Crush-

So I should update your love is a lie but I am struggling with 6 and 7 I have 3 days off this week so there will be a new chapter. So I picture this story kind of happening right before Max and Fang begin dating and yah so on with it ok.

Disclaimer: Nothing I own nothing though I will own David Archuleta's CD in the near future

Note the pov change.. and the song is italized to make reading easier

so anything not in quotes is thoughts

i cut the last chorus... yah deal with it


Fang's POV.

I was sitting on my bed in the house that the flock was currently living in. I looked at the phone in my hand, I listened to Max's story, before there was a moment of silence I quickly asked "Max your right down the hallway why are we talking on the phone?"
She sighed and said "Because we can... I suppose."
I sighed and said "I'm getting off I just got an idea for a song"

I pressed end of my phone and I picked up my guitar and the words just flowed.

Oooh, Whoa, Whoa, Ooh, Ooh, Whoa, Whoa

I hung up the phone tonight
Something happened for the first time
Deep inside
it was a rush, what a rush
Cause the possibility
That you would ever feel the same way
About me
It's just too much, just too much

I believed everything I sang in that verse, I know my feelings I want her to know but it could mess everything up.

Why do I keep running from the truth
All I ever think about is you
You got me hypnotized, so mesmerized
And I just got to know

So I knew I was running from the truth. She did have me mesmerized she was so beautiful her pretty blonde hair falling into her gorgeous face, the way she smiled at me. But all I truely want is to know.

Do you ever think
When you're all alone
All that we can be

Truth be told every day I did wonder if Max every thought that we could be more when we were alone.

Where this thing could go
Am I crazy or falling in love
Is it real or just another crush
Do you catch your breath
When I look at you
Are you holding back
Like the way I do

I wondered if she was folding it back, she does hold things back but are her feelings one thing. "Max are you holding back, do you notice the way i look at you?"

Cause I'm trying, trying to walk away
But I know this crush aint going away, going away

I did know deep inside that this crush wasn't going away. I could have made it more then a crush.

Max's POV

I snuck down the hall to the door by Fang's room. It's my lucky night the door was cracked open I stood there. I listened to the words that came out of his mouth.

Has it ever crossed your mind
When were hangin, spending time girl,
Are we just friends
Is there more, is there more

I stood there listening and yes it had crossed my mind and I wanted us to be more, so much more.

See it's a chance we've gotta take
Cause I believe that we can make this into
Something that will last, last forever, And Ever

We could make it last forever, but why didnt we.

Do you ever think
When you're all alone
All that we can be
Where this thing can go
I do think of all we can be, and where it could be.

Am I crazy or falling in love
Is it real or just another crush
Do you catch your breath
When I look at you
If I notice you looking at me my breathe just stops.

Are you holding back
Like the way I do
Cause I'm trying, trying to walk away
But I know this crush aint going away, going away
I'm holding back.

Why do I keep running from the truth
All I ever think about is you
Your not running Fang I keep running, I cant face it.

I waited maybe 30 seconds after he stop singing, before walking into his room, I saw him look up, but he didnt say anything. He continued to look up before "Max how long were you standing out there?"
I smiled "Long enough."
"So any thoughts?"
"Just one," I smiled and leaned in and kissed him


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