here's a little two-shot dealy. its about none other than naruto and hinata and some narusaku. i don't know if its good or bad. thats what you have to tell me. when you review of course. i dont own anything. i hope that you enjoy the story and tell me what you think. oh yeah, a lot of this stuff is made up and they are all older now. without further ado here's the story:
EVERYONE KNOWS
Everyone knows that Hinata likes Naruto, with the exception of Naruto himself, of course. Hinata has tried to get Naruto to notice her, but it never really works out. Then when Sasuke left, Naruto was depressed, but Hinata was right there to comfort him. So, ever since then, they have become close friends. But still, Hinata loves Naruto, and Naruto is oblivious and chasing after Sakura.
Hinata sat on the bench in the park, feeding the ducks in a nearby small pond. She watched as the bread crumbs left her hand and tumbled into the sparking water causing it to ripple and distort the reflection of t he sky. Suddenly, a flash of blonde and orange came into the contorted reflection. The water settled and Hinata could clearly see that it was Naruto that came to stand there. He walked over and took a seat next to the opal-eyed girl. His usually laughing eyes as blue as the reflection of the sky in the pond were now sad and on the verge of tears. She didn't have to ask, she already knew the cause of his depression. Naruto and Sakura had had yet another fight. She laid a comforting hand on his shoulder and looked at him sympathetically, but inside she was burning with envy. What did Naruto see in that shallow pink-haired phony? Was he really so superficial that he judged only by looks? For Sakura was indeed beautiful, but her personality was another story. Was Sakura there to comfort Naruto when Sasuke left and never returned? No, that was herself, Hinata. Was Sakura there when he would have nightmares and no one would listen? No, that was herself, Hinata. Was Sakura there to console his heart after losing so much? No, once again that was herself, Hinata. So then why was it that whenever who will Naruto have is asked it is Sakura's name that come's to mind instead of her own? She didn't know, and her envy she kept hidden.
The days went by and Naruto and Sakura would go through their break-ups and make-ups and Hinata would always be there. Until one day, she wasn't. She had fallen ill. It seemed that her heart had forgotten how to beat properly. No one could figure out why. Only she knew. It was because they were getting married. She couldn't take it anymore, giving so much but receiving nothing in return. She was happy for him. He had finally obtained the one thing he wanted most, even if it wasn't her, she was still happy for him. But now, he wouldn't need Hinata anymore, he had Sakura, so her heart lost the ability to beat. For days she would lie in bed at the hospital. The doctors and nurses were her only visitors. She didn't mind, there was only one person that she wanted to see. And he had probably already forgotten her by now. A week went by and she knew she didn't have much time left. Then suddenly Naruto came through the door. He said, "I'm so sorry I couldn't be here sooner. I came as soon as I found out. I was on a mission." I'm so glad, he didn't forget me. "Hinata, don't die on me now, I need you to be the maid of honor at our wedding." She felt a jolt of pain in her chest. Oh right, he's getting married. "Naruto, I don't think I will be able to go to the wedding, I am not going to live. I don't have much time left" she choked out, trying to hold back a flood of tears. "Don't say that," Naruto started, "of course you're going to make it. You have to…" but he was cut off by Hinata. "No, you and I both know it's over for me, it's too late. But what you don't know is that…" she started choking out coughs between sobbing breaths. "What is it?!?" he asked. She didn't hold back the tears any longer. They poured down her stained pale cheeks. "I…I…I love you" She pulled Naruto closer and kissed him ever so softly on the lips. Just then, it donned on Naruto. Hinata was always there, always had been there. If you asked who Naruto would have it would be Sakura who came to mind, but it was Hinata who was in his heart. He pulled her close and tried to return the kiss as softly as she had given it, so to not ruin his delicate little flower. He thought he liked Sakura, but he knew he loved Hinata. "Hinata, I…"
DUN DUN DUN!!! what will naruto say next? you probably already have guessed it but there's still more to the story. but i don't know if i should make a sad or happy ending. well the sad anding is not really sad, its happy too, but just not as happy. so review and tell me which kind of ending you would like, ok? please remember to review. it would make me so so so so so so very happy. umm...JUST REVIEW. im not going to continue with the story until im satisfied with the number of reviews. im not trying to be mean, i just wanna make sure if people are actually even reading this story. so REVIIIIIEW LIKE THE WIIIIND!!!! thank you for your time.
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