Well here the re-write of my story
Carnival, Blindfolds, and Fireworks
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto sadly
Chapter 1
Fireworks
"THERE IS IN NO WAY IN HELL IM DOING THIS KIBA UNTIE ME RIGHT FUCKING NOW" a tied up blond struggle against his binds to the chair
"c'mon Naruto you get to kiss some really hot girls man" Kiba wink and elbow his shoulder"HAVE YOU ALSO FORGOT IT FOR THE THE OPPISIET AND THE GOD DAMN SAME SEX" Naruto yelled
"hmmm well i can fix that" Kiba pulled out a long black silk blindfold and tied it around Narutos head
"WHAT THE HELL KIBA" he was smack hard behind the head "would you shut up your to loud, now you wont be able to see if it a guy or girl kissing you"
"i hate you Kiba" Naruto puff his cheeks in anger
" oh you flatter me and look you already got a long line of girls ...and guys" Kiba snicker "have fun"
(half an hour later)
Naruto face twisted in to the kiss of this person he could not see but he could feel the facial hair and could tell quickly it was a dude when the kiss was over Naruto turn his head and spit
Naruto was kissed ounce again this time the lip were soft, but yet they seem shy as soon as they touch his lip a loud 'thud' and the voice of Ino and Sakura was heard
"Hinata..Hinata can you hear me" and the shuffle of feet could be heard running off
(Another half an hour later)
"how many more do i half to kiss Kiba"
"well you went though 50 girls and 200 boy sooo there 2 more girls and -" Kiba went cold stone quiet "hello Kiba you there " "huh uh yeah and...one more guy"
"I thought the point was not to tell me who I kissed who's the boy" Naruto could hear the snicker of Kiba "oh you'll soon find out"
the next two girls went by fast and the guy was next "keep it short man"
"hn" Naruto relax and waited for the man to kiss him
'he sound familiar'
the man lean in and kiss Naruto on the lip gently at first Naruto heart began to speed up and the man seem not to stop the man
put a hand on Naruto face and deepen the kiss he nip gently at Naruto bottom lip and it made Naruto gasp the man took it to his advantage and plug his tongue into Naruto mouth
Naruto let a moan escaped and Naruto rub his tongue along the other they fought for dominance but the man won and suck hungrily on Naruto tongue then pulled back and Naruto whimper in the lost of contact
Naruto heard the mad heavy breathing and the shuffle of feet running away
"HEY WAIT" Naruto struggled to get free "Kiba untie me" Naruto heard Kiba shuffle to him and untied him and undid the blind fold
"Kiba who was that tell me" he grab on to Kiba collar
"Sorry i was payed 5 bucks not to tell guess you gotta find out yourself...but here a hint you know the guy"
Naruto let out a very loud "DAMNIT KIBA"
well there the rewrite i hope you enjoy it
R&R
