Somthing New-Chapter One

"Hey guys! I just want to thank all of you for showing up tonight and to enjoy the show." Criss Angel went to the other side of the lot and started to prepare for his show. He was going to try to lay on a bed of nails and hold the weight of a Hummer.

He looked around into the faces of the crowd and saw a face that stood out more than the others. It was a young woman, with long black hair and shining brown eyes. She had pale skin ans was wearing one of his shirts. He smiled and thought that maybe he could introduce himslef after the show.

That was when it happened. "CRISS ANGEL IS A FAKE!!!" someone shouted from behind the crowd. Then two shots rang out. Criss turned around and saw that the crowd was running and the girl from earlier was on her stomach with blood pouring from her wound.

He took off running and skidded to a stop in front of the girl. Her shirt was staind red from the blood and she was trying to roll over. Criss dropped to his knees and picked up her body with her head cradled in his chest.He looked at her face and saw she was crying.

"Shhhh...its okay, your going to be alright..." Criss said in a vain atemt to comfort her.

"Your...your Criss A-Angel..." she muttered into his chest. If the situation hadn't been like this he would have smiled. Her voice sounded heavenly.

"Yes, I am. Can you tell me your name?" he asked, hopeing the paramedics got there soon.

"I-I'm Ravyn." she stuttered

"Well, Ravyn, don't worry the paramedics are on the way." he said,trying to sound cheerful.

"I'm not gonna m-make it" she said as her eyes started to cloud over.

" Your fine. Your not even really hurt that badly." he said, starting to cry himself.

"Y-Your a really bad liar Criss," Ravyn said closing her eyes and drawing in a deep breath." I'm just glad I got to meet you before I..." She looked at him and smiled as she let out one last shuddering breath.

She was gone.
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Hey. I know its super short but its all I could do right know in English. I'll update as soon as I can. Good news though. My school gets out the 7th and I'm spending a month in Las Vegas.

Gues where I'm staying.

THE ALADDIN.

I'm going to be in the room directly above Criss Angel. By the end of the summer he's probably going to have a restraing order on me.