So, howdy do? XD enjoy this short story, and tell me if it is good. Enjoy! (My first story, go ahead and correct mistakes.)
One afternoon, three teen girls were walking down the street, to the candy store. Each one of them had a very special talent. Taffy was able to sprout pink wings and fly, Mischis was able to paint a beautiful picture in a split second, and Skuller was able to sprout white wings and fly, and could play volleyball like a pro.
Come on! Let's go! Hurry! I want candy! Ooh! Especially cotton candy!" Taffy said over-enthusiastically.
"Why can't we just fly?" Skuller whined.
"Because we can't be seen using our powers." Mischis replied annoyed. "And besides! I would like to take a moment to sit down and draw this pretty view of the sun rising!" Mischis said as she gazed in wonder at the sun rising over the horizon. She got out her sketch book and sketched it. In the meantime, Taffy was sneaking away. She turned to see Skuller standing over Mischis, gazing at her beautiful sketch. She took that chance and sprouted her pink wings and bolted all the way to the candy store. She entered the road-side shop and waved to the clerk. She was his regular, or the one who is referred as the 'bill payer' seeing as she spent a lot of money at the candy store.
"Hi Taffy. So, another cotton candy, I presume?"
"You guessed it!" Taffy replied as she grabbed one and paid the clerk. "Rainbow! My favorite!" She then turned to see something that caught her eye on one of the shelves. "What's that?" She asked the clerk.
"It's one of 'dim genuine pony mirrors. One of a kind, I say. Has both wings and a horn, with two ponies on the side."
"Hmm… I'll take it!" Taffy said as she handed the clerk some money and lugged it out of the store. Now… How to get this home… Taffy thought.
"I know!" She said aloud. She then lugged it to her tree house, where she keeps her candy stash and old items. She set it down right by the window and admired herself for a second. She then turned to go tell her friends where she had been, but tripped on a candy box of nerds and fell on the mirror. She went right through the mirror and went to another place, another dimension…
So, how did i do? Yes, i fixed the errors. YAY! hah i figured it out! Well, seeya later, alligator! (if I get enough reviews and suggestions i will keep going)
XD, nerds... yummy...
