OK i wrote this for one of my classes and every one told me it was good, but they were just friends teacher, and parents so i want to know what complete strangers think!

What will you do then?

don't be envies because the person you envy may very well be a good friend who envies you,

What will you do then?

don't be a sloth because you will miss out on all the things life has to offer and when you finally realize it, it will be to late,

What will you do then?

don't be a glutton, because as you eat, and drink, people will pass you by, and then when you run out you will have no one,

What will you do then?

don't be angry because as you unleash your wrath and push everyone away because when you calm down you will have no one

What will you do then?

don't be prideful because wile you look down on everyone, you will miss one of the best things life has to offer, friendship,

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don't go and lust after people because wile you use them you will hurt all the people you ever cared about,

What will you do then?

don't be greedy because as you surround yourself with all the treasures you ever wanted

you will miss out on true happiness & love,

What will you do then?

What will you do then?