Hey! It's me again! Okay fine, I admit it, I'm high b/c I know I'm nowhere near popular here so NO ONE should know me…or only a very small amount of people should.
But here's my new story! It's my 5th story! Feel so proud…I'm on my 5th story already. & I'm not even done my other ones… Okay! No one likes to hear a hyper Martian (yes I'm a Martian from mars) blabber on so here's the first chapter!
OCC OF PIRIKA & REN AHEAD. Please comment on it and let me know how to cure it!Summary: Ren must choose: Pirika and his childhood's best friend whomhas NO memory of. What happens in this love triangle when one of them loses something that can ruin their life forever? Pirika x Ren x OC
My Light in Pitch Black
Chapter 1:
The Memory &A Call
Pure darkness surrounded me, as my breathing is not at all calm. I can feel the handcuffs pinning me to the wall. I've been here for so long I lost count by 10. I can hear my stomach growling but the beatings had numbed all my senses.
From a distance, I could se a dull glow. At first I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me. But as the light got brighter, I couldn't help but let emotions escape my facade.
Just when the light passed my cell, I opened my mouth to scream but no sound came out. The light walked pass, as if ignoring me. The motion-sensors activated the electric wires, sending electrical shock that added pain to my already numbed body.
As if seeing me in agony was something it cannot tolerate, the light came back. But before I can see the bearer of the light, consciousness was slowly leaking away. Before I completely passed out, I can hear a feminine voice shouting my name.
"Ren! Ren!" Ren can feel someone shaking him, bringing him back to reality.
"Stop it," Ren said, annoyed that his thoughts were interrupted with.
"Sorry," Pirika put on a fake innocent smile, "you dazed off for a moment there. What were you thinking about?"
"Nothing," Ren mumbled, then he heard his cell phone ring. From the monitor, he sees that the caller is none other than his sister, Jun.
"姐姐, 什麼事?" Ren said clearly while Pirika admired his Chinese accents. (I'm using actual chinese XD, after all, i am chinese. Don't worry! translation are here! He just said: Big sister, what is it?)
"弟弟, 媽媽要你今天會家," Jun said in a serious tone. (Little brother, mother wants you home today. Ren is currently living at the Asakura's)
"我現在會來了." (I'm coming back now) But before Ren can end the call, Jun interrupted.
"不是, 媽媽要你回中國." ( No/Not that , mother wants you to come back to China)
"What!" Pirika jumped back slightly, surprised of Ren's sudden increase in volume. "I'll be there tonight."
Pirika widened her eyes. "What is it? Where are you going? What time tonight? Why? For who? How?"
Ignoring her, Ren bid farewell to his sister and got up, heading for his room. "Why don't you go bug your brother for a while. I got to pack."
"But Ren, we're going out now. I get to bug you instead."
"It's a test drive! We're not officially going out."
Ignoring his last comment, she continued with her questions. "Where are you going, Ren? When? Why? To where?" Pirika followed Ren to the stairs until they reached his room.
"Oh! Can I go too? Oh let me tell onii-chan," she said, ready to run up to her brother but Ren grabbed her arm just in time.
"If you tell him, then he won't let you go, will he?" Ren said, resuming to packing.
Pirika gasped, "So I can go?"
Yes it was short but i hope you liked it…I know it's very OCC of Pirika but I just can't capture her character properly here…:sigh: wish me luck! Please review and tell me if there's any flaws so I can fix it…& hopefully I will get some reviews so I don't have to threaten like I did in Snow…still feel bad…PLEASE REVIEW!
