Hey guys and gals, just saying, this is my first fanfic ever so please tell me what to improve on in later chapters

Chapter 1: Prologue

Hazel: 19

Cashew: 17

Hazel was wondering through the streets of Mobius. He was really bored since he had just finished classic mode in SSB4 with all characters and bought all of the characters. So he decided to get to know his surroundings. He stopped in a forest to admire the scene. away from all that technology and getting to know his planet. He continued walking (bumping into trees here and there) until he heard a cry. It sounded like a girl. He rushed over to the sound (running was not his speciality) Only to see a teenage Hedgehog lying next to a tree with red eyes, showing that she was crying. He walked over to her. 'Hey are you all right? What happened?' 'N-nothing. Just family stuff. I had an argument with my Mum for the fourth time this month' 'I have arguments all the time' He sat down 'But you don't understand. This time I got kicked out. And I don't have enough money to buy my own flat...' Hazel thought for a second 'Why don't you...come stay with me?' 'Really? you're okay with that?' 'Sure, C'mon, I'll take you there' He helped her up and began talking 'By the way, I never caught your your name' 'Oh, my name's Cashew' 'My name is Hazel, Nice to meet you Cashew'