come. I had to save my brother, just like he saved me. revenge.
flashback.
"Why are you staring at me?" Jamy said. "Well your kind of my new brother." Annabeth replied rolling her eyes. "Or you just think im sexy like everyone here does." Jamy quickly said. "Dont get to high of yourself otherwise you are gonna have a hard time here." Percy agerly said. "percy let him, he just a new guy, maybe he was populair on school or something" Annabeth said before percy stepped to Jamy. "No let him, he can try whatever he wants but im not gonna pick anything from a freakin' spawn of that idiot fish, i dont get how you have a relaitionship with my sister, did u poison her or something?" Jamy proudly said. "Do you want a fractured skull or something cause that can be done pretty quickly if your gonna say something stupid like that again!"percy shouted, while annabeth quickly stood between the two boys "calm down please!". "No im not gonna back off against a fish brain like that idiot boyfriend of you" he said while pushing Annabeth out of the way. "Now u have gone too far!" percy jumped at Jamy and kicked him against a tree. "How do u like that!" Percy screamed. Than they heard a rumble. suddenly a green blast hit percy right in his chest and percy flew almost five meters back. "idiot." Jamy said while walking away with a hand still flickering of the green power that just surged through his body.
Flasback ending.
revenge. He wanted revenge. He wanted to pull his hart out. He wanted revenge. He wanted too kill. death, kill. but than another wave of emotion hitted him. confusion, so confiused. He still didnt got it. Why. confusion.
flashback.
"I love you" percy murmeled in Annabeths ear. "Uhhh am i disrupting something" Jake said while looking at percy and annabeth making out on percy's bed. "AHH, ever heard of knocking?!"percy and annabeth screamed in unison. "But i was inside all the time, i was just under in bed, Did you guys not hear me or anything?" Jake said looking pretty oblivius. "well what do you think" Annabeth said rolling her eyes. "you tell 'em Annie. " percy said laughing. "Oh shut up perce, But jake what where you doing in bed anyways?". annabeth asked. Jake rolled his eyes like it was very very obvius, "well i dont know about you but the first week at camp is kindof tiring". "oh" annabeth replied. "well im going to go to the toilet" percy said. "I said you shoudnt eat that much pizza at dinner" annabeth said like it wat very logical (wich it probably was) "thanks percy its very very good to know that you are going too the toilet, not..." Jake quickly throwed in the group. Percy just rolled his eyes and walked too the toilet, but before he could get there suddenly the door opened and Jamy walked inside with a gorgon and a hellhound. "annabeth? what are you doing here" jamy almost screamed. "well what are you doing with hellhounds!" annabeth said while trying too grab her dagger wich wasnt there. shit i shoudnt have left my dagger in my cabin. "Im sorry annabeth but my master doesnt tolerate any survivors" Jamy said before sending an enorme blast of green force at her. The force hitted her straight in the chest and send her flying into the fountain. the fountain blasted too pieces and one piecy hit her straight between her eyes, she was instantly dead. death. confusion. revenge. "NOOOOOO" percy screamed. instantly Jamy looked over too him and sent a blast at him. percy dodged the blast but than the blast hit the wall wich exploded and made the whole building collapse. The last thing percy remembered was being pulled out of the building by jake. When percy waked up again he was in a car, He looked around and saw jake riding the car. "what happened?" percy asked. "you dont wanna know" jake replied. Than it all shot back in my head. Annabeth. death. confusion. he cousnt believe it. "we have too get back now!" he screamed. "we cant. he came for you percy. if we go back now, than were probably are gonna die. you saw how he knocked down the whole building with one thought. and you are in no shape too fight." "but." percy interrupted. "im sorre perce, sometime we will get him, but not now."
flashback ending
confusion. death. revenge. darkness. but next to all that, there was a new feeling.
pain.
A/N yoooooo thats the first chapter done!, how did you guys like the story? pls dont flame cause dis is my first story. have a nice day and enjoy this cookie (::).
