Ed's Broken Heart

Disclaimer: I don't own Fullmetal Alchemist. (As much as I wish I did) I don't own Ed either. (Even though I wish I did, he's very cute and sexy!) This is my first fan fic so please read and review! Oh btw, Ed and Al are human. Hagane no Hitokiri and I made up this story. If you don't like that then don't read it. (Sorry to sound mean but it's true) NO FLAMES!

One day, January 19th to be exact (it's my neesan's birthday) two young boys are riding in a train on another mission from Colonel Mustang. One of the boys has long, blonde hair done in a braid, with a black tank top, a black jacket on top of that, black pants, a black pair of boots, on top of the black jacket he had a bright red jacket, and off of one of the belt loops he had a silver chain hanging off it. This boy's name is Edward Elric. The other boy is wearing a blue t-shirt with a gray jacket on top of the t-shirt, and jeans. He's hair is short with his bangs parted to the side. This boy's name is Alphonse Elric. Al looks at Ed. Ed was looking out the window. He looked a little paler than usual.

I wonder if Ed's ok. He never tells me if he's sick or not. I wish he would, thought Al.

"Are you alright, brother?" asked Al.

"Yeah Al, I'm all right," replied Ed.

"Are you sure, niisan? You look a little pale today."

"Yes Al, I'm fine. I promise."

Sendai Station. Sendai Station is next. (Over the loud speaker)

"Here's our stop Al, better get ready."

Ed and Al step onto the platform. Ed looks at his pocket watch and sighs.

Great! Just great! Mustang is gonna grill my ass for being late. Oh well, he will just have to deal with it. I'm not prefect. If he wanted perfection he should've done it himself. If he talks about my screw ups one more time, I'm gonna…(Ed thinking)

"Ed! Mite! (Look!) Yuki! (Snow)"Al pointed at the nearest patch of snow, "it must've snowed yesterday."

"Come on Al. We can play in the snow later, ok? Right now we have to find a place to sleep tonight."

As they walk on, they spot an inn called Heaven's Door. Below the sign that has the name of the inn is a sign that says Vacancy in bright red paint. The inn itself was made of wood with heavy roof tiles and an old roof ornament.

" It's not much to look at but I think this is only inn in town," said Ed, "at least it's a place to sleep. Shall we?"

Then Ed pushes the very large, very heavy door to reveal a smoky tavern. Ed walked up to the counter and said; "Hey can I get a room with two beds please?"

"Let me see what I have," the bartender answered.

Then the bartender walks upstairs to see which rooms he has open. Ten minutes later he comes back down and tells Ed that he does have a room open and it costs 300.

" I'll take it," was Ed's response.

Fifteen Minutes later…

Ed comes out of the room with Al.

"So niisan, what do you what to do now that we have a room?" Al asked Ed.

"I was thinking to getting some food and something to…" Crash(glass being shattered)

Ed and Al looked at each other then hurled themselves down the stairs. When they got downstairs they saw two guys in a typical bar fight.

"Why do people always fight when they're drunk?" Al wondered out loud. (Mostly to himself)

"Ok. Let's stop fighting. Please?" said a waitress near them.

"Trying to get hurt lady? I don't like people butting into my business." One of the drunks said. Then he hit her hard across the face.

"Hey! I don't know who you think you are but your not supposed to hit women!" Ed yelled.

"You want some too?" the drunk threatened.

"Sure. Why not? Let's add that to my list of things I'll regret later."

With that remark from the drunk rushes at Ed and trips over a bench and everyone laughs at him, including Ed. The drunk gets back up and lunges at Ed again. This time instead of tripping and falling flat on his face, he manages to sock Ed in the stomach-hard. Ed was knocked down, and then the drunk picks Ed up off the ground and slams him into the nearest table. (Poor Ed TT) Ed felt the table break underneath him when he slammed into it.

Itai (ouch)…That will leave a big burse, thought Ed wincing at the pain he felt when he got up.

Ow… that's gotta hurt. Poor Ed, thought Al

"Had enough punk?" the drunk asked.

"I've just got started!" Ed shouted back. Then Ed clapped his hands together creating a blue light, and then he touched the base of the broken tabletop and created a long staff.

"Want some now?" Ed said smirking evilly, "not so tough now are ya?"

The man looked at Ed with a scared look on his face. Ed looked at the man with a glare on his face. Ed didn't care that the man was scared; all he cared about was if this guy would stop fighting him. Then the man started to back away from Ed.

Who the hell is this guy? thought the man. Then the man turned and ran out the door. Ed's eyes followed him down the street. Then Ed let out a big sigh. He felt much better now that the drunk left the tavern.

Mustang won't like the report I'll give him later when Al and I go back to Central, thought Ed. Ed looked around and said, "The least I can do is fix what he broke."

Then Ed clapped his hands again and again the people watching saw a blue light form from in between his hands. Then he held his hands out in front of him and in an instant everything that was broken was fixed.

Nice job, brother! Al thought. An unnatural hush fell over the crowd.

Oh no! Did I do something wrong? I hope not, thought Ed.

Ed looked around the room again instead of frightened faces, the faces this time were angry. (Except Al)

I screwed up big time. I hope that they don't ask if I'm a…

"Are you a State Alchemist?" the bartender asked Ed.

"No," Ed lied.

"Only State Alchemists have that kind of power."

"I'm not a State Alchemist."

"Then what's this?" the bartender pulled on Ed's chain for his pocket watch.

"Nothing. It's nothing."

"Really? I think it's a pocket watch for State Alchemists." The bartender pulled harder on the chain and the pocket watch came out, "Not a State Alchemist, eh? You better start singing a different tune." (In other words Ed's terrible at lying)

"Fine. I am a State Alchemist."

Oh shit. Why did I just tell them? They don't like already. Oh well.

"We don't serve dogs of the military here, so get out. Now!"

"Nani?"

"You heard me. Out! Now!"

Then the bartender threw Ed outside in the freezing cold snow. Ed felt himself fly through he air, then he felt himself land in something soft and wet. Then he heard something land in the snow beside him. He looked to his right and saw his suitcase.

Damn! Kicked out again! Great! I get to sleep in the snow tonight, Ed thought bitterly.

This happened so fast for poor Al. First Ed is fighting some drunk. Then he's getting kicked out. Al heard the bartender ask Ed," Is he with you?"

"No," Ed replied, " He's not with me. He just happened to go the same way I was going."

"Fine then he gets the room."

"That's fine with me."

Al I hope you get better sleep than I will tonight because finding a place to sleep will be hard.

With that Ed turned down the street and disappeared into darkness. As Ed walked down the street every house he passed by would shut their windows and doors and close their curtains.

Bad news travels fast I see. Which sucks for me.

He noticed that he felt hot, wet and his clothes felt cold. He was also shivering and coughing.

I hate being sick. I've been sick for two days and not told Al. I also hate sleeping in snow. I just hope I don't get worse than I already am.

Ed saw someone run down an alleyway. The person looked a lot like Al. Ed decided to follow the person just in case it might have been Al.

Al stop! Come on! Quit running...its painful.

Finally "Al" stops at the end of the alley.

As Ed runs down the alley he hears something fall over, something metallic. He looks over and sees that a trash can fell over. Then he saw a black cat run out from behind the trash can.

I thought something was gonna get me! I'm glad I was wrong!

Ed looked down the alley and saw that "Al" had stopped.

Yes, he stopped...Al help me I feel terrible.

Ed got closer to Al he felt worse. Before Ed reached "Al" his world became black and he didn't fell himself hit the snow. "Al" turned into a young woman (or man, hard to tell in English) with long, green, (or Black) stringy hair. The young woman (man) had a black piece of cloth tied around their head and also some around their upper arms. They were wearing a black shirt that stopped about midway down the torso, and what looked like a black skirt and open toed shoes with fingerless gloves. (That's a lot of black! If it's not right just tell me and I'll fix it) She (or he) had a red transmutation circle that looked like a lizard with wings and what looks like a triforce in the middle. This person's name was Envy. Then Envy bent down over Ed and carried him away.

Sloth will be every happy that I have ½ of what she wants. I'm sure his brother will figure out where he is and come looking for him, thought Envy.

This is my first fan fic. I hope you enjoyed it! SenSen2006