Live Wire
I don't own Naurto, why anyone would even think so is ill...
Challenge from: Isilithix
'It was a near disaster' thought the near newly instated Yondaime.
It started off as an ordinary day; Get up, get ready for the day, kiss Kushina bye, and head to the tower. Nothing to extraordinary aside from the storm that was bound to roll over. So it came as a surprise when the intern working the front desk runs in to his office telling him that his wife is in the hospital, in a flash he was at the door to the hospital.
~1st person-Yondaime~
'Thank god I buried these kunai all over town'
I entered the hospital calmly, well as calm as any man who was just informed that his wife was in the hospital for an obscure reason, hell she was 3 months pregnant!
'If an enemy shinobi attacked her, hell will seem like a sweet release'
I hold my breath, praying that my wife and unborn son make it through this. At that moment the doctor came in to inform me what had truly happened.
Kushina's personal doctor, Shimura, spoke to me in the monotone that they use so you have no idea if it's good or bad.
"Well Minato, quite honestly it's a miracle that things turned out as well as they did"
"It would help if I knew what was going on here, Shimura"
"Hai, hai, well apparently the freak storm overhead spouted off a bit of lighting which has struck Kushina, fortunately your son is fine as is Kushina, now she is staying in the hospital for around a week to make sure everything is all right, but they'll live"
I let out a breath I hadn't known I was holding 'they'll be fine, thank you Kami-sama!'
"I-if I may Shimura, may I visit my wife?"
"Well she's not conscious but... Hai, you may visit her"
This somewhat surprised me, doctors don't usually allow those recently admitted to the hospital for whatever reason to have visitors; seeing as the many assassins who have disguised themselves as visitors or even patients faking injury or illness to the recently admitted, to get revenge on the supposed enemy, sans the protocol.
'Side-note, give Shimura a vacation'
As I entered the room something seemed amiss, not in the physical sense, but almost as if something out of my range of perception was telling me something was very wrong.
But I brushed them off as 'oh this is probably a side effect of seeing my wife who is 3 months pregnant on a hospital bed unconscious'
~3rd person~
Little did our blond kage know, this was only the begining for a long series of event that will rattle the minds of men, women, and shinobi alike for generations to come.
So how is it? I'll admit it took me a while to get around to writing this, but it sounded like a good base to use for a story if anyone wants to beta for me that'd help...
This is also just the intro so it is a little short, chapters may tend to be shorter seeing as I won't have much free time to write them but if I do abandon it I'll let you all know, advice is welcome, though outright hate isn't, if your gonna throw in some insults, give me a reason for the insults.
~Link to the challenge form .net/u/1147499/Isilithix
