Update story Note: I have found myself a fuck awesome beta. R-read and/or read now because the story has bee tweeked and tuned.:-). She is a god send to both you and me. All errors and qoutations and such as been fixed. So everyone say your thankyou's to the best beta in the world lisa or twistories1980. Thanks a million lisa who i might add is currently working on chapter 2.
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Note: unlike the regular edward my edward is head strong slightly bsdm, controlling, egotistical, tatward who rightfully so wears many hat when it comes to job for a living.
Warning: BDSM, ROMANTIC/ ACTION/ DRAMA ** Mature audience ONLY...
Without futher interuptions heres the newly tweeked ...
A Billionaire Match Making Service
Criteria:
-Must be a virgin from age 18-22
-Willing to relocate.
-Must want kids.
-Be able to follow rules…
***If you match these criteria then by all means follow the next few simple steps to be on your way in getting your very own billionaire. Good Luck!
"See Bella, I told you this site do exist," Alice said after three hours of searching the site.
I shook my head in disagreement. "No Alice I refuse to go looking for my Mr. Money bags online. I'll meet him face to face and soon I could just feel it."
"Yeah, yeah whatever you've been saying that since sixteen, and that was two years ago now. We've tried dating these losers Bella and they just weren't our match. I mean we bring up babies before sex and they bolt! Stupid fuck heads!" Alice paused and sighed. "I think your forgetting that we live in the dreary and dead town of Forks where the highest paid man living here is like sixty and he only makes forty thousand dollars a year. Besides we have needs. We want older, decent looking men exclusivity. We want to have their babies, their love and most of all their money because we want to be financially set for life."
"I know Alice but I feel like mom and dad would be turning over in their graves because of how you want to go about this. You know what," I paused and inhaled sharply, "let's do it, what would it hurt? The worst thing to happen is we don't find them."
"Yes! I have a good feeling Bella that your Mr. Right is going to be on here!" Alice squealed.
I shook my head. "What! What do you mean my Mr. Right? What about you," I ask her.
"Bella were you listening to the criteria for the site? It said eighteen to twenty-two year olds and a virgin. Hello, look at me! I'm thirty four years old and I'm sure as hell am no virgin! Age is always a factor for guys like that. Besides I don't need a billionaire, a doctor or some really high paying job man will do."
"Oh yeah and where is this doctor or high earning man found?"
Alice chuckled as she answered me. "That's easy! He's going to be your guy's friend, so that way we'll always be close."
I stared at her not knowing if she was serious. "So let me get this straight, your banking on finding the guy of your dreams through me finding a man?" I watched as my sister shook her head. I raised my voice to her. "Are you serious! I never said I especially need a billionaire!"
"Yep," she responded like its nothing.
I sighed again. Maybe I was blowing it out of proportion. Maybe it was nothing to get upset over and I guess I did owe her. Alice had been taking care of me for ten years. Our parents Charlie and Renee were killed in a head on collision. The roads were littered with snow and the conditions were hazardous. Our dad, being Chief Charlie Swan the do gooder, swerved to miss the animal in the middle of the road. He missed the animal but lost control of the car. It rolled over and landed in a ditch. He and mom were gone instantly. As if it wasn't bad enough to lose both of your parents tragically, we weren't eligible to inherent some policy dad was paying into at work because he wasn't killed in active duty. We did inherent their life insurance of fifty thousand dollars. It sounds like a lot of money but it isn't. We have used it only on expenses. Alice had to miss out on going to college so she could raise me. Instead of following her dreams and making a good earning, she has been stuck at Newton's grocery store since their death. We just weren't meant for college.
I was taken out of my day dream by Alice hitting on the side of my head. "Bella! Bella! Bella, pay fucking attention! Sweet Jesus !"
"Owe, what the fuck Alice? That the hell was that for?" I asked rubbing the side of my head.
"I've been calling you for the longest time. Anyway, as I was saying, I'm going to sign you up so I need you to go change into something gorgeous and no make up for a profile pic. First though we need to fill out the questionnaire. Ready?"
"Okay, fine, I'm ready."
Alice smiled wickedly at me. "Right lets proceed then shall we?"
The information on the website read:
Disclaimer: All information is protected by identity theft. Each person is responsible solely on their own safety. We are only responsible for providing a private channel of communication. Each person can choose whether or not to converse on the matching candidate.
** Depending on your answer to the following questions you may be allowed to enter our site after signing up. Five matching candidates profile will be provided a month. As well as those candidates will be notified of your profile in return. Once you've found your match we ask that you remove your profile to prevent further matchups. Thank you
Please press enter to continue.
ENTER
The following questions are to be answered yes or no. Please follow the instructions.
Y=YES/ N= NO
Are you a Virgin (meaning never had sex before) : Y
Are you between the ages 18-22yrs old: Y
Are you willing to relocate: Y
Do you want Kids: Y
Do you have a problem with rules: N
Congratulations you are qualified to create a profile with us. You're now a step closer to finding a billionaire. Please click next to proceed.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Alice and I yelped says Alice I couldn't help but laugh
NEXT
Note: Please click finish when complete.
Candidate profile
Name: Isabella Swan
D.O.B: September8. 1993
SEX: Female
Interested in (sex): Male
Brief description: I'm an outgoing and a very blunt individual who loves reading and shopping. I have blondish/ golden hair with natural brown highlights. Eye color is sky blue. I'm 5'5 inches 127 pounds. For further information feel free to ask.
Compatibility questionnaire:
Age range: 28-42
Height: 5'10"+
Brief description:
I froze when Alice read that aloud.
"Bella what do you want as far as qualities in a man?"
I sat and I thought for what seemed like forever. As soon as it hit me, I started typing: Brief description:
Must have their life figured out; be ready for kids, decent looking, ready for a monogamous relationship etc.
Please upload a recent picture of your self
"Bella why don't you go and change quickly, okay? Put on the dress I laid out for you. It's on your purple comforter." Alice suggested.
I ran up the stairs and straight into my bed room. I quickly went into my room and started stripping. I pulled the black strapless BEBE dress off the hanger. I carefully put my blue stripped Mary Jane pumps on. I ran into the bathroom to try to do something with my head of messy hair. I took it out of the pony tail and shook it out. I ran my fingers through it. I quickly curled it. I looked at myself in the full length mirror and smiled. I was ready.
I ran back down the stairs and stood in front of my older sister. "How is this?"
Alice smiled at me as she pushed my hair back. She rested her hand on my shoulder and kissed my cheek. "You look very gorgeous."
Quietly I smiled at her. "Thank you."
"Oh hush, no need for that." She paused as she reached for the red digital camera. "Picture time!"
After what seemed like forever and maybe a day, she finished. She quickly uploaded the pictures to the computer. She choice which pictures to use carefully.
After my profile is uploaded, we received a message.
Welcome your profile has been created. You should receive your matches shortly.
We decided to walk away from the computer and order pizza. We both fantasized about what this opportunity could mean if I did actually find Mr. Right. As soon as we finished our dinner, Alice logged into my account. She smiled but didn't say a word.
"Okay Alice, read it to me. I'm ready."
"Here we go," she said with excitement in her voice. "Candidate's names: Anthony, he left his last name blank, age twenty eight, six feet two inches and one hundred seventy eight ponds."
I nodded. "Okay, go on. Don't stop until you get to the last one."
"Anxious are we?" Alice teased as she continued. "James Hunter is thirty seven, also six two and two hundred ten pounds. Erick Yorkie is thirty six, five ten and one hundred forty five pounds. Then there is Jacob Black who is thirty, six one and one hundred eight nine pounds. Lastly there is Mike Newman who is twenty nine, five ten and two hundred pounds." Alice paused for a moment and looked at me. "So, who should we click on first?"
While I was in the process of thinking, I heard a "ding" come from the computer's speakers. "Alice, I thought I only got five matches a month."
"You do, lets check out the email," Alice said before she began to read it out loud. "Bella, by now you've received your matches, which does at the moment include me. I'm Anthony and I've seen your picture read and re-read your profile. I take great pleasure in letting you know you've found your man. Let's see I'm twenty eight and I currently reside in California at the moment. I travel extensively for both pleasure and work. My life is fulfilling at the moment I'm only missing that someone to share it with and I'm positive that's you. Now Ms. Isabella let's get to know one another. My only request is we must do so face to face. I know what you are thinking and stop it. I promise that I'm not some serial killer nor a rapist neither a dumb fuck, however I do value my privacy and in return yours because make no mistake your life will soon be our life. Now back to the matter at hand, please feel free to invite your sister Alice with you so you will feel more at ease. I could have a jet as soon as tonight there to pick you guys up in just a few hours. I'll be waiting for your decision. With warmest regards."
I froze. I didn't expect something to happen so suddenly. My profile had only been up for an hour.
"Damn," Alice said. "Wait a minute. How does he know about me?"
"Do you think he had me checked out in the hour my profile has been posted?"
For once Alice didn't say a word, at first. Before I knew it, she tugged on my arm and pulled it. "Please Bella, please, say yes. Please do this for us. You could get your face to face meeting and I'd be with you if he's creepy. You have nothing to lose. An opportunity like this doesn't happen often. The worse case scenario is we get a free vacation. It's not like we have ever been out of Forks before."
"He seems very confident. I don't know. Let me read over his profile again," I told her as I knelt down in front of the desk and began reading to myself. Anthony? November 4, 1983. 28yrs old. 6'2. 178 LBS. Male. Interested in sex: Female. Brief Description: Just ask the question. Compatible description: I'll know once I see her. Then it hit me. "Alice, do you realize he didn't list his last name? I wonder why."
"I didn't realize that." She paused and looked at me. "Do you want to respond? I mean, do you want to go?"
I thought about it. I took a deep breath. "Alice tell him we'll go. I'm all ready dressed, I guess, so we just have to pack." I said rushing up the stairs leaving Alice to write the email back to this Anthony. While I was in the midst of looking through my drawers for my best clothes, Alice yelled up to me.
"Bella, come here quick!"
I raced down the stairs and ran into the living room where the desk was. "What is it?"
"He all ready wrote back! It was only a few seconds after I hit send. He said our flight leaves in three and a half house and he'll see you soon!" Alice yelled as she jumped up and hugged me.
I look on the clock on my night stand. It read eleven thirty am. That would mean at approximately three this afternoon my life could totally change. I started to get nervous.
Hours went by and before I knew it, the door bell rang. I ran to answer it only to be surprised bu a car waiting for us to take us to a private airport in Port Angeles. The man took out bags and loaded them into the trunk. Alice and I walked to the car and sat down. We were both mesmerized.
It was a short drive to the air field. I was amazed when I looked up. "Holy fuck Alice!" I whispered. "That isn't a jet, it's a plane!"
"Shhh," Alice said trying to take the moment in.
The car stopped and we followed the driver to the plane. A flight attendant helped us up the stairs and into the plane. I was taken back when I looked around. This wasn't some small dingy jet, it was a plane! It could seat at least twenty four people comfortably. The inside was all decorated with reds and blacks. Everything screamed sleek, masculine and powerful. I looked around and he wasn't on the flight. I was left still to wonder about the mystery of Anthony.
Alice sat back and took me out of my thoughts. "I could so get use to this!"
I looked at her and smiled because I'm thinking the same thing.
"Miss, wake up. We've land," the friendly attendant smiled.
I stretched and looked at her. "Oh I'm sorry, we must have fallen asleep."
She continued to smile. "There is no need to apologize. I was told to let you ladies know a car driver will be waiting for you at luggage claim."
"Thank you," I smiled at her before she walked away. I look at Alice who looks egger. I look at Alice with glee in my eyes. "Let's go!"
Once we walk to the baggage claim, I felt my water dripping down my back. I looked at my sister, who is looking off somewhere else holding a big bottle of water, with no cover. I got frustrated and yelled at her. "Alice! My dress is soaked!"
Ignoring me, Alice points to a sign in the distance. In the process she dropped her water. I stepped back to look where she was. I sucked in a breath fast and looked up at my name on the sign. I don't know what happened but quickly everything went black.
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