A REWRITE! Bet you didn't see this coming, didja? ;P

I was looking through my fanfics and thought, God! My writing was AWEFUL! Maybe it's time to do a rewrite. Besides, enough with the requests! A ridiculous amount of people keep reviewing my other stories to do this one!

So enjoy!

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Thoughts

"Speeches"

"Whispers"

Kyuubi Speeches

Kyuubi thoughts

Flashback:

Summary: Who was he? Where did he come from? Is he the Yondaime, or someone similar? He sure acts like the Yondaime, but yet different. If he was that hero that once stumbled across the grounds, then how is he still alive? -- Another Naruto 'time-travel' fic.

Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue.


The Future Visit

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Prologue

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I stumbled through the forest with my legs sprinting with top speed as I chased down the enemies that scuttled across the village. S-ranked Criminals that yearn for power and greed, and in order to attain their success, they caused a vast quantity of damage to the hidden leaf and the hokage tower; making us believe they are as powerful as dozens of hungry lions.

They escaped from the Konoha prison on that night two days ago, and ever since that night, my team have been trying to lure them back into the village and sentence them into years of punishment. There has been no trail of where they lurched to, until now, I finally found a trail and I'm getting closer to the enemies by the second. I must quickly move before they get away.

Two ANBUs approached me with a bow, "Hokage-sama," Owl spoke, "We were not able to locate them, we have found no trail to where they left,"

"It's no matter," I spoke back, "I found them already. They are heading North East from this direction. I'll send you a signal once I need back up."

"Hai!" They both replied and left that second.

I continued my search until my eyes grasped of the low-lives. I spotted one of the opponent and quickly prepared myself to attack from behind. My feet lightly poked on a branch as I continued moving with my top speed, and hid at every corner I glimpse at.

As I was about an inch away from the enemy, I grabbed his mouth before any of his other companions notice his capture. I carried him down to a dark section of a tree and began to converse.

"Alright," I spoke, "I want you to tell me everything you know about your group,"

"Like hell!" he responded,

I gave a cocky smirk, "See this kunai in my hand? I can kill you in an instant if you dare move or even fidget, it's as simple as that."

"Go ahead and kill me! I wouldn't tell a thing to you!" he glared,

"Look, you have broken the law by escaping nearly twice this month AND created a huge deal of damage to our village. That leads you and your little squad to execution," I gave him a stern look, "If you tell me what you are planning, then I'll spare your life and give you a second chance."

The opponent took a deep breathe, "I will never disobey my allies; you can send me to the deepest pit of fire if you like, I'm not telling you squat!"

I sighed deeply, this may be a criminal but he's still honest to his team. If he wouldn't say anything, then I would have to keep following his companions. I gripped a chakra-filled rope and tied it around the enemy.

"Alright," I commenced, "You will stay here tied till the ANBUs find you." As of me, I'm going to track his group and lure them to one of my traps.

I stood up and closed my eyes with concentration. I took a deep breathe and used my two hands to make one of my hand seals. I used all my senses to track down what I could find. I opened my eyes and gave myself a smirk. Found ya!

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"Where is he?" One of the criminals blurted out,

"He was right behind us! How could he just disappear?!" the other spoke,

"The hokage must have gotten to him,"

"Damn him and his frustrating speed!"

"What do we do?"

"We continue moving, and while we do so, we need to find a way to get rid of him…"

"It's impossible! It's like getting a cat to bark! He's got no weakness whatsoever. If you have the slightest idea, please don't hesitate to share!"

"Enough with the sarcasm." He thought for a second, "I got it!"

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I paced across a the forest, turning my head to every diretion until my eyes grabbed the target. THERE!

I formed three Kage Bunshins and attacked each criminal from behind.

"So you've finally shown yourself!" one of the enemies said as I held them tight by their necks.

"Get ready hokage-sama," the other spoke.

Get ready for what? No! Was this a trap?!

Before my mind could comprehend the situation, I saw a gleam of light illuminating my eyes; and the next thing I knew…I was traveling down a pitch black hole…

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I didn't wanna make TOO many changes. But hopefully, it's not as ludicrously written as before.

PLEASE REVIEW.

Lots of luff

Mrs-N-Uzumaki xxx