HI EVERYONE, THIS IS MY FIRST STORY I'VE EVER WRITTEN, IT'S ABOUT A YOUNG GIRL WHO WANTS TO BECOME A STORMTROOPER. I HOPE YOU LIKE IT

Chapter #1

Hi I'm Terra, I'm a rebel and so is family, but I hate being a rebel. Sometimes I think of running away to become a stormtrooper. But if I became a stormtrooper my own parents would try to kill me, unless I happen to get captured on purpose. My parents would never came for me if I did get captured.

Why would I want to become a stormtrooper you my ask, well I don't know, I just always thought they were so cool. Unlike rebels who are so boring and bossy. My mother and father fight for the rebellion and so do my two older brothers, I have four brothers and it feels like I have no connection with them.

My father never lets me hold a blaster, he says that I'm to young to have one. But my youngest brother is three years younger than me and he has his own blaster, ha, try to figure that one out. And my mother is no different, she never lets me go out by myself.

You see, stormtroopers patrol here once every week, so every time the stormtroopers patrol here I try to sneak out and go with them but my mother always locks the door so I can't get out that way. But one day we finally left to the market place the day the stormtroopers patrol here.

My parents must have forgotten that they come today. But something was different about today, today I knew I would become a cadet. There was only one problem, as soon as my parents saw the stormtroopers they grabbed me and started to run."We'll have to split up" said father.

"We can't split up, it's too dangerous, what if one of the kids get caught" said mother. "That's a risk we're going to have to make then, because we can't all get home if we're together like this" said father. All mother did was nod her head and look at my brothers.

"Dose everyone have a blaster " mother ask. All the boys nodded, and I nodded to knowing that this was my only chance to go with the stormtroopers. Everyone got there blasters out and when my father said go everyone ran off in different directions away from the stormtroopers. I stood were I was, waiting for the stormtroopers to come this way.

And it wasn't long before two stormtroopers came knocking on everyone's door. One of the stormtroopers walked past me. But as soon as the other one got close to me I walked out in front of him. I accidentally knocked him blaster out of his hands.

"Hay, watch were your going kid" the stormtrooper said. "I'm sorry I didn't mean to hit your blaster" I apologized. When he picked his blaster up he started to walk away, so I started to walk with him. He stopped and turned around and looked at me.

"Why are you following me kid, do you want me to take you home or something" ask the stormtroopers angrily."No, accidentally I want to become a stormtrooper, so that's why I'm following you" I said knowing that the stormtrooper might not object to that.

"What, why do you want to become a stormtrooper" he asked still sounding angry."My brothers don't like me and my parents don't even notice me sometimes" I wanted to say that my family were rebels but I didn't say anything about that.

"What are you, a rebel trying to make me take you back to our base so you can learn all our personal information" said the stormtrooper waiting for me to reply."No, but my parents and my brothers are rebels, and as I told you they don't care about me but maybe the empire will" I replied not saying a another word.

The stormtrooper grabbed me and started to walk backwards slowly, he was looking at something but what. I looked all around until I saw what the stormtrooper was looking at. It was Ben, my youngest brother. He had his blaster pointed at the stormtrooper and he looked at me."What were you doing talking to a stormtrooper, mothers' going to be mad at you now" Ben said still pointing the blaster at the stormtrooper.

The stormtrooper pointed his blaster at Ben, but he was looking at something else. Then Tack, my oldest brother came out from were he was hiding and pointed his blaster at the stormtrooper. "Yeah, aren't you supposed to be on your way home, I can't wait to mom that you were talking to a stormtrooper" Tack said laughing sort of evilly

The stormtrooper looked at me and then at my brothers again."Please don't let me go back to them" I whispered to the stormtrooper, I hope he doesn't let me go. The stormtrooper rapped his arm around my neck and pointed his blaster at my head.

"Don't worry I won't hurt you" the stormtrooper said. Ben and Tack walked out from behind the crates, their blasters were still pointed at the stormtrooper. The stormtrooper kept walking backwards, but faster than before, once he was far enough he started to shoot and Ben and Tack. Tack and Ben took cover behind some crates again.

The stormtrooper shot a couple more time then he turned around and started to run to the other troopers. I looked at one of markets and behind one of the crates I saw my parents with their blasters ready to shoot any stormtrooper that walked by.

So I run over to the stormtrooper and stopped him."Get away from me kid, before you get blasted to" the stormtrooper said pushing me out of the way. "No wait, stop" I yelled to the stormtrooper.

My mother and father jumped out for behind the crates. They started to shoot at the stormtrooper, but they missed him every time. "No wait, stop please" I pleaded. But they didn't stop, they just kept walking closer."surrender now you bucket head" my mother said. The stormtrooper put his blaster down and put his hands up.

My parents didn't seem to notice me, so I run over to the other stormtroopers."One of your troopers are captured by rebels, come with me" I said. I started to run back to the captured stormtrooper but none of the stormtroopers followed me, they just look at each other and shrugged.

"Why should we listen to you, your probably a rebel learning us into a trap" one of the stormtroopers said. They don't believe me, how can I make them listen to me. I thought for a minute then I had an idea. I run back to the captured stormtrooper and saw that his hands were tied behind his back and he was kneeling on the ground.

My parents were talking to Ben and Tack, so I walked over to the stormtrooper slowly. "Hay, I'm going to get you out of here okay, but I just need to know one thing" I whispered to the trooper. "what do you want to know kid" the stormtrooper said with a little bit of fear in his voice.

"I need to know your name" I ask. The stormtrooper stiffened. "We don't use real names, we use code names" he said. What's a code name, I thought stormtroopers were just people in white and black suits."Well, what's your code name" I ask. The stormtrooper said nothing for a minute then he started to talk again.

"LSP-17" he said. I new that that was his code name, so I run back to the other stormtroopers. "Come on, what are you sitting here for when LSP-17 needs you to help him" I said hoping that they would come with me."Who did you say needs our help" ask one of the stormtroopers.

"LSP-17" I replied. Once I said his code name all the stormtroopers followed me. I stopped and walked behind some crates just a couple feat away from the captured stormtrooper. The other stormtroopers followed me.

They got there blasters ready to fire. I looked at the stormtroopers and started to walk up to my parents and brothers."Where did you go to" Tack ask me. I was ready to say that I want going to get the stormtroopers but I kept my mouth shut. "Well are you going to answer your brother or not" my mother said.

Before I could reply the stormtroopers jumped out for behind the crates and started shooting at my parents and brothers. One of the stormtroopers run over to the captured stormtrooper and untied him. The stormtrooper picked up his blaster and started shooting alongside his men.

All my brothers split up including my mother and father and they started shooting at the stormtroopers. Ben hit one of them in the leg and my father hit another one in the arm. I walked over to them but I stayed out of my parents sight.

I run closer to them, I crouched down so my parents wouldn't see me, but the stormtroopers will. Once I got close enough to them one of them started to talk."Grab the girl and fallback" so one of the stormtroopers grabbed me and all the stormtroopers fell back.

My mother and father started to run after them. So I started to pretend to try to get away from the stormtroopers."Stop moving around kid" the stormtrooper said to me. Finally I'm about to get off this planet, and what's the best part about that, is that I'm getting off this planet in a tie fighter.

Once my parents stopped chasing the stormtroopers and turned around and left, I stopped moving around. The stormtrooper that was holding me looked back, and when he saw that my parents weren't chasing them anymore he let me go. I saw some kind of ship but it wasn't a tie fighter, it was a imperial shuttle.

"Come on kid, get in" one of the stormtroopers said. I turned around to look at my home for the last time. I took a deep breath and turned around and walked into the shuttle.

SO THAT'S THE FIRST CHAPTER, I HOPE YOU LIKED IT, THIS IS A REMAKE OF MY FIRST CHAPTER, MY FIRST FIRST CHAPTER WAS KINDA, TERRIBLE SO I REMADE IT, LET ME KNOW IF YOU LIKED IT, PEACE OUT ;-)