Disclaimer: I do not own naruto if I did many plot scenes would be played out differently

(This is a re-upload due to an excessive amount of suckish spelling mistakes)

!WOOT!

~Neji~

I could hear the sirens through the door, and looking out my window I saw the fire trucks and ambulances rush off to the next burning house. I'm Neji and today was my 5th birthday, and my worst one at that. My father passed away today and since then I've been locked in my room. I guess today is just a really bad day...for everyone.

~Tenten ~

I couldn't believe this was happening. I tried to call for my father but I couldn't, seeing as there was too much smoke in my lungs. Yeah that's right my house was on fire. I could hear footsteps coming my way.

"D-daddy"

A hand with a glove came out. I knew it wasn't my dad but I still took his hand, in the other my panda bear and my baby blanket.

~Neji ~

Well there goes my curiosity fight out the main gates and toward the fire, and of course I have to follow it.

"U-uhm Neji-niisan where are you going?" A timid voice said

"Sorry Hinata if I woke you up, I was just going to see the fire." I replied

I've only knew Hinata for a year now. I was assigned to protect her because I'm from the side branch, and she from the main.

"O-oh well I won't tell anyone t-that you left." Hinata said

I nodded and walked out toward the fire.

~Tenten ~

I'm Tenten, no last name now. I certainly don't want to know not now not ever. I was outside now struggling to get out of the firemans grasp but he just didn't let go

~No One ~

Neji finally made it to the scene pushing through the crowd to get a better look, and what he saw made him push past the barricade. Tenten had freed herself from the firemans hands and started to rush to her house. Neji ran up and held her from behind.

"Lemme go! I need to save daddy!" She screamed

"I won't let you." He said quite calmly despite the situation.

"But why? Please I need to-"She never finished her sentence as she saw her house tumble to the ground. "No! No!" She squirmed even more but Neji never let go even though his train of thought stopped as he looked at the house then back to the little girl.

Ok chapter one finished! I know its short but still, it's only the first chapter.

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