This is my 6th story for this and I have to say I think I'm going to like this one the most the idea just came to me all of a sudden and I wanted to see what you all thought of it so enjoy it. My little brother likes a lot of comic books and superhero themed stuff so I wanted to give this comic book thing a try and I think I got something really good. Let me know what you think. Enjoy...
Narrations...
Space, a vast seemingly endless region of all humanity where stars and planets and galaxies of all kinds float apart, where it is said the beginning of all time and space had ever begun. And within that great unexplored canvas of matter and wonders there was one sole galaxy where stars shined brighter than bright, The milky way Galaxy. It was a spiraling vortex amongst millions of others more greater in size than it, but the true fascination is what lies inside it. Deep within this galaxy past the stars and nebulas and other space objects was a tiny system made up of a hot blazing star for a sun and surrounded with 8 small planets, But one of those planets was earth, where there was an abundance of life that frolicked about merrily and happy.
For centuries past and centuries to come humanity has explored the space realms and all their is to it. Astronauts come and go all the time and with technology we have seen photographs of space we have never seen before. But the age old question that runs through every mind; Is there any life on other planets. Is earth really the only planet with any traces of life at all. Up until now earth was considered the only planet amongst million of trillions of others to only have living/breathing life forms on it. But what they didn't know was that there were other life forms not human life forms but life forms just the same and they were out there...way, way out there.
Deep in the coldest regions of outer space, in a very distant galaxy, far from off the stars, farther then any human had dared to travel in the known history of man, where the sun shined at it's brightest there was a planet, but not just any planet, a planet filled with gnomes of all shapes and sizes and colors but this was not a regular planet and these were not regular gnomes these gnomes were inhabited on a super planet where all it's inhabitants were of super heroes and super villains. Super heroes dominated the planet, defending the world from the villains that walked among them but like all heroes there were villains set out to destroy them and these villains were some of the toughest there were. And while we all know how superheroes and villains have secret identities, around here that was not the case, see every gnome in this world was either born good or evil no secret identity required it was full on super hero/super bad-guy things around the clock. And within this giant planet of good and bad gnomes in one particular garden there lived gnomes of both good and evil, now normally good and evil gnomes don't live together, but that was changed when 2 very particular gnomes; one of good and the other of evil shared a forbidden love that over came their bitter families hatred of each other and surprisingly united 2 gardens of good and evil.
The gnomes of this garden, like all gnomes of that planet, were born with either the inheritance of good and evil nature as were the offspring of these 2 star-crossed supers.;
SUPER HEROES;
Juliet- Fly, Heat vision, Super strength, Healing powers, Super human agility; she can move faster and swifter than any hero or villain, because of this she usually prefers hand to hand combat with bad-guys.
Nanette- Fly, communicate with animals, shrink things to microscopic size.
Paris- Fly, Psychic abilities, teleportation,
Lord Redbrick- Levitate, can erase peoples memories, hypnotize people, his walking cane can make anyone it touches forcibly tell the truth.
Jake-Ghost like powers; Fly, Phase through solid objects, communicate and summon the undead.
Kelly- Fly, X-ray vision, super hearing, camouflage abilities
Jazmin- Fly, Shoot lasers from her hands, she can absorb other peoples attacks and reflect them back 3x' as powerful.
London- Fly, Power of telepathy; she can read minds and use her enemies thoughts as weaknesses against them.
Scarlett and Fuscia- Fly, Ability of Super speed by locking hands together. Fuscia can shoot heat rays from her eyes and Scarlett can shoot freeze rays from her eyes.
Bruno/Juno- Bruno has razor sharp claws and Juno has razor sharp teeth but they can both Fly and can walk up walls.
Featherstone- Fly, super vision, night vision, able to control/generate magnetic fields.
SUPER VILLIANS;
Gnomeo- Fly, Super strength, can temporarily weaken the power of others, can create multiple versions of himself.
Benny- Fly, Super strength, Stretch his body to incredibly lengths.
Tybalt- Fly, Super strength, Earthbending powers- Move the ground at will.
Lady Bluebury- Levitate, Uses her magical staff to conjure lighting.
Jr.- Fly, Super strength, super speed, can turn invisible and generate force fields, able to grow/shrink his body size.
Violet- Fly, Ability to move objects with her mind.
Tyler- Fly, Super strength, Morph into anything or anyone he chooses.
Jackson- Fly, Super strength, Conjures up fire.
Benzin- Fly, Super strength, Can run super fast like his twin sisters but can also shoot a heat ray from his left orange eye and a freeze ray from his right blue eye.
Bennie-Fly, Sonic screams; she can break down just about anyone and anything by screaming incredibly loud, ability to Possess people
But of all the superheroes and super villains there is one who stands out from them all, the smallest and most invisible of the garden, little Vanessa, what makes her so much more different from everyone else, she is...the decider.
In the world of super beings it is a very rare thing to be born without the intentions of being good or bad and very few in all of super gnome history are born that way. Those born without being good or bad are known as the Deciders, for they can chose whether to use the powers they have for good or evil, it is very important for those born that way to make these critical decisions as soon as possible, for if not, anyone who does not choose are outcaste and sent adrift into the lonely voids of space only to be consumed or destroyed by whatever lurks within the stars.
This however was the exact type of thing that worried Vanessa so much, she did not know whether to become good or evil nor was she sure did she even want to be either of them at all. She knew the consequences for that type of thinking but being the way she was it was just a decision she did not feel comfortable making esp. by force.
Vanessa-Water-based powers; Control water, freeze it to create icicles, summon blizzards at her command, she can control the blood inside of peoples body and control them from the inside-out (blood is mostly 80% water) she can also run on the surface of water and pull the water out of plants and thin air.
This young girl had the powers, now she just had to decide what she was gonna do with them...
I know some of the powers I listed might be lame but there's only so many powers I could think of that existed.
Well that was the 1st chapter I hope you all liked it. :)
I have the whole story pretty much planned out and it's super cool and stuff but you guys might not like it that much...I don't know, do you guys think I should carry on with it or not?
By the way; what would ur superpowers be if you had any? Mine would be Flying, super strength and be able to control water.
