This is my first EVER written story… please review a lot and please tell the truth about what you think….

K well here goes…

Room in SVU Squad

1:32am

Olivia yawned and desperately strained to pick her self up. She had been working on this case 24/7 for the past 2 weeks. She currently hadn't slept in 3 days. As Olivia turned toward the clock, she gasped; it was already 1:32 am and she still hadn't finished the files and reports…

She was sooooooo tired…

Olivia yawned once more and felt her sore throat ache.

I wonder if anyone else is still at the squad rook, maybe they're working to… do they know that I'm still here.. maybe I can sneak out and finish up tomorrow…

But NO I cant do that, Don will get so mad at me, and I promised Elliot I would finish his papers so that he could spend the afternoon with his kids…

Oh who gives a dahm what the hell the captain thinks, I'll finish Elliot's papers and go home…….

I'm soooooo tiiired…

And with that thought still in her mind Olivia started writing the her last sentence on Elliot's paper, but she slowly downs off.

Her throat stinged every time she breathed in, but that did not keep her from sleeping like a log…

K that was really short, I'm sorry I'll try to write longer next time…and I promise I'll actually get the story going…