Hello! So, hear me out for a second. My Immortal. The WORST fanfic I have ever read. What if we made it good? I know what you're thinking, 'How would that even work? Is there even hope for that monstrosity?' Probably not. But I was reading it today because I've been hearing so much about it and I got the overwhelming urge to clean it. I want to fix up the spelling errors and fix the redundancy and the huge paragraphs filled with nothing but makeup descriptions and clothes.
Hold your ground! Hold your ground! I see in your eyes the same fear that would take the heart of me. A day may come when the courage of men fails, when we forsake our friends and break all bonds of fellowship, but it is not this day. An hour of wolves and shattered shields, when the age of men comes crashing down, but it is not this day! This day we fight! By all that you hold dear on this good Earth, I bid you stand, Men of the West! We will fix this story!
