Okay I just found some really good spoilers for the first episode, New and Improved Lorelai. So, I am writing this off the basis of the info I found out. If you don't wanna know any spoilers, do not read this. This will probably be about one chapter, and if you want me to post the spoilers at the end of another chapter I will. Just tell me in reviews.
This is a continuation of the end of season five, even though it has been so overplayed. I'm only doing that because that is how the show will be. Okay so on with the story.
Disclaimer: I credit the characters and creation of the show to Amy Sherman Palladino. I also credit the basic idea to her. I am editing and expanding it. Also I credit the Dorothy Parker Drank Here Productions in association with the Hufflund-Pollone Foundation.
New and Improved Lorelai Scenes one, two, and three"What?" Luke asked.
"Will you marry me?" Lorelai repeated.
(After a moment) "Yes." He answered.
Lorelai gave him a watery smile and walked over to him, where she fell into his arms.
After a moment of standing in the middle of the diner wrapped up in each other's arms, Lorelai said,
"Thank you." Lorelai said, but it was muffled in Luke's shirt.
"For what?" Luke said looking down to her.
"For being you. For being the most amazing boyfriend I have ever had." Lorelai said. "Well, fiancé now." She added with a chuckle.
"You're welcome." He said smiling.
"Hey let's go somewhere and celebrate." Lorelai said suddenly, turning around to get her coat and purse.
"Where?" Luke questioned.
"Funkytown." Lorelai said jokingly as she opened the door to the diner.
"Hey, wait." Luke called to her.
"What? Oh God, did you change your mind? How did I screw it up so fast? Was the Funkytown thing too quippy 'cause I thought you liked that about me..." She rambled nervously.
"No. The Funkytown thing was fine. I just...are you sure you want to celebrate now...I mean a minute ago...when you came in here..." He told her a little worried.
"I just want to be happy right now. Okay?" Lorelai said almost pleading with him.
"Yeah - Okay." He said.
Lorelai smiles at him. "Good. Now come on."
Lorelai exits out of the diner. Luke heads after her.
"Where are we going?" Luke asks.
At the bike race
The remnants of the racers finishing the race are straggling in. The Bikers who have already finished the race are walking it off, milling around, some are hanging out in the Gazebo. A few are lying on the ground stretching or cramping. Kirk has set up a first aid table in the street and is on the ground kneeling over an outstretched Biker. He has the biker's leg in his hands and he is aggressively rubbing his hands back and forth like he is working out a cramp. The biker is writhing in pain. After a beat Kirk stops.
"Am I doing this right?" Kirk asked the biker.
"What?" The biker asked.
"Never-mind." Kirk said.
Kirk continues to massage the cramps out of the biker's leg.
Taylor is stomping around the town's square, and Linda is sitting at a table with some crappy trophies on it. Taylor is pacing around, very annoyed, checking his watch, getting more and more annoyed with every biker that straggles in.
"These bikers are like rabbits! And where does it end! I have spent hours waiting on these ridiculous people to come in." Taylor ranted.
"Linda, start breaking all of this stuff down." He says gesturing to the tables. "If I don't get these tables back by midnight, I have to pay for another day!" he said storming off.
"But Taylor, we haven't handed out the trophies yet!" Linda called after him.
"The Trophies to who?" Taylor asked turning around.
"To the winners!" She exclaimed.
"Who cares about giving trophies to the winners! There's no one here to see them get the trophies except the losers, who I'm sure could give a rat's tushee if the winners get a trophy or not." Taylor told her exasperated.
"Okay. Should I put them back in the bubble wrap or…" She asked Taylor.
"Just give them to me!" He says grabbing them from her hands.
Taylor calls out to the bikers, "Who was first?"
A nearby biker laying on the ground raises his hand, and Taylor tosses him the trophy. "Congratulations." Taylor told him sarcastically. "Who was second?" He asked. Another biker raises his hand and is tossed his trophy. "Here. Third?" Taylor calls out.
Yet another biker raises his hand and Taylor tosses him the third place trophy.
"He's not third!" The biker in first place tells Taylor.
Taylor ignores him and continues his rant. "Rat's Tushee, party of one!" he calls out to the workers. "Everybody listen up! We really need to get these tables out of here and break down these chairs. I need the square packed up and cleared out in ten minutes."
Taylor glances across the street and notices Luke and Lorelai at the market trying to open the door but it is locked. "Hey we're closed! The market's closed!" he calls out and then rushes across the street towards the market. "What is wrong with people tonight?"
TBCI hope you liked it. I will continue this; I just didn't want the first chapter to be really long. I will talk more about Luke and Lorelai in the next chapter. Tell me what you think of my interpretation. Please review.
