Hi this is my first story so please don t be a bad friend so bad and write me reviews and ideas for my story and if something is wrong help me-By the way, I'm not making this fic alone, metroidPH is helping me, so don't give me all the credit (if you do). ok well the disclaimer

Disclaimer: I don t own naruto or any character if I would naruto would be with sakura and will kick sasuke's ass I only own naruto's doujutsu (1) and the OC´S.

THE BEST HOKAGE EVER

CHAPTER 1: THE LOST AND THE WAR

It was a rainy day in konoha. People walked own the streets in black clothing to the graveyard to honor a great warrior… who was KIA (killed in action). the most hurt was the person who looked up at him as he was the father he never had.

Naruto´s POV:

Rain poured down my cheek as I walked to the graveyard. My dark clothing was starting to soak. I walked in the crowds of indifferent people. Indifferent people that... that didn't know what he had done for. They didn't know, why he died, nor for what. They were just people, obligates to assist to a funeral. No honor, what so ever. Why... why did you insisted, sensei? Why? You were like a father to me, yet you abandoned me in my most needed moment. then I hear somebody call me… it was the person I needed the most. her voice calmed me. her pink hair, soaked in all her head, making her cloths more wet because of the water that scrolled down it. she looked like a goddess even in the rain… Sakura-Chan…

Sakura ´s POV:

"Sakura-Chan…"

I heard his voice. it was broken, but he hid it well,. I am one of the persons who can recognize when he is hiding his emotions. I think the lost of jiraiya-sama is hard for him. Well, he saw him as his father. at least that's what Tsunade-shisou told me.

"Naruto, I was thinking if you would like to go to Ichiraku to eat ramen and talk about our missions"

I said. this was a lie. I only wanted to comfort him because I know he is in pain now.

"Sakura-Chan, not today, ok… maybe other day…



Somewhere near Amegakure no Sato:

Sasuke´s dream:

Konoha was in fire, everyone was dying and now sasuke was bathed in a pool of blood with some claw marks in his suit. ¨that damned dobe! he gave me a hard time! Hmp, well he is still a dobe, and I am an Uchiha so he can´t beat me¨ then everything went dark and he saw itachi standing in front of him¨ foolish brother, you thought that destroying konoha would make things better, please understand, don´t fall in Madara´s manipulation, he only wants to destroy konoha, but he can´t because he needed the mangekyou of another Uchiha… I didn´t pass you the mangekyou for being Madara´s dog, I gave it to you to beat Madara, because I know you are the only one who can beat him, please sasuke use my gift well. Don´t make my death in vain¨ then all started to disappear and he felt somebody touching him.

"Sasuke wake up!! we need to keep going or someone can see us here remember we are almost out Amegakure so please lets continue our journey"

, hn said the arrogant Uchiha but in his mind he was thinking about his dream ¨was it real? Or I am starting to imagine things? ¨

Konohagakure no Sato 1 week later:

The gates were as normal as ever, the guards were sleeping but suddenly they felt a power that was stronger than when orochimaru came and attacked konoha, then far away they could see a group of people: 5 were using black cloaks with red clouds and the rest were different (I don´t know how to explain the cloth of the members of hawk). but their chakra… it had an evil felling and so unnatural… so immediately one went to tell the hokage what were they seeing and the other one tried to stop them but got killed.

In Tsunade's office:

"HOKAGE-SAMA!!"

The guard blowed the door,

"WHAT!!"

Tsunade was enraged, she drinked too much sake and shizune hid the rest, "hokage-sama, there are 9 people outside the gates 5 were dressed in black 

cloaks with red clouds and the other ones were dressed (please in one review tell me how to describe the members of hawk I would really appreciate that)"

"huh!! Shizune call all our ANBU and bring here team kakashi, team 10, team Gai, and team kurenai right now!! "

In the gates:

Now the destruction of Konoha begins!!

Doujutsu: eye technique

So what do you think please don´t write anonymous I hate when people hide themselves that people are coward!! (No offence to the ones who put always like that but really don´t put anonymous) first chapter done!! I hope helpful reviews!! Bye and thanks to metroidPH she helped me a lot thanks!!