This is the first chapter of my story that I already had posted up on here but I didn't like how it was turning out. so I re-wrote it and hopefully it will be more to your liking. Besides, the Hitachiin twins needs to "get some" too. ;P
Lines = scene change/X amount of time has passed
Disclaimer: I don't own Ouran... Story of my life.
On an airplane somewhere above the Pacific Ocean…
"This is going to be another one of those years again…" the brunette grumbled.
"Hmmm? What did you say Jay?" a short blonde said sleepily yawning and stretching, much like a cat does.
"Shout up you pro-ho's" a voice groggily said who came from a guy with heavily straightened hair and slightly smoked eyeliner from over the brunette's shoulder.
"Ha, he just called you a combination of prostitute and ho's" another voice chimed with hints of sleep still dragging at her words.
"Har har, very funny guys, it's only a little bit more till we land so get back to sleep" the brunette said sarcasm dripping heavily off every word. The brunette looked at her three friends and sighed as she prepared to arrive in the land of the rising sun yet again.
"Thank you for flying J.A.M. airlines, we hope to fly with you again" the flight attendant announced as the four teens started walking of the plane with the rest of the first class passengers.
"Ugh, I just hate that bitch, her voice is too perfect!" the blonde said in a annoyed tone slightly crushing her monkey carry on backpack as she followed the other three teens through the walkway from the plane to the terminal.
"Well, that's why they're hired Raquel, because of their voices" the guy said as if he were talking to a 3 year old. He carried a battered messenger bag and had a headphone in one ear as he walked lazily to catch up with a girl with black hair.
"Hayden, be nice to Raquel" said another girl, but with blue-black hair as he caught up with her.
"Aimee~~ buuuut~~" Hayden whined. With that statement, he earned a nice smack on the head by the brunette who's hair had multiple streaks of black, white, and green that fell to a lower back length with fringe bangs. She had electric green eyes that matched the green in her hair, three piercings in one ear, two in the other accessorized with an assortment of skulls and black gems, and a pair black lip rings on the right side along with a small diamond nose stud. She had a large black hobo purse hanging from her shoulder with both headphones peeking through her long hair and into her bag.
"Jaylin, don't hit my twin brother, he's my pain in the ass…" The short blonde huffed sarcastically. The blonde had a little above mid-back length hair, with a single bright purple streak. Her eyes were a shocking blue, and she had a single silver lip ring on her left side, and two piercings in each ear.
"Raquel, language, people could try to kick us out again." a black haired girl chided lightly, shaking her head. She had black hair with the under half of her hair bleached to a snowy white, had hazel eyes, and had a Marilyn Monroe lip stud, a tongue ring, and only a single set of piercings. "Jay, Ray, stop messing with Hayden. He's going to give us the puppy dog eyes for forever again."
"Aimee, thank you so much!" the guy said, looking at the black haired girl with dramatic adoration, which she sighed, to his fake disdain. Hayden had astounding silver eyes, matched with astonishingly bright silver hair with random patches of blue and some green undertones. He had snake bites in skinny red rings, and had size 4 black and dark turquoise spike gauges in his ears.
The group was openly stared at by the people traveling, and even the staff as they have never seen teens like this in a group like theirs possibly tin heir existence, nor even know how to describe them, besides the fact that they were all somehow beautiful in their own way, under all the metal and eyeliner. They were shouting in English and blonde was on the black haired girl's back, looking half asleep and burring herself into the back of her neck.
"I'm surprised that the flies aren't here yet." Jaylin smirked as they entered the doors to the luggage claim.
"I know, they'd be all over you by now." Aimee laughed lightly, grabbing a large and bulky suitcase and putting it on a cart and brushing her black hair out of the way.
"But I swear they're here. I can feel it." Jaylin replied, looking around nonchalantly at any suspicious looking people. Hayden laughed along with Aimee and Raquel, who had been dropped off Aimee's back once they got to the luggage belt.
"Stop being melodramatic, Jay, you're just being silly." Raquel said, attempting to grab a rather large suitcase with a large purple skull sticker off the belt. A nice looking guy grabbed it for her, smiling as if he was going to get something.
"Thanks." she said, smiling a large childish grin as she looked up at him with her bright blue eyes and blonde bangs falling into one eye. He blushed lightly and walked back to his friends with a small wave.
"These Asians guys are too cute, American boys would've just watched me struggle with the suitcase to stare at my arse or something." Raquel said as she looked up at Jaylin with a mischievous smirk on her face.
"I told you that coming here would be a fun thing." Jaylin replied, smirking herself, "And any reason for the British terminology of arse?"
"No reason, I guess I'm trying out my British accent. Japanese people don't know the difference, right?" Raquel asked, slightly panicking at her question.
"Of course they can't tell the difference, I bet that barely any of these people can fully understand what we're talking about." Aimee said, patting Raquel lightly on the head, and motioning for Hayden to get his suitcase.
"Thanks." he grunted as he lifted the rather heavy suitcase onto the luggage cart. Some quiet squeals were heard as Hayden straightened and flipped his hair out of his eyes. Jaylin and Raquel scoffed and rolled their eyes as Jaylin pretended to glare evilly in their direction and hug Hayden as if to show that they were dating, or something of the sort. The make-up caked girls glared back and watched the two teens with curiosity.
"Jay, is there any reason why you're hugging me like you own me?" Hayden asked, looking down at Jaylin with a confused look on his face. Jaylin smirked at the girls quickly and turned to Hayden.
"Some girls were trying squeal their ways into your heart so I decided to have a little fun." Jaylin purred her reply and Hayden laughed as they saw some guys glare in Hayden's direction as well.
"I must agree that it is quite fun playing with random strangers, but your luggage is going to get stolen if you don't get it now." Aimee said, unlatching Jaylin's arms from around Hayden, "Besides, you have to do it right." she continued as she wrapped her arms around Hayden from the front and kissed his cheek lightly. Hayden just laughed again as Jaylin mock pouted and grabbed another large suitcase. The people around them looked at the three strangely. And once Aimee let go, Raquel jumped on his back for a piggy back, they shot them scandalized stares.
"It's so fun to mess with peoples' minds like that…" Jaylin sighed, smiling lazily as she pushed a cart full of luggage.
"Not to mention that it more fun over here because they're not used to four incredibly sexy emos in what we just displayed as a harem." Aimee smirked as she pushed a cart of her own down to the exit with Raquel and Hayden pushing one overloaded with Raquel's stuff because she was still on his back.
There was moment of bright lights and loud paparazzi started to gang around the teens as they walked out of the luggage claim sector.
"Damn, I told you so." Jaylin muttered darkly to Aimee as she dropped all emotion from her face as she walked through the plethora of paparazzi. Raquel was successfully hiding behind Hayden while Jaylin was walking briskly away from the reporters trying to create a path her friends can follow.
"Miss D'Leiany!" and "Miss Jaylin!" "Miss an Mr. Leilani!" "And Miss Price, too!" were all that were heard from the mob of pesky paparazzi that were in the way of a certain brunette who was now very annoyed.
"No comment to any question any of you have. And no, my father and step-mom aren't here with me, can't you tell?" she said with venom dripping from every syllable she spoke as she breathed deeply and clenched her fists, "And yes, they happen to be my friends, lay off."
"Come on, lets go Jay" the blonde said trying to drag the noticeably enraged girl away to an awaiting limo. She started strutting away in her black vans poised perfectly even with the heavy luggage leaving her three friends to catch up to her catwalk speed before Raquel or the reporters could continue.
"Jaylin…" Hayden started as he stared at me with those silver eyes as he sat across from me on the limo.
"It's okay Hayden, it's fine, I'll get over it." I cut him off while staring him in his memorizing silver eyes to reassure that I was okay and hugging him around the neck as I felt his arms snake around my waist.
'Damn, once again, I'm turning to this…. It can only lead to more pain.' I thought as I started swimming in the mess of thoughts of the reporters, her friends, and her new life here in Japan.
"Jaylin, are you gonna be okay?" Raquel asked looking at me with a concerned face as I tried not to think badly of her. I knew I was going to thank all of my friends later.
"Yeah, it's just the normal…" I trailed off staring off into space and losing myself in my thoughts. I put my itouch on shuffle and fell asleep.
Flashback ten years ago…
"Mom, Dad!" a young girl, about 5 asked a tall lady and a graying man as they sat on a large picnik setup. They smiled at her as she came bounding over.
"Did you have fun with your little friends?" the mother asked nicely as she started packing up the food laid out on the blanket.
"Yeah, Chii-kun brought his puppy and he was fluffy and licked my face and he was really really cute and… and…" a large yawn broke off the girl's sentence as she sat down
"I think we should get home soon and then you can get to sleep. It's a big day tomorrow." the father said as he picked up the basket and the girl in his arms and waited as his wife picked up the blanket and walked over to the car.
"But I'm not tired…" she tried arguing before she fell asleep in the back of the moving car.
"Mitch! Mitchel, watch out for the!"
"Jaylin! Honey, wake up!"
"Mommy! Daddy!"
Terrified screams were all I could hear as I was blacked out, I heard loud beeping and people shuffling around and hushed talking.
"Mommy? Daddy?" I croaked out as I tried opening g my eyes.
"Oh, thank god you're awake, your parents are in another ward, you're at the hospital, dear." an older nurse whispered gently to me as she crouched next to my bed.
"Are they okay?" I yelled as I tried getting up.
"No, no, no, dearie, you have to stay laying down. And I will have to ask the doctor okay?"
"O-okay." I sniffled as I lay down again and fell into a black hole into a dream.
A bright light sped towards me, I was trapped and I couldn't move, I heard loud yells and sirens. "I have to find mom and dad!" I thought as I tried moving, but I was trapped. Everything was dark except that bright, bright light that lingered in my eyes. I tried blinking away the light but then red started to cloud my vision…
"Jaylin!" Aimee shouted as she was squeezing my hands and a tear rolled down her cheek as she stared at me. I blinked fast for a few seconds and slowly lifted my hand and cupped her cheek, making sure she understood that I was fine. Doing the same with Raquel and Hayden.
"Was it the dream again?" Aimee asked quietly.
"Yeah… I wish… just…." I said frustrated that my shaking voice and body would stop to let me finish a damn sentence.
"It's okay hon, just chill." Hayden said calmly, picking me up from the limo seat as we had arrived at the mansion.
"Did you take your medicine this morning?" Raquel asked quietly.
"Yeah, I must have gotten messed up a little from the plain ride here… Stupid jet lag." I replied now with my normal voice again, smiling a little. She smiled lightly back at me as we reached the front steps of the house.
"Wait,' I said, making the three whip their heads towards me, "When the hell did we arrive?" I asked in shock.
"Oh, right… you passed out in dream land and we woke you because the driver was starting to get annoyed at us, I think." Raquel said laughing, making Hayden put you down and following Aimee to laugh light heartedly leaving you to stare blankly at the monstrous mansion.
"Th-this is where we're gonna live?" I asked to no one in particular, staring at the Victorian style mansion that was painted nice dark grey color, made even darker with the dimming light.
"Aimee~! Please, please, please help me unpack?" I whined as I sat in a pile of clothes in front of my large walk in closet.
"No, I will not help you. It's your fault that you decided to bring so many clothes." Aimee reminded, grinning widely at me, sitting on the edge of my bed in a taunting manner.
"It's not my fault that all the designers I work with want me to take something home from their collection!" I groaned as I started a painful process of hanging up pieces of clothing upon pieces of expensive clothing on hangers and into my closet.
"I thought there were people to do this." Aimee said, examining her already perfect nails.
"There are, but I decided to have tomorrow as their first day instead of today. Besides, there would have been no point, we got here ten minutes ago and it's already eleven o'clock." I replied sadly.
"You do realize that you can ask for some of the maids and such to just stay here at the house except vacation times you give them?" Aimee asked me with a raised eyebrow. I stared at her with wide eyes and face palmed at my lack of thinking.
"Wow, I am stupid. I could've asked to bring my favorite maid from the states…" I muttered as I started hanging some clothes on the rack.
"Good thing I'm not stupid, because I already have her on her way here." Aimee smiled as she walked over to where I was sitting and grabbed an arm-full of hangers and dropped them in front of me. I stared at her with pleading eyes, only to have her laugh and walk back to the bed.
"How are you going to learn how to do this if I help you?"
"Aimee, come on. I'm drowning in all this stuff!" I pleaded, opening another fully stuffed suitcase full of expensive clothing for emphasis.
"I'll only help get you hangers and for moral support." she replied, starting to collect more hangers and try to put them in a nice pile easy to work with.
"Okay…" I pouted as I started putting clothes in the closet.
"I know what would help you." Aimee said suddenly as she rummaged through my carry on and a suitcase to find my I-pod and speakers. She quickly plugged it in and pressed shuffle.
"Thanks." I yelled half sarcastically as I started hanging the rest of my clothes to the music.
About an hour and a half later, the play list restarting, and many energy drinks later. All of the clothes were hung and everything else was unpacked and put away nicely.
"I'm done!" I shouted triumphantly as I flopped face down on the bed next to Aimee.
"I'm proud of you." Aimee said mockingly as she petted my head for effect.
"Mmhmm." I mumbled through the soft sheets and fell asleep. I vaguely remember someone picking me up and tucking me in sloppily.
"Who are you?" a thirteen year old me asked an empty hallway cautiously when she heard a soft click.
"The question is, who are you?" two voices asked in sync as two identical boys walked around the corner. I stared at the pair of twins in surprise, they were kind of cute, and my age too. Not to mention they scared the crap out of me.
"I asked you first. So answer my question." I retorted, and snorted at them lazily.
"You can't orders us around like that." the twins replied, almost sneering at me as they walked around me, examining everything about me.
"And you can't judge me like I know you will about me like I'm some doll." I said putting my hands on my hips defiantly.
"We can if we want." they replied, crossing their arms in front of their chests.
"Then it would only be fair if I return the favor, no?" I asked, raising my eyebrow in a questioning manner.
"You can't do that." the one on the right scoffed.
"I don't see why I can't" I scoffed right back with a mischievous smile on my lips.
"Because only we can do that." the one on the left replied as if his answer was completely logical.
"Wow, you guys are lame." I muttered as I turned away from them and grimaced at the wide hallway, "Damn this mansion has too many rooms." I continued as I started walking back the way I came from.
"We aren't lame!" the right one yelled defiantly.
"And you can't walk away from us like that!" the left one finished.
"Oh, look at this, I'mwalking away from you!" I teased as I rounded a corner back to the living room area. I looked back inconspicuously and saw their shocked expressions frozen on their faces.
So, that was the first chapter, re-amped edition. What do you think? Please tell me so I know what to do with this story; trash it, keep writing, blah blah blah. So thanks and hopefully I get to see your review. :)
