Sora and Roxas Friends or Foes

Hey everyone this is my first fic so be easy on me please?

Roxas Thoughts

"…." Conversation between 2 or more people

Here's my story

Hello everyone my name is Roxas and this is my story. I remember it like it was yesterday…well it sort of was yesterday really. I had just transferred to Destiny Heights High School. Yeah I am the new guy in town but anyways when you're the new guy at school things don't turn out the way you plan especially if you're bi.

"Stay on the ground it's where you belong" A platinum haired kid said. "Yeah it's where you belong!" Another kid shouted. "Hey let's get out of here someone's coming!" The platinum haired kid said. The kids ran away. "Oh my gosh are you okay?!" A platinum blonde girl exclaimed " I don't think he is Naminѐ" A red haired girl said. "Well don't just stand there help me get him up!" Naminѐ exclaimed. "Okay geez who put a bee in your undies? Ha-ha." The red girl laughed while hoisting the semi conscious Roxas off his feet.

*Later on at Naminѐ's House"*

Where am I… Last time I remember I was attacked by that one dude." "Oh Kairi I think our little house guest is awake!" Naminѐ shouted. "Hey sleepy head you sure took an awful beating out there you know!" Kairi said in a sing-song voice." Oh Kairi be nice. Hello I'm Naminѐ what is your name?" Naminѐ asked full of glee. "Oh I'm sorry my name is Roxas…Roxas Strife I'm sort of new to this town… and school."

Ok you guys I know that this is a terrible terrible story so can you give me some honest advice please.